Shivika SS- 'Untamed Obsession '- Redux- updated 2 Oct- p

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sunita_raj

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Nice update 👍🏼

All your updates make me 😳

😆 😆

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

wow so anika is moving out and shivaay is trying to control his heart

hehe good luck shivaay

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anamika_writes

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: SaritaMSK
Shivay went to Mallika in despair and I am the one who is feeling jealous. Was he that close😭
Jokes apart, the premise for untamed obsession seems to have been set up in this update. How it pans out would be interesting to witness. My prediction is... he is going to haul her against him, kiss her to his heart's desire in this rain and carry her caveman's style back to his home and then the reality will sink as to what is he doing

good luck for you presentation. come back soon

Hey, Sarita!

Always nice to see you around.

Oh jeez...jealously will only be highlighted for SSO here...

Anika here is least demanding or possessive forget about jealously.

Like the previous eight updates.😆

But the obsession will surely become clearer and visible.

You have the password to the world I go into to wrote don't you? ;)

P.S

Today's presentation was good. Thanks for your wishes and thoughtfulness😳

Edited by anamika.writes - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sunita_raj
Nice update 👍🏼

All your updates make me 😳

😆 😆

Haha..

Thanks Sunita! 😳

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anamika_writes

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
wow so anika is moving out and shivaay is trying to control his heart
hehe good luck shivaay

That's salt on Shivaay's wound😆

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anamika_writes

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Update on next page.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Sarita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Beautiful update.

It seems that Shivay for once, let his guards down and accepted what he feels...rather what he understands he feels.

He acknowledges that he doesn't want to let her go, but he himself has no idea why.

I cant help but feel bad for the girl here. There seem to be no solace for her anytime.

When he said i was mutual..even i was mentally screaming. NOOO...not after the first one!! Glad she spoke once about how he is forcing her.

Waiting for the next installment.

I somewhere came across a mention of wattpad on one of your threads.

I honestly do not understand its working. Every time I have typed Shivika in there I have come across.. poorly framed, horribly worded childish drafts which are weirdly enough ..very celebrated there. So what is it that I am missing there?

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anamika_writes

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: SaritaMSK
Beautiful update.
It seems that Shivay for once, let his guards down and accepted what he feels...rather what he understands he feels.
He acknowledges that he doesn't want to let her go, but he himself has no idea why.

I cant help but feel bad for the girl here. There seem to be no solace for her anytime.

When he said i was mutual..even i was mentally screaming. NOOO...not after the first one!! Glad she spoke once about how he is forcing her.

Waiting for the next installment.

I somewhere came across a mention of wattpad on one of your threads.

I honestly do not understand its working. Every time I have typed Shivika in there I have come across.. poorly framed, horribly worded childish drafts which are weirdly enough ..very celebrated there. So what is it that I am missing there?

Thank You Sarita.

He knows he understands he is different... He is untamed...he loses control... Exactly the WHY!

Hope you enjoy her character as well soon.

I m trying to somehow change this. Many fanfics romanticize this forced behavior. So I m being careful not yo get there..and show that it is not romantic. No, when someone forces over you even if you love that person it is not romance.

Yes I m.very much there, maybe. a little more than here.

Are you a member there?

As for your judgement I can't deny that. I keep to writing ishqbaaz fics there. This place has way better honestly on terms of reads. I have been a silent reader for a long time so I know. It's sad that most writers don't update..:(

Even content wise I feel mad at times at certain books. A book where he rapes her ...and comments are, I don't want her to forgive easily. ?? I was beyond shocked. Like? To add there was so much domestic violence. Mind affecting to call it a love story. Anyway too much said.

Let me know if you are a member, I will try getting to you there or if not I shall give you links if you would want. I anyway am updating here for a few of you, who are so supportive and encouraging. :)

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Sarita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: anamika.writes

Thank You Sarita.
He knows he understands he is different... He is untamed...he loses control... Exactly the WHY!
Hope you enjoy her character as well soon.
I m trying to somehow change this. Many fanfics romanticize this forced behavior. So I m being careful not yo get there..and show that it is not romantic. No, when someone forces over you even if you love that person it is not romance.

Yes I m.very much there, maybe. a little more than here.

Are you a member there?

As for your judgement I can't deny that. I keep to writing ishqbaaz fics there. This place has way better honestly on terms of reads. I have been a silent reader for a long time so I know. It's sad that most writers don't update..:(
Even content wise I feel mad at times at certain books. A book where he rapes her ...and comments are, I don't want her to forgive easily. ?? I was beyond shocked. Like? To add there was so much domestic violence. Mind affecting to call it a love story. Anyway too much said.

Let me know if you are a member, I will try getting to you there or if not I shall give you links if you would want. I anyway am updating here for a few of you, who are so supportive and encouraging. :)

"Many fanfics romanticize this forced behavior"

Tell me about it.

In all honesty, it is such a put-off. If the guy is rich and handsome, everything is allowed apparently as per fiction writers. Reminds me of a joke I read somewhere that fifty shades of grey was romantic only because the guy is a millionaire. That actually is true. If you are Shivaay, everything you do is romance. If you are Daksh, the same behaviour is molestation. Ironical much? I know one has to keep in mind what people want and that is completely okay, but I think in many places this can be dealt with more caution and sanity.

I love the job you are doing with Shivaay here. Nowhere his actions are being justified. I love this honestly. He himself is grappling with his darkness. It is important to understand the repercussions of one's actions. He is doing a decent job trying to pin-point WHY? Guess it is not going to be an easy journey there.

I like the overall FF reader/writer junta at IF. On incountable times, I have stumbled across some wonderful pieces here that deserve to be published and made popular in the world. And when you occasionally stumble across something that good, you can't ask for more. I usually look forward to finished stories more as I am a sucker for closure. With the dwindling number of writers here, I decided to explore Wattpad. I was honestly scarred for life. I did not know what was wrong with my filters. Apparently, all the highly rated stories had the same plot. Wrongful confinement, rape and the apparent Stockholm syndrome which the writer sells as LOVE. Even if I ignore the horrible English and struggle to make out what was written, this is totally unacceptable. What followed such updates was an obnoxiously framed demand for likes/comments. That is not classy. And then comes weird comments from people who apparently love this setup and want more of the torture. So yes my maiden stint at wattpad has been, horrible. Period.

But when I saw you discussing being there, I thought maybe I was looking for wrong stuff. May be there are some beautiful gems hidden deep in the recesses somewhere. I would definitely want to take a shot there.

About the links...Bring it on in case you have any recommendations. I would love to check out.

And yes thank you for sticking here even after dismal numbers. It means a lot.🤗