Main yahan tu wahaan: A Rikara story: part 13 (03-04) pg18 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART EIGHT

Just a week and he realised every mistake of his life. He realised that he was not anymore the old Omkara Singh Oberoi who would presume anything about a person by what he saw. He realised that each and every thing he presumed was wrong. His decisions were wrong. He was wrong in recognising people around him. And as the punishment of his mistakes, she is here... Lying weak in front of him.

He held her hands in his warmth. Her hands were cold... As cold as her body. He could feel the silence around them, which he had never appreciated. He wanted her to get up. He wanted her to speak, as much as she wanted to and he will not stop her. He wanted to hear that sweet voice, because Omkaraji' was never as sweet to his ears if spoken from someone else's mouth. But her lips somehow every time managed to add sugar to the sweetness when she muttered it.

"Gauri, get up now. It's been a week that I am waiting for you to get up. A week since I am here to see you. And you know that I am not a patient man. Gauri get up, it's time now. It's time for you to see how well the things are going. To see that I am here with you, by your side always

Since a week all he did was coming to the hospital and sitting for hours, holding her hand. He only went to wash him up or for some sleep, that to if Rudra dragged him out. Omkara, didn't even knew for how long he talked to her or simply held her hand. But only somewhere he found peace only with her.

The Oberoi's have tried contacting him, but he didn't answer. Once Khanna was also send to find him, but he returned Khanna back by saying that his wife is here and he needs to be with her. Rudra was also avoiding the calls from the parents and his Shivaay bhaiya too... Because he knew that there is no use in talking with them, because all will they say is they did it because of the family.

Family was once the life for both the brothers. But after what all happened... The family was the last thing that they would now want to see. It was only because of the love he had for his family and his parents that his love is lying here in front of him attached with tubes and cords. She still has not opened her eyes and every passing second was taking something away from Omkara. Every tick of the clock came and past with the hope of her coming back. Still he still waited patiently for her to come back as for him this time without her was a punishment for leaving her alone, for accepting the idiotic demand of her mom and for trusting his brother more than he should. The time seemed to be never ending.

Gauri, on the other hand, could hear everything that he said. She was able to sense his pain. She knew that he was there beside her, holding her hand and blaming himself for whatever happened. She wanted to open her eyes and see him. She wanted to cup his face with her fingers and tell him that everything that happened was never his fault. She wanted to release his pain and also cry out everything in his embrace.

But, even after many attempts, she was not able to even open his eyes. She struggled hard and harder but all went in vain. She was felling as if a pile of bricks was on her head. She felt drizzly every time she wanted to talk. Her eyes were not listening to her. Her hands and legs were not responding. She even was not in her senses many times. And every time her thoughts closed she only heard her mother saying that she cannot take her... And that she needs to be here with him.

"Gauri, come on now, get up. Get up and come back to me. Talk to me as you did. Call me anything you want to... But please get up she herd him saying. But this time, she was able to respond. As if her hands and legs have started listening and bricks have been removed from her eyes.

"Omkaraji she said, in a voice just a bit louder than whisper. His head was laid on her bead with his hands working as a pillow. He jumped up listening to her voice "Gauri, yy...you are okay he said. "Water she felt her throat dried. He immediately took out water from the jug kept on the side table in a glass and helped her to drink it "Rudra, call the doctor he shouted, while keeping the glass back.

The doctors came inside and checked her "how are you now Mrs Oberoi? The doctor asked. "I am fine, just feeling weak she smiled, sleepishly. "Well, I must say Mr Oberoi that your wife is a fighter... even after so much blood loss, she has recovered the doctor said to Omkara, smiling. "Thank you so much doctor he shook his hands with him and the doctor walked out.

He sat down and cupped her face in his hands and leaned to the bed "pata hai kitna dara diya tha tumne Mujhe... I was scared so much... I thought I would loose you for ever. His eyes were filled with water, and care was evident. "Par main toh yahin Hun naa... I am not going anywhere Omkaraji...she said smiling. "You should have told me Gauri, you should have returned to Mumbai. Why am I saying this to you... when I myself was such an idiot to no even realise that you must be alone there he said sitting back to the chair beside her bed.


