Shivika OS: The Gunshot | Based On Current Track | 19.02.2018 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Maisha123

Aur bada and bold kar ke dikhaun that how many of us are waiting for the update ??? seriously mush pls update the ss. pls

Originally posted by: LoveNakuulMehta

you know i have stopped coming to IF for many reasons. but thank god i have my email linked to IF, come running to this forum when i get a pm from you and a thousand watt smile comes on my face.

but i was at the verge of crying when i reached midway of this OS. the part where shivay hugs ani by her waist and says what if omru couldn't take her out in time and what if she got stuck. i actually put myself n his shoes and i could totally imagine how many deaths he must have have suffered at the moment. the way you have depicted shivay's emotion deserves a round of applause because i was not reading this OS, i was watching this whole story play out in front of me. brilliantly touched every depth of both anika and shivay's emotions. the morning scene was so surreal and serene. I absolutely love how you included those light moments of Anika thinking hes asleep but he pulls her to himself and she wishes him good morning by pecking his forehead and he returns it with a peck on her lip.

and the fact that you didn't include a scene where anika blushes to this act just shows how far they have in their relationship! SO SO SO beautiful , take a bow ❤️

Originally posted by: frustrated12233

it was a masterpeice !! an ahmazing one

Originally posted by: Miss_Observer

Absolutely loved It only if they showed(still can to be honest in the privacy of their room) something like this in the show anyway good luck for Manu other OS, SS...

P.s. I dont know if you take requests or right light stuff but can you write an OS where SSO purs (since he's billu and acts and looks like a billi ) when annika is running her fingers through his hair and makes fun of him and he in return scolds her/gets upset over the fact that she stopped and annika kissed him because he's so cute and plays with his hair again? Thank you

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

I always love the way you portray emotions and this was no exception. Beautifully written, and very aptly depicts the kind of feelings Shivika must have experienced. Loved it❤️

Originally posted by: samiksha1993

Kash aisa hota ...I amnot watching the show so I can visualize your OS as what happed in the show...lucky me. Awesome as always.

Originally posted by: Jennie.

Hi Mushfika!

I hope things are better at your end.

I won't lie, I don't know what to comment actually.

The reason being, I haven't watched the current track.

Infact, Its been months I last watched the show.

Nonetheless, I find this one intense and beautiful.

Its hard to decipher what runs on SSO'S mind, on show, whenever there is a separation track or something like that.

If the same thing is happening on the show right now, Iam sure he must have felt the similar emotions which you have described here.

Originally posted by: Mummyoftwo2012

Big fan of ur OS:es and this was not an exception. Loved it!!
Would love to se something like this in the show