Dillagi-----A Rikara SS Ch 12 14/06 *complete*

aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

16

Posted: 7 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm
Awesome update
Loved it
Thank you so much for the pm

Thank you so much😊

Reply

Quote

aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

16

Posted: 7 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
Oh m god I am crying 😭😭
Felt Like Watched A Whole Bollywood action movie 👏
Fantastic Di the way u had written I could visualize everything 👏
Omkie be back soon 😭

Arohi...🤗🤗

I didn't want to make you cry...I'm sorry!

Let's see whether he comes back or not

Reply

Quote

uma_dey

@uma_dey

Explorer

5

Posted: 7 years ago

#293

Finally she was about to open up to him but Kali made a come back...the action is what I imagine for Om and kali face off but you give a bonus with showing What can Gauri do when it comes to her Omkaraji's safety...he is injured and doesn't come back in senses after 36 hrs..does he slept into coma?...but whatever it is I know she will bring back her jatadhari...

1

Reply

Quote

anonymous15

@anonymous15

Explorer

5

Posted: 7 years ago

#294

wow..this was very good...you have described each scene beautifully..loved it

1

Reply

Quote

2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

43

Posted: 7 years ago

#295

terrific update

thanks for the pm

continue soon

1

Reply

Quote

Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

20

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#296

I'm sho sholly phor being late. 😛 Maafi ? 😳

And I'm too shocked reading this chapter !! 😲 Yeh kya tha ?! 😲

I'm speechless behen.

It was outstanding n mind blasting !

Kali came back to take away Gauri from her Omkaraji. He how could he, when Omkie was there for her ?!

I loved the way you've written Omkara's uneasiness while Gauri was missing. He could feel if she is in trouble.

The action sequence gave me goosebumps.

I loved the way Gauri tried to stay strong before Kali. My dabang chiraiyya. ❤️

Pleej tell me Omkie will be fine. Pleej ? 😭

Can I get the update already ?!

2

Reply

Quote

aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

16

Posted: 7 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: uma_dey
Finally she was about to open up to him but Kali made a come back...the action is what I imagine for Om and kali face off but you give a bonus with showing What can Gauri do when it comes to her Omkaraji's safety...he is injured and doesn't come back in senses after 36 hrs..does he slept into coma?...but whatever it is I know she will bring back her jatadhari...

Yeah...Kaali is back😕😕

Which couple doesn't have fights? but those fights strengthen your relationship and the same has happened with om and gauri, this misunderstanding has given them an insight of what the shortcomings were...

Despite all the repudiation and angst, gauri loves her omkaraji and can't bear anyone laying their eye or weapon on him, she can be a parvati for him and she can be kaali or durga as well

Let's wait and see what happens next

Reply

Quote

aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

16

Posted: 7 years ago

#298