T & T Tales! (Rikara) PART 2-pg 7[Damaged.. but Healing.]

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: devildiva21
Beautifully written...
Omg her tormentor is here... ajay 😲 now what will happen
Can't wait to know
Loved the way you took forward the story

Thank you so much for liking the update, dear.😳😳
Yeahhh, Ajay is here. What Poorva decides that is going to happen. She is the concluding writer of this story.😛😛
Thanks again from appreciating my work. I am also excited for the next .😃😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious
Wow.. very well written.. the flow from the previous chapter was kept intact.. thank you.. scary ending...
Waiting for the conclusion...

Thank you so much for the appreciation, dear.😃😃
I am glad that you liked the update and found it nice in flow. 😛😛
But why saying Thank You? Shouldn't I be the one saying same.😉😉
Ending is indeed scary.🥱🥱
I am also waiting for the next.😳😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: AhamyTed
Woaaah !! This actually went in an other direction...much away from IB ... unpredicted ! But well done !👏
It didn't seem as though 2 different writer's had written this up !
The flow was perfect ! And I loved how intriguing this was ⭐️

Ajay creep 🤢...how the hell did he land up here now ? Lots of questions🤔...!
Now I'll have to wait for the third

Perfectly written though😃👏

Yepp, it definitely went in some different direction. Blame my lack of knowledge of RiKara's exact story. I know only names of the villains and a bit of their deeds. But that knowledge wasn't offering any help to me. So, I changed that in an Alternative Universe. 😆😆

@bold: For me, this is part of the comment is really special. In short, it feels like achievement. 😛😛
Ajay is here. I am equally clueless about the questions you asked. The concluding writer will answer them with the next update.😃😃
Thanks again for the appreciation, dear.😳😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
Fantastic Poorvika di
The thought process of both Gauri and Omkara were well handled
The Poor Girl had to go through so much yet she was strong
Strong enough to fight her demons yet her past comes in between when she tries to accept her present
And Omkara My Respect for him is rising
And Finally a Cliffhanger 👏👏

ps: just a request when the other writer ends the story
if u could post the whole version of the plot u imagined later 😊

Thank you so much for liking this part, dear.I was quite anxious about this part.😳😳
I am glad that you liked Gauri and Omkara's point of view.😛😛
Yeahhh, that was the crux of the story. She had faced much yet she was stood strong but there is always another side of the picture. I tried explaining that hidden side of Gauri in addition to her strength.😊😊
Every man with this kind of understanding needs to be respected. 😃😃

Reply to P.S.: I would have thought of complying by your wish ( be it on PM), but I hadn't planned anything in addition to what I have written. I had left the rest task on the next writer. 😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
That was chilling and yet beautiful at the same time. Chilling because Gauri had to endure such a thing but beautiful because you wrote it with such care and grace!
Lovely piece!

Thank you so much for the words of appreciation, Sanu.😳😳
I am glad that you liked my work and found it beautiful. After reading the comments that the story was handled with care, I really found my relief. I was too much scared about it.😊😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...
Awesome update dear..

Thank you so much for liking this part, Riddhimaa.😳😳

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#87

Originally posted by: Khidki
Wow!
Such a beautifully narrated part 2 this already heart-touching story!
Absolutely loved the way you narrated it!
The to and fro between past and present was done beautifully!

The conclusion is looked forward to!

Also, you did the sensitive part of the story quite amazingly!

And , I loved it! <3

Thank you so much for organising this activity, Annikaa. Otherwise, I would have never got a chance to write on this concept.😳😳
Thank you for the appreciation. 😛😛
I am glad that you loved my narration. 😃😃
I feeling happy that you liked the switching of story from past to present. That has become my usual style of writing. 😆😆
After reading the comments, I am feeling quite relieved. I was very nervous about that part of the story. I was writing something like that for the first time and didn't wanted it to be overdone.😊😊

I am also looking forward to the next.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Rainy-Season

Thank you so much for organising this activity, Annikaa. Otherwise, I would have never got a chance to write on this concept.😳😳
Thank you for the appreciation. 😛😛
I am glad that you loved my narration. 😃😃
I feeling happy that you liked the switching of story from past to present. That has become my usual style of writing. 😆😆
After reading the comments, I am feeling quite relieved. I was very nervous about that part of the story. I was writing something like that for the first time and didn't wanted it to be overdone.😊😊

I am also looking forward to the next.

Indeed I have noticed that switching but nevertheless I love It!

When I had written For Her, I had the same nervousness. Its really a sensitive topic, no doubt.

But trust ne you did an amazing job there!😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Khidki

Indeed I have noticed that switching but nevertheless I love It!
When I had written For Her, I had the same nervousness. Its really a sensitive topic, no doubt.
But trust ne you did an amazing job there!😳

I had read that work of yours. Honeslty, it feels really bad to write on such things. But reality is, they do exist.

I am glad that I was able to write it with maturity. I think that I would have dared to write on such topic on my own ever.🥱🥱

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Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: rikara94
First of all i wanna tell you that you elaborate the whole part brilliantly dear..You did great job..i just loved the way you penned down

So ajay han😡 Gauri was scared because of him

And omkara..he's so gentle with her..loved it

Omg He's here now what will happen

Please koi chirraiya jaldi se update de😛

Thanks a lot for words of appreciation for my work ,dear. I am extremely overwhelmed to know that you loved my way of writing. 😳😳

I am glad that you are liking Omkara here. It is the characterisation, I feel about Omkara in the show. I find him understanding when it comes to loved ones barring when it is about his principles of truth.😛😛

Poorva is going to update this one. May be she is busy right now. Wait for sometime, she will update when she will get time.😃😃

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