Shivika OS: The Gunshot | Based On Current Track | 19.02.2018 - Page 3

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

Mushfika, before anything, the first thing - update ur SS 😳

This one, we can just wish it happens.. but gonna happen in our IB land... ML ke baad humein mila toh sirf ek tadiwala room scene, no confrontation, conversation other than that. May be now, we shall hope to get, becoz Shivika has become more vocal than before atleast about their feelings and each other's importance...
Itna details mein toh, they will never show. Thats y we fulfill our secret desires by OS, TS, SS and FF 😆 what say?

P.S: I had posted in the removed post. Copy paste to this one

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Loved your os dear

Originally posted by: metoyou

Overboard with emotions? Lets say you hit all the right emotions and this is the only way it should have been.

Obviously, whatever is going on now, is Shvika's plan but it really wouldn't have hurt anyone to show some angst and more emotions right after the gunshot. Everybody knows that the actors would have done justice to it, because they are good in emotional scenes. Unfortunately, the writers decided to go on a different path; comic route. It worked during the first round of ML, but not anymore.

Depth was missing hence could not take it too serious. Khair, let's not go there. In short, this plan gets a thumbs down from me.

Having said that, your OS gets a super thumbs up! 👍🏼 This, exactly this was much needed after executing their plan. Even though it was a plan, Shivaay's feelings and emotions would have been real at that time. His love for Anika runs so deep within him that it hits places in his heart he himself is not even aware of. So you totally got it right Mush and thank you for sharing this with us. Could totally feel the overflow of emotions just by your beautiful writing 👏

Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7

Loved it Mushfika... it's exactly how it would have played out if those scenes in between his arrival home and the press conference were shown. He'd have been beside himself with worry ... full of emotions, good read..👍🏼

Originally posted by: chek

Thankyou thank you thank you!!! Loved this!! Omg needed something like this so depserately! So intense and gorgeous!! But please update your SS!! PLEASE ASAP! we need some 'mushfika' quality work!! Been a while..

Love. :)

Originally posted by: mysterious-soul

Amazing :) well written :)

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant..