RiKara THREE SHOT - PEHLI DAFA - SHOT ONE UPDATED Pg ONE

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Wow wow superb...its an interesting one...bhavya and gauri aresisters...gauri is hell nervous and doubtful about her wedding...other side omkara is in irritated mode...update soon yar..its very interesting start

Yeah Gauri is very nervous and Omkara is just irritated with Rudra ... Abhi dekhte hai aage kya kya baat hoti hai.

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Are aaj toh bazar mein naya product launch hua hain.. 😆
The concept is so beautiful..two people meeting for the first time..even the title suited the plot perfectly...
BhavRi are love..I loved their bonding..finally Ri ka varginity ka vrat toote ga..lol..
I was so excited that they are going to meet..like puraane zamane ki woh feels..ladke walo ka ghar pe ana, haath mein chai ki tray, dil mein thoda sa nervousness, lots of teasing, taiyyar hona..and finally the moment came...
Oh Gosh..!! It gave me so much of feels..
I love you a lot behna..and you know that..but whenever you tease me by hanging me on cliffs I feel like hating you..you heartless..!!
Aab jaldi se update de bhi do meri teaser chiraiyya..I can't wait to read..

Haan ... Gauri ko Omkaraji dekhne aaye hain.

Virginity ka vrat 😆

And what about dabang bachhe ... Bolo bolo tell tell 😆

Giving those kind of vibes was my target ... ACHIEVED

Ek baat bataau ... Jaan poochke end kiya waha ...

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Interesting concept
Rikara's Arrange marriage!I m sooo excited
They are meeting for the first time. How they'll react??
Can't wait for next chapter
Continue soon

They are going to smile and then blush and then smile some more.

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
Wow arranged marriage concept !
Always wanted to read arranged marriage on RiKara

If course RiKara ke bache cute hongey

I m sure om will do painting and much more after marriage

Really excited to read more

Hum toh Omkaraji ka nature jaante hai naa 😳

My main concept of doing this story is that RiKara meet for the first time to see each other.

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t
Awesome start!!
Very interesting concept.
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

Thank you so much

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rikara94
Eeeksss arrange marriage...i'm so excited yar
Its really interesting concept

Loved bhavRi's eqaution and that dialogues bache bahut dabangg hone wale hain...doodh jaise gorr or choco jaose meethe😆and and varginity ka varat tootega🤣 gosh
And rudy 'toh kis liye kar rahe ho shadi'😛

Too much teasing😛

Waiting for rikara's first meeting..haye kya kya hoga

Dil kahe kahaniya pehli dafa

Can't wait..update soon

Gauri is going to be like ... 'Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh udd gaye!'

My favorite is dabang bachhe 😆

Nazre milengi aur dil ki baatein hongi

Phir gana samajh gayi tum

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Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Haan ... Gauri ko Omkaraji dekhne aaye hain.

Virginity ka vrat😆

And what about dabang bachhe ... Bolo bolo tell tell😆

Giving those kind of vibes was my target ... ACHIEVED

Ek baat bataau ... Jaan poochke end kiya waha ...

Dabang bachhe aur doodh jaisa goora rang ki baatein sirf aap hi kar sakte hain.. 😆
Toh aap zaalima aise exciting moment pe jann poochke phull stap lagwa diye...ghor anyaay..!!
You know the first thing that touched me was those vibes..I'm fan of arrange marriages..so for me those feeling are quite special..I wish to have a arrange marriage... 😉 😳

Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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Farri25

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

ROFL ! 😆 😆 😆

IB ke abnormalities se itna thak gayi hun na, ab kuch normal hota dekhke dil ko chain aaya...😃

I'm even so tired of Obros ka rona dhona.. now this was some proper Obro convo after quite a long time 😃 ❤️

Bhavya and Gauri behnas for a change Haan 😃

Gore like milk and meethe like chocolate bachche 😆 Mera bas chale toh abhi jaake gaal kheechdun 😃

"Painting karne ke liye shaadi nahi kar raha" and "toh phir kisliye kar rahe hi" 😆 So OmRu like 😃

I don't remember arranged marriage and RIKara happening before so this has to be special and I know it will be 😃 and like Tasnim, me a fan of arranged marriages

Uplifted my mood... I was off until some time ago..Thnx ❤️

Will be waiting for the next one ( ye bhi koi bolne waali baat hai..) 😆

Edited by Farri25 - 7 years ago

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rikara94

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Gauri is going to be like ... 'Unse mili nazar ke mere hosh udd gaye!'

My favorite is dabang bachhe 😆

Nazre milengi aur dil ki baatein hongi

Phir gana samajh gayi tum

Ahh that song reminds me aayat..such a cute girl she is..

Hayeee waiting for their nazar milap😳

And about song bas poocho hi mat sab samaj aa jata hai title se😆

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Dabang bachhe aur doodh jaisa goora rang ki baatein sirf aap hi kar sakte hain.. 😆
Toh aap zaalima aise exciting moment pe jann poochke phull stap lagwa diye...ghor anyaay..!!
You know the first thing that touched me was those vibes..I'm fan of arrange marriages..so for me those feeling are quite special..I wish to have a arrange marriage... 😉 😳

Dabang bachhe kyon naa ho bhala ... Ri humaari doodh jaisi gori aur Kara toh hai hi chocolatey.

Haan beheen ... Humka phull staap laagaika padi ...

I wanted everyone to enjoy ... The vibe of her holding the tray and then dabang bachhe and obros! Isiliye ...

Tumhaari bhi hogi arranged shaadi ... Tum bhi le jaaogi aise chai k cup. 😉