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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
4~The Impersonator

Omkara's POV:
Today again she messaged me and it was something about friendship and it was just a line, I too wrote my stupid poem which made her shocked, she addresses me as her childhood friend Shlok, God knows if this Shlok fellow exists or not. I told her I m not Shlok but Omkara Oberoi but this mysterious girl called herself Deepika Padukone and laughed. What's my fault if I m not Shlok? I talked to her rudely and she again addressed me as Shlok and said you used to call me your lucky charm.

If I was Shlok only then I would've remembered, I even sent her a voice message to stop harrassing me by calling me someone who I m not again and again. But oh no she said that Shlok was a good mimicker as well and that even in my opinion it's like a childhood friend should be a friend only in childhood and with that she bid me bye. I felt good and bad both at the same time. Good that she won't irritate me again, bad that I broke a girl's heart. My heart skipped a beat and my mind told me to back out, but my sixth sense told me to keep texting, this is someone of your own.

End of POV.

O~ "oh toh lucky charm, finally tumne mujhe pakad hi liya han, main hi tumhara Shlok hoon, sorry ."

(Translation:
O~ "Oh so lucky charm, u finally caught me, I am your Shlok only, sorry ")

Delivered

Omkara himself was too confused that what overcame him that he said like that but just one song played in his mind as he sent the message.

~Kuchh aisa hi ab mehsoos dil ko horaha hai, barso'n ke puranay zakhm pe marham laga sa hai~


Omkara felt a relief as he said that, it was as if Gauri was someone of his own whom he lost long ago but just got now. He laid back his head closing his eyes.

Gauri's POV:
I didn't thought he will message me again after I said that but oh my God, did he just message me? He also can't stay away from me. I literally jumped in joy. Even if he's not Shlok, he's ready to act as Shlok for me? Seriously? He is so much soft hearted that he can't see anyone in pain. I love you God for such a sister and for such happiness you gave me, thank you thank you thank you. My heart thumped louder and louder, as if dancing with happiness.

End of POV.

G~ "Sacha dost wohi hota hai jo doosre dost ko dard mein nahi dekh sakta, yaad hai main jab bhi roti thi to tum mere liye gana gaatay thay, tere Dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai, aaj to ye saabit bhi hogaya hai, I got my childhood friend back, shukar tumne ab to sach bola jab tum pakday gaye "

(Translation:
G~ "True friend is the one who can't see the other friend in pain, u remember whenever I used to cry, u used to sing for me, tere Dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hai, today it got proved as well, I got my childhood friend back, at least u said the truth when u got caught )

Delivered

O~ "han mujhe nahi to or kisko yaad hoga, dying to meet you lucky charm ."

(Translation:
O~ "yes if I won't remember then who will remember, dying to meet you lucky charm ")

Delivered

G~"tum Mumbai mein ho kya? "

(Translation:
G~ "Are you in Mumbai? )

Delivered

O~ "nahi."

(Translation:
O~ "No")

Delivered

G~"toh phir kahan ho?"

(Translation:
G~ "So then where are you?")

Delivered

Omkara got confused on what to say now.

Omkara to himself: phass gaya na jhoot bol kar, or chura gannay, ab Kya bolega tu

(Translation:
Omkara to himself: got caught by telling a lie, now what will u say)

O~"wahin jahan pe hona chahiye."

(Translation:
O~ "There only where I should be")

Delivered

G~ "aww bechare ki yaadasht chali gayi hai shayad "

(Translation:
G~ "aww maybe poor baby's memory is lost ")

G~ "maybe I can refresh your memory."

G~"hum us waqt milay thay jab main 6 saal ki thi or tum 7 saal ke, phir jab main 16 ki thi or tum 17 ke thay to main Gurdaspur chhor kar Mumbai shift hogayi thi apni behen or Mom dad ke saath, uske baad 2 din pehle humari baat Hui thi."

(Translation:
G~ "We both met when I was 6 and you were 7, then when I was 16 and you were of 17, I went leaving Gurdaspur with my sister and parents and shifted to Mumbai, after that, we have talked to each other two days ago)

Delivered

O~ "wohi to main bol raha hoon ke jab main Shlok hoon hi nahi to mujhe yaad kaise hoga? Ab to tumne mujhse test bhi kar liya "

(Translation:
O~ "that's what I m saying that when I m not Shlok then how will I remember? Now you tested me as well ")

Delivered

G~ "yeah right kiun ke bachpan ke dost ke saath to bachpan mein hi maza ata hai, bachpan guzar jaye to bhaar mein gayi dosti or bhaar mein gayi vo yaadein, right? "

