T & T Tales! (Rikara) PART 2-pg 7[Damaged.. but Healing.] - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome idea and great writing.. waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishsr


Listen, trust me I get you - romance and me just do not click... would you do me a favour? Read this whenever you get a chance, and you will know what i mean about my writing always starting somewhere and going elsewhere. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4910599/rikara-guide-to-perfect-romance-os-happy-bday-pooru


Ohhh... romance and you work out of phase but I didn't felt it at all. 😛😛
I will definitely read the recommended part. 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A mystery to her reaction to his actions, can't wait to read the next part!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AhamyTed

This is so intriguing !!! What made her behave like that ? 🤔

I want to know now !!😒
It was so perfectly written 👍🏼

Pls complete the story from your point of view too 😳


Thanks for reading and I'm really glad you found it interesting😃!

Let's see - I have a feeling you're going to enjoy where the next writer takes this...




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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: rikara94


What was that😲

And what is wrong with her?

Btw you penned down his feelings perfectly kash.. Very well wriiten..but happened to her..its really interesting to read

I'm eagerly waiting for the next part..


I love writing Omkara - I like dabbling in his POV!😃

I'm also waiting eagerly yaar!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

Awesome idea and great writing.. waiting for next update


Thankooo!😃

I'm also waiting😉!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

A mystery to her reaction to his actions, can't wait to read the next part!!


I bet it will be amazing😃!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kashish, it's amazing. His habit as well as her secret.
TBH, I was expecting something of different sorts, but this was a pleasant surprise. Okay, don't get me wrong, not pleasant that way, but yeah, the story is wonderful. Gauri's condition was well described :)

Thank god Phase 2 is already On! 😆 I am excited to see how it picks up from here.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Kashish, it's amazing. His habit as well as her secret.

TBH, I was expecting something of different sorts, but this was a pleasant surprise. Okay, don't get me wrong, not pleasant that way, but yeah, the story is wonderful. Gauri's condition was well described :)

Thank god Phase 2 is already On! 😆 I am excited to see how it picks up from here.


ThankooJi!

😆 - I got ur meaning...

What were you expecting - I actually started off with an alternate version in mind😆😳 - it was very hatke... but the next writer would not have known my intention, so patah nahin kya raita phelta😆... I guess this time I'm glad I took a different route than intended...

I'm excited for part 2 too!😃
Edited by kashishsr - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Indeed a very good subject to write a fiction on. You once again gave reasons to readers to wish creatives of IB think of your way as I am sure many of us want to know the reason behind their platonic relationship despite being married and being in love with each other. No I m not expecting a X-rated love making scene but still there should be some scene of them together in one frame. With whatever little time they got on screen together, I am sure they will put our screen on fire.
Coming to the story, it's quite obvious that Gauri had had a traumatized past. But what is not cleared that to what extent she had been traumatized, whether she is molested or physically tortured to the extent to may get sexually abused. But one thing is sure that she is kind of scared of man's touch or should I say a man's intimate touch.

Now what I feel Omkara (incl. Oberois) may consider a psychiatrist and she may get hypnotized and reveal all her past starting from getting separated from her sister in orphanage plus I want Omkara to know how she was chained and blackmailed by Kali Thakur and Omkara deeply regretting for how he treated her earlier. Honestly speaking he was not shown regretting as he should be.

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