T & T Tales! (Rikara) PART 2-pg 7[Damaged.. but Healing.]

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Fantastic Poorvika di

The thought process of both Gauri and Omkara were well handled

The Poor Girl had to go through so much yet she was strong

Strong enough to fight her demons yet her past comes in between when she tries to accept her present

And Omkara My Respect for him is rising

And Finally a Cliffhanger 👏👏

ps: just a request when the other writer ends the story

if u could post the whole version of the plot u imagined later 😊

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome

Thank you so much for the appreciation ,dear.😛😛

I am glad you liked it.😳😳

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Brilliant update
so gauri was scared because of that Creepy Ajay🤢 he is so disgusting😡
Poor Gauri😭 she still can't remove that image from her mind
Omkara was so gentle with her bt still she was uncomfortable and scared.
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter

Thank you so much for the appreciation ,dear.😳😳

I am really happy that you found the update nice.😊😊

Gauri is scared due to whatever happened to her. Abuse is always painful and hard to forget. Same is happening with Gauri.🥱🥱

Honestly, I have read that people who are victims of molestation suffer sometimes suffer in the their married-life too as the incident had scarred them really badly.

I am really glad that Kashish took the risk of writing on this subject.⭐️⭐️

We are on the same side, I am also waiting for Writer-3 to conclude the story very eagerly.😃😃

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

That was chilling and yet beautiful at the same time. Chilling because Gauri had to endure such a thing but beautiful because you wrote it with such care and grace!

Lovely piece!

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Wow!

Such a beautifully narrated part 2 this already heart-touching story!

Absolutely loved the way you narrated it!

The to and fro between past and present was done beautifully!

The conclusion is looked forward to!

Also, you did the sensitive part of the story quite amazingly!

And , I loved it! <3

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

First of all i wanna tell you that you elaborate the whole part brilliantly dear..You did great job..i just loved the way you penned down

So ajay han😡 Gauri was scared because of him

And omkara..he's so gentle with her..loved it

Omg He's here now what will happen

Please koi chirraiya jaldi se update de😛

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome update yar...
So this is wat happened to gauri which is making her scared... I think om should give her some time and gauri should tell everything to Omkara

Thanks a lot for liking this update dear.😳😳
I hope you found the continuation relevant to Kashish's story.😃😃
Don't worry. Your wishes will be fulfilled by the Poorva i.e. the concluding part writer.😛😛

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Farri25
Why do you people have to leave it at such points... jeeezzz...😭 😭 😭 Godd I want the end...🥱 😆
Carried very beautifully I felt... it was a smooth continuation 😳😃
Great job both you girls ! ❤️
Now do a faasstt jobb next girl pleejj 😆
I'm really excited for the last part of this one 😃

Umm... I left it there to provide the twist that was required in the story.😆😆

Plus, I thought that would help the next writer in developing and concluding the story. After all, Ajay is the culprit of all things.😃😃

Thank you so much for finding it beautiful. 😛😛

I am glad that you found the continuation smooth. 😊😊

I hope you all know that Poorva is going to continue the next. I will be waiting too.😊😊

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Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Hii Poorvika..
That was really good...
I really loved the way you chose to unveil Gauri's past..
Poor soul had to go through so much..
Wondering what's gonna happen when Ajay is here..
Waiting for Omkara to know..
Someone finish it jaldi.. 😛 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
That was amazing dear :D
You took Kashis first part and continued in a way that made the story even more intriguing than it was before.
Both updates look amazing together giving the story exactly what is needed

( Only one question: Is Gauri married to Ajay ? )

you nicely switched from the past to the present without causing any confusion

and the cliffhanger
DAMN IT
he is there , her tormentor is there

I can't wait for the next person to finish :D

Thank you so much for the appreciation, dear.😛😛
I am glad that you found it intriguing. Kashish had developed story in such a way that it was necessary to focus on the cause of Gauri's fears. It became intriguing because of the twist which needed to be introduced in the part.😃😃
I am extremely overwhelmed that the parts completed and complemented each other.😳😳
I tried switching according to the scenes of the present scenario, so that they make necssary impact. Plus, edited the fonts to avoid any confusion. 😆😆
Cliff-hanger was needed. 😉😉
I am also waiting for the next eagerly.😳😳

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