(Translation:
G~ "yeah right because fun can be done with a childhood friend only in childhood, when childhood is over so forget the friendship and forget the memories, right? ")

Delivered

O~ "kon si yaadein? Kon sa bachpan? Kon si dost? Maine khudko Shlok isliye kaha taakay jab tum mujhe bachpan ka kuchh puchho to main galat jawab doon or prove kardoon ke main sach mein vo nahi hoon jo tum soch rahi ho "

(Translation:
O~ "which memories? Which childhood? Which friend? I impersonated Shlok so that when u ask me anything about childhood so I answer wrong and prove that I m not Shlok ")

Delivered

G~ "yeah right tum Shlok ho hi nahi saktay, phir kahan se ayi tumhare pas Shlok jaisi aawaz? Kahan se aya tumhe mujh par rehem jab maine kaha main ja rahi hoon? Kahan se aya uske jaisa sab kuchh? Kiun tumko dil hua ke tum mujhe rok lo or jaane na do? Isliye kiun ke humari dosti sachee hai lekin tumhe mazaak karne ki aadat hai "

(Translation:
G~ "yeah right u can't be Shlok, then how come u have his voice? From where did u got sympathy for me when I said I m leaving? From where did u get his everything? Why your heart asked u to stop me and to not let me go? Because our friendship is true but u are habitual of joking and fooling around and beating around the bush ")

Delivered

Omkara was too much confused on what to say now. Then he got an idea that he will irritate her the same way she irritates him by songs.

O~"Kabhi na sukoon aya, kabhi na karaar aya, humko jabse tumpe pyaar aya "

Delivered

G~"agaya na bhagad Billa line par, humari dosti ka slogan yaad hai na? Teri meri banti nahi lekin tere bagair chalti bhi nahi "

(Translation:
G~ "oh so the fierceful cat is now on it's path, u remember the slogan of our friendship? We both don't get along together but we both also can't live without each other ")

Delivered

O~ "God, lucky charm, we fight like kids "

Delivered

G~ "hmm lekin pehle tumne itni baar mujhe kiun kaha ke tum Shlok nahi ho or Omkara Oberoi ho? Tumko pata hai na mujhe singers nahi pasand "

(Translation:
G~ "hmm but why u said so many times that you aren't Shlok but Omkara Oberoi? You know very well that I don't like singers ")

Delivered

Omkara was taken aback by her hatred towards singers as she was always sending him songs.

O~"jhoot.. bilkul jhoot"

(Translation:
O~ "lie.. obviously a lie ")

O~"jo gaane likh likh kar bhejay, vo bhala singers ko kiun hate karega "

(Translation:
O~ "the one who writes songs on text messages, why will he/she hate singers ")

Delivered

G~ "gaane pasand hain, unko gaanay walay nahi pasand"

(Translation:
G~ "I love songs but not the ones who sing them")

Delivered

O~ "Oh "

O~ "but what about Omkara Oberoi?"

Delivered

G~ "Omkara Oberoi kon? Vo she male ? Seriously? Ladki jaise lambay baal or pony baandh leta hai, kinner hai kya? Dil to karta hai stage pe ja kar uske liye gaaun ke Omu tu to bewafa hai Omu tu to bewafa hai, jeevan ki kaali ghata hai, Omu tu to bewafa hai "

(Translation:
G~ "Omkara Oberoi who? That she male? Long hair like a girl and ties a ponytail, is he a kinner? Sometimes I really want to go on stage and sing for him like Omu tu to bewafa hai Omu tu to bewafa hai jeevan ki kaali ghata hai Omu tu to bewafa hai )

Delivered

Omkara was once again taken aback by his words for him, but he laughed it off and now it was obvious for him to impersonate Shlok.

O~ "aray wah tum to baray achhay gaanay bana leti ho haan "

(Translation:
O~ "oh wow you make really good songs ha ")

Delivered

G~ "oh really? Chalo ek game kheltay hain, main sher ki ek line bolungi, tum doosri khud bana kar bolna.. fine? "

(Translation:
G~ "oh really? Then let's play a game, I will say one line, u say the other one making it up by yourself.. fine? ")

Delivered

O~ "Fine."

Delivered

G~ "Omu tu to bewafa hai, jeevan ki kaali ghata hai, tu third line bol "

Delivered

Omkara felt as if a bomb fell on him as she asked him to joke on himself only.

What will Omkara do now?


