Rikara: To Serve and to Protect | Part 12 - Pg 36 |05/18/2018| - Page 25

Wow! Wow! Wow! I am a sucker for thrillers and is this a thriller or what?! I especially like the fact that Gauri is no damsel in distress. As soon as she realizes the situation she is in, she is ready to take action, without a moment of fear or hesitation. You go girl!

As for Jahnvi, you've nailed the psychopathic nature of her character so well. No regrets, no chip in the armor. But Om isn't fooled and he gets what he wants!

An amazing chapter yet again and I'm really excited to see what you have in store for us next!

awesome update loved it.

I was having goose bumps while reading it..

Best story ever

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Wow!! This one was no less than a brilliant thriller fiction! Jhanvi! She is such an evil.. And gauri has somehow escaped? Or is it another trap? Can't wait to read more..

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

This was an awesome update

Gauri had escaped ? that's gud

Jhanvi such a disgusting women 🤢

Loved it

Originally posted by: lourel24

outstanding. gauri has escaped . thumbs up for that. Kali being in hospital worked for her I gueas. jhanvi she is one evil women .it would be fun to read how the ever manipulating jhanvi realizes she had been manipulated herself. excited. update soon.

Originally posted by: aayushi1

I hope gauri doesn't fall back into trouble again

Jhanvi is such an evil lady but like they say goodness triumphs over evil, so will it here...

Omkara got out the detail cleverly...

Waiting to see what happens next

Originally posted by: OoViVioO

This story of yours is just so freaking GRIPPING! I just can't believe Jhanvi...and Gauri escaped...continue soon! Thanks for a long chapter.

Originally posted by: RestlessWriter

Wow! Wow! Wow! I am a sucker for thrillers and is this a thriller or what?! I especially like the fact that Gauri is no damsel in distress. As soon as she realizes the situation she is in, she is ready to take action, without a moment of fear or hesitation. You go girl!

As for Jahnvi, you've nailed the psychopathic nature of her character so well. No regrets, no chip in the armor. But Om isn't fooled and he gets what he wants!

An amazing chapter yet again and I'm really excited to see what you have in store for us next!