Shivika OS: The Gunshot | Based On Current Track | 19.02.2018 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Hriju321

Awesome! Loved every bit of this OS!

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

I just loved this... really wish to see this type of intense scenes in the show too...

Originally posted by: farinaks

Sooo beautiful lovely nd a bit emotional

Tq for pm MusHi

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

so looking forward for this kind of scene

Originally posted by: jarir2010

the reaction, I just liked it.coz the relationship that two shares, the thought of shooting annika, must blowing the living daylight out of him.superb writing.

Originally posted by: MITHMA99

Nice os

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

hope this is what the cvs have planned, looking forward to how it plays out, this was well written yet again, take a bow, you just keep getting better and better

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...

awesome os dear

Originally posted by: Maisha123

IT WAS PITCH PERFECT FROM EVERY ANGLE!! I can't tell you how terribly i was missing this kind of scene between shivika. especially the plan had been a huge disappointment for me because i felt it was a recycle of the memory loss track and i wouldnt have minded even if its similar. but my problem is there was no emotions at all. it was like theyre trying to make ib a comedy soap.

THANK YOU THANKS A TON FOR GIVING US THIS OS MUSH!! the way you described shivay - how he was feeling sick, nauseous, covered with sweats, having problem to breathe etc etc are exact;y how he is supposed to feel after he buried her.

you know for a moment, i thought you would make anika dead. and i was thinking whether i should read further. but when i read the part "a delication arm wrapped around him" i'm was so relieved, although you didn't reveal at that time who the person is lol. i was silently shedding tears the way anika consoled him .. gosh!! mush this is your power, this is the kind of essence you bring in your writing. you hit the right emotions . and this time , with no exception, you did just that!

loads and loads of love for this OS. god knows how many times i will read this story now

Originally posted by: Maisha123

Ab hui na kaam ki baat. mush you said you will update this weekend. phir dhoka diya mujhe! kya chal kya raha hai tumhare dimaag mein 😡 don't test my patience 🥱