Edited by salley145 - 6 years ago
sharda_123 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
Awesome superb fabulous update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Like om I am also wondering if shlok exists or not.lked om feeling guilty 4 breaking gauri's heart.the sentence if he was shlok he wudve remembered it was striking.liked om feeling that gauri is someone he lost long ago n got back now.om saying that he is shlok n gauri getting impressed with him more n more as just 2 make her happy he lied that he is shlok was sweet.om saying that he pretended to be shlok so that she will catch his lies n it gets proved that he is not shlok.oh.but gauri cant leave him like that.friendship slogan is nice.gauri saying that she doesn't like singers n om's reaction was funny.gauri making fun of om's hair style n calling him kinnar was funny.the last game part was funny.perfect pics

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Interesting and so Fabulous Chapter
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Thanks for OM pictures...
gauri knows he is trying to keep her happy...
beautiful update
thanks for the pm..


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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
Awesome update dear👏!!! Om felt bad as he broke a girl's heart... Om's point of view... Gauri in d mission of troubling Om more... Om himself restarted testing... Happy Gauri... Om said he was trying to prove that he is not Shlok... But Gauri's sudden n teasing replies n questions made him mute... She explained Om as a she male..m... Shayari queen!!! Gauri's game... Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Thanks for the PM... N sorry for late...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
5~Omkara Sings For Gauri

Omkara's POV:
When I messaged her to stop her, she called me a true friend and that I can't see her in pain and she told me some things about Shlok. Poor girl, if she misses him so much, why doesn't she go back to Gurdaspur and meet him? Eventually while impersonating this Shlok fellow I was nearly caught. Then she told me some more stuff and I admitted I m not him and then she got rude and sad both at the same time, of course I had no option other than to admit I m not him.

But it seemed like she has too many proofs that I m him so I simply wrote a song. I continued impersonating him and that's when in the middle, she revealed she doesn't likes singers from which I was taken aback completely. I asked about myself and she made a funny joke on me and we started to play a game in which she said two lines of a song and I had to continue in my own words and oh God, she asked me to continue the same song which was like Omu tu to bewafa hai jeevan ki kaali ghata hai. I was so f**ked up by that.

(Well this isn't actually a poem but a fun I made of a song of Dhinchak Pooja which was Aafreen tu to bewafa hai )


End of POV.

G~"Omu tu to bewafa hai, jeevan ki kaali ghata hai, tu agay continue kar "

Delivered

O~ "Har kadam pe uski fatah hai "

(Translation:
O~ "on his every step, he wins ")

Delivered

G~ "Woh ek number ka ghadda hai "

(Translation:
G~ "he is number one donkey ")

Delivered

Omkara giggled as she called him a donkey.

O~ "Ganju uska har ghadda hai "

(Translation:
O~ "his every donkey is bald ")

Delivered

Gauri laughed at his cuteness.

G~ "Larkiyon ka pagal pana hai "

(Translation:
G~ "he is girls madness ")

Delivered

O~ "Larkiyon ko pasand bepannah hai "

(Translation:
O~ "he is liked by girls very much ")

Delivered

G~ "Dimag uska hogaya fana hai "

(Translation:
G~ "his brain is almost finished ")

Delivered

O~ "koi bloody fool banta jaraha hai "

(Translation:
O~ "someone is becoming a bloody fool ")

Delivered

G~ "or phool bhi deraha hai "
(G~ "and giving a flower as well ")

G~ "vo mental asylum ka sardar hai"
(G~ "he is the biggest mental in the mental asylum")

G~ "vo dimaag ka bara kharidaar hai"
(G~ "he is the biggest buyer of brain")

Delivered

O~ "tu gaano'n ka ratta maar hai "

Delivered

G~ "tujhe Omkara se pari maar hai "

(G~ "you've been beaten up by Omkara ")

Delivered

O~ "tujhko gaano'n ka bukhaar hai "
(O~ "you have a fever of songs ")

Delivered

G~ "raatein katni beshumaar hai"
(G~ "nights like this have to be spent many more )

Delivered

O~ "aayi gaano'n ki bahaar hai "
(O~ "spring has come of songs ")

O~ "Insomnia se hui tu khwaar hai"
(O~ "you're troubled by insomnia")

Delivered

G~ "cheaters pe ata mujhko khaar hai"
(G~ "I get angry on cheaters")

Delivered

O~ "tu bohat hi tezz dhaar hai "
(O~ "you are as sharp as a knife ")

Delivered

G~ "Mujhse hui teri haar hai"
(G~ "you are defeated by me")

Delivered

O~ "tu aasman ka cute sa star hai "
(O~ "you're the sky's cute star ")

Delivered

Gauri felt good to hear this.

