RiKara THREE SHOT - PEHLI DAFA - SHOT ONE UPDATED Pg ONE

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SHOT ONE


"Maa aapne humaare haath mein yeh tray kyon thama di? Gauri asked irritated.

"Arre beta aaj tujhe dekhne ladke waale aaye hai ... unki khatir daari mein koi kami nahi rehni chahiye. Her mother said serving the snacks.

"Maa unhe chai pilaani hai ya chai mein nehlana hai? The tray was indeed heavy.

"Gauri Didi ... humaare hone waale jijaji toh bade handsome chirotey hai ... aapke bachhe toh bilkul dabang hone waale hai ... doodh jaise gore ... chocolate jaise meethe. Bhavya entered the kitchen just to tease the hell out off Gauri.

"Yaha shaadi ke baare mein baat shuru nahi hui aur tumne mausi banne ke sapne dekhna shuru kar diya Bhavya. Gauri glared at her.

"Haan behna mujhe pata hai ke bachhe aane mein abhi time hai lekin tera virginity ka vrat toh tootega! Bhavya excitedly whispered in her ear. It was just because of the stupid tray in her hands otherwise Bhavya would have earned a smack from Gauri.

"Haan haan ... humaare hone waale damad ji bohot handsome hai lekin humari Gauri bhi toh kitni khoobsurat hai bilkul Pari jaisi. Her mother praised ... saving Gauri from anymore teasing she was already looking like a ripe tomato.

"Haan aapne humme Jo bindi, jhumke, paayal aur kangan pehnaake gehno ki dukaan banaya hai uska kya? Gauri started complaining.

"Mujhe pata hai Gauri ... tujhe bohot ghabraahat ho rahi hai ... isiliye tu aise baat kar rahi hai.

"Aur aap kaise baat kar rahe ho maa ... khush toh aise ho rahe ho jaise aaj hi meri shaadi hone waali hai Gauri made a serious pout.

"Aaj nahi beta par jald hi ho jaaegi. Her mother caressed her head.

"Achha chal hum sabko chai pilaate hai ... aur tere honewaale unse bhi mil lete hai. Her mother teased her.

"Heyy shankarji ... humme kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha ... itni khush toh humaari maa humara university result dekhkar nahi Hui thhi ... humaari pehli kamaayi se shopping karke bhi nahi hui thhi ... phir aaj kyon? Aur khaane peene ki toh itni teyyari ki hai jaise yaha aap saakshaat darshan Dene aaye hai aur aapko bhog lagne wala hai ... humaari madad kijiye. Gauri was talking to her own anxious self.

Omkara was busy replying to some messages when Rudra nudged his elbow in his arm thrice.

"Dekho O ... aapki waali aa gayi. Rudra wiggled his eyebrows.

"Rudy ... AAPKI WAALI' sounds so cheap ... butlers baat karte hai aise ... say bhabhi ... Sister-In-Law! Shivaay scolded him in a whisper.

"Bhabhi nahi bani woh kisi ki abhi tak! Omkara growled a murmur to shut both of them up.

"Bann jaaegi ... phir aap unki painting banana! Rudra poked again.

"Painting banane ke liye shaadi nahi kar raha hu! Omkara warned him to stop.

"Ooo ... toh kis liye kar rahe ho ... Ahem Ahem? Rudra gave him a sly smile.

"SHUT UP RUDRA Both his elder brothers yelled a whisper gritting their teeth.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wao
Please please update soon
Bhavya ,gauri behnen hyn
Direct rishta aya hy iska mutlb donon party brabr hyn
Bechari ko zevar ki dukan bna dya om ko who sada hi ache lgy ge
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow wow superb...its an interesting one...bhavya and gauri aresisters...gauri is hell nervous and doubtful about her wedding...other side omkara is in irritated mode...update soon yar..its very interesting start
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Are aaj toh bazar mein naya product launch hua hain.. 😆
The concept is so beautiful..two people meeting for the first time..even the title suited the plot perfectly...
BhavRi are love..I loved their bonding..finally Ri ka varginity ka vrat toote ga..lol..
I was so excited that they are going to meet..like puraane zamane ki woh feels..ladke walo ka ghar pe ana, haath mein chai ki tray, dil mein thoda sa nervousness, lots of teasing, taiyyar hona..and finally the moment came...
Oh Gosh..!! It gave me so much of feels..
I love you a lot behna..and you know that..but whenever you tease me by hanging me on cliffs I feel like hating you..you heartless..!!
Aab jaldi se update de bhi do meri teaser chiraiyya..I can't wait to read..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting concept
Rikara's Arrange marriage!I m sooo excited
They are meeting for the first time. How they'll react??
Can't wait for next chapter
Continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow arranged marriage concept !
Always wanted to read arranged marriage on RiKara

If course RiKara ke bache cute hongey

I m sure om will do painting and much more after marriage

Really excited to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start!!
Very interesting concept.
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Eeeksss arrange marriage...i'm so excited yar
Its really interesting concept

Loved bhavRi's eqaution and that dialogues bache bahut dabangg hone wale hain...doodh jaise gorr or choco jaose meethe😆and and varginity ka varat tootega🤣 gosh
And rudy 'toh kis liye kar rahe ho shadi'😛

Too much teasing😛

Waiting for rikara's first meeting..haye kya kya hoga

Dil kahe kahaniya pehli dafa

Can't wait..update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: chils

Wao

Please please update soon
Bhavya ,gauri behnen hyn
Direct rishta aya hy iska mutlb donon party brabr hyn
Bechari ko zevar ki dukan bna dya om ko who sada hi ache lgy ge


Haan yaha social status difference ki koi problem nahi hai ... It is as simple as RiKara meeting for the first time ... Seeing each other for marriage... Haan Om ko woh simple zyada pas and aaegi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesick23

Good one 😆 😆 😆


Thank you 😆

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