G~ "tu mujhse itna kyun far hai "
(G~ "why are you so far away from me ")

Delivered

O~ "katilana ekdum tera waar hai "
(O~ "your attacks are very murderous )

Delivered

G~ "tu Mera sab se pyara yaar hai "
(G~ "you're my most dearest friend ")

Delivered

O~ "Omkara bara superstar hai"
(O~ "Omkara is a very big superstar")

Delivered

G~ "singers pe ek kaala dhaag hai, gano se uske nikalti munh se jhaag hai, sun kar uska gana har koi gaya bhaag hai, vo bohat hi bara naag hai, uska zehreela har raag hai, nahi araha agay mera tyaag hai "

(G~ "he is a stain on singers, by listening his songs I get lather in my mouth [as if consumed poison], by listening to his song everyone has run away, he is a very big snake, his every song is poisonous, don't know further I back out ")

Delivered

Omkara literally laughed at her song.

O~ "(old rhythm) neend arahi mujhko beshumaar hai, sona mujhko zaar zaar hai, good night neend ka Aya pahaar hai, waqt mera hua tum par nisaar hai "
(O~ "I m very much sleepy, I want to sleep very badly, good night the mountain of sleep has come, my time has been sacrificed for you")

Delivered

G~ "hahahahaha good night"

Delivered

That night, Omkara and Gauri had a great company with each other. They both slept with a big smile on their faces. Next morning, Gauri woke up and as usual she went for a bath. Without singing her day got incomplete. She laid in the bathtub after the bath.

"Kaisa hai rishta tera mera, be chehra, phir bhi kitna gehra, ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se, kho jayein, khona chahein humse, faasla tu mere Ishq ka, ab dil se juda na ho, teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan, mujhko bhaaein galliyan teri galliyan, Teri galliyan, galliyan teri galliyan, yoon hi tarpaave galliyan teri galliyan."


"Di, have you slept inside?" Anika asked from outside. "Anu," Gauri said sadly and Anika laughed. "Di when will you come out?" she asked. "Tu jitni baar poochhegi na, uske 5 minutes increase karle, relaxation increased," (No matter how many times you ask, increase it's five minutes, relaxation increased) Gauri replied and laughed. "Relaxation nahi, love, jaldi ajao, lunch ke time pe breakfast karogi kya?" (Not relaxation but love, come fast, will u have breakfast at lunch time?)

"Ajaungi ajaungi behna, tu ja," (will come, will come siso, u go) Gauri said smiling to herself like a mad person. She got out of the bathtub and wiped her body and got out in a bathrobe. She saw a photo montage of her and Omkara on the wall in front of her which was behind her bed. "Hmm, so this was what my little sister wanted me to show in actual, great work, you've got a talent," she said smilingly and sat in front of the mirror and dried her hair and got ready in cream color midi dress and smiled at herself cheerfully.

She took her phone and decided to drop a message to her one and only crush.

G~ "Good morning Shlok, duffer uth ja yaar, subah hogayi maamu "

Delivered

She took her clutch and went out of her room, she saw Anika sitting in front of the television and sat beside her. "Hey little siso, nice montage, you've got a talent," she said and hugged her. "Haan vo sab to theek hai, dekho TV mein kya araha hai," (yeah yeah leave all that, look what's coming in telivision) Anika said and she turned to telivision. It was weekend day and today was the time for Omkara's talk show. She blushed.

"Hello fans and friends, today I m going to tell you something new about my life," Omkara spoke on the telivision giving butterfly feeling to Gauri. "Even though it's a talk show, I want to sing even today, so..3..2..1..go," he said.

Anjaane ho tum, jo begaane ho tum
Jo pehchaane lagte ho kyun
Tum gehri neendon me jab soye soye ho
Toh mujhme jagte ho kyun

Jab tujhko paata hai
Dil muskurata hai
Kya tujh se hai waasta
Kya tujh me dhoondu main
Kya tujh se chaahu main
Kya kya hai tujhme mera
Jaanu na main tujhme mera hissa hai kya
Par ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagaa..


Edited by salley145 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
felt nice wen u updated it after a long time

1. ha ha.gauri asked om to repeat the song.auri calling him donkey n om smiling was cute.ayri asking y om is away from her n om replying that her attacks r muderous is funny.

2. He is a stain...back out..so funny

3. After bath too gauri is in d bath tub singing.ha ha.cute aniri scene.om singing on talk sow n gauri enjoying it was sweet.perfect pics


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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Awesome update dear!!! Om's point of view... A chit chat with Gauri... Om too started liking Gauri's talk... Aww RiKara music game... Anika's surprise for Gauri... AniRi moments... Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Thanks for the PM... Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
Beautiful Chapter

The song Om sings for Gauri was just beautiful

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