She tried to get up but stumbled due to weakness "Gauri, samhaal ke he held her hand. "What are you doing? You need rest he said helping her back to rest on the mattress. "Omkaraji don't blame yourself... You didn't do anything wrong. In fact I was okay with bhaiya and bhabhi she said, trying to control her broken voice. "You were not okay Gauri, don't lie. I have seen the way they would have treated you... And when on the earth were you planning to tell me that you were sleeping on the couch... A bloody damn couch Gauri and that to in such cold weather he was not at all able to control his anger.

"Omkaraji, I... I am sorry she said as tears came out of her eyes. "No, don't cry... I am not blaming you... It's just that I am angry on myself for not taking care of you... I should have done that... I should not have blindly trusted anyone I am sorry his tone softened as he held her hand and hugged her tightly with her head peaceful resting on his chest.

"Ahmm ahmm Rudra made a fake cough. "Bhavya I feel we came on the wrong time he chuckled. "Shut up Rudra Omkara glared at him. "Ahhh!!! What a relief... You know how good it feels to hear shut up bhabhi... I was soo missing it he sat on the couch placed just near the bed attached to the wall.

"Rudra Omkara raised his voice as Gauri chuckled softly.

"Bhabhi, how are you bhavya asked sitting on the opposite side of Gauri on the bed. "I am fine she answered with a smile.

"So since bhabhi is fine... Let's have a family hug Rudra came and wrapped his hands around Bhavya and Omkara's hands and Omkara held Gauri and Rudra from the other side and Rudra squeezed his arms.
"Aaah Gauri shouted as she felt pain in her back. "Rudra, are you crazy? Can't you see that she still is weak Omkara said. But before Rudra could say something "you have really lost your senses Mr Rudra Singh Oberoi Bhavya said. "It's okay... Why are you both shouting on him... I am fine she glared at both of them. "I an sorry bhabhi Rudra said apologetically. "It's okay Rudy bhaiya... I'm fine she passed him a smile.

"Okay then we should leave, Omkara bhaiya take care Bhavya said almost dragging out Rudra from the room.

"What was that? Why did you dragged me out? Rudra raised a bow at bhavya. "Because they need some time alone she answered. "Oh!! But why didn't I get that he said rubbing his fingers against his chin. "Because you are crazy... Now let's go she walked away with Rudra.

"Thank God you are back Gauri. I thought that I would loose you... I could not imagine my life without you he said. "Shhh... she placed her finger on his lips "I am not going anywhere nor I am letting you go she held the eye contact while saying and immediately hugged him tight. "I love you Gauri he said hugging her back. "I love you too, Omkaraji she said smiling in his chest.





Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
priyadil thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update...
Finally she is back...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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was waiting for this one since a long time!!!
a perfect family HUG...NOTHING MORE was needed...

phewww...gauri was finally alright...

omkara can breath now...

rudra...I Love him for all the craziness that he does...

really excited to see what happens next...

update soon😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you... I am happy that you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyadil

Beautiful update...

Finally she is back...


Thank you Priya..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayushi1

was waiting for this one since a long time!!!

a perfect family HUG...NOTHING MORE was needed...

phewww...gauri was finally alright...

omkara can breath now...

rudra...I Love him for all the craziness that he does...

really excited to see what happens next...

update soon😊


I am glad that you likey thoughts
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank god she survived :D
It was beautiful dear
really nice update
can't wait to see what will happen next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update...
Glad to see Gauri okay and coming back to her Omkaraji...
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally she opened her eyes.. And thankfully Rudy and Om avoided their family..I just hate oberois..and let's not talk about shivika.. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART NINE

Omkara's life came back when she opened her eyes. It was as if he was out from the pool of misery he had been struggling into. This girl was his soul. Even when Omkara was all alone in his room, not allowed to even talk to her, he felt every bit of her in him. She had taken a place in his heart which was already destroyed, long time ago. She tamed him from everywhere. He didn't even realise when, but she had become the reason of his every breath, the reason of his smile, the reason of his life. He never thought that he would be able to love anyone after Riddhima's betrayal, and after what his father did to his mother. But then she entered his chirpy and dabbang chirraiya. She spoke so much that he didn't even realised his sorrows. Omkara smiled on his thoughts.

"Why are you laughing? she asked confusingly. "Bas apni biwi ke bare mein soch raha tha he answered. "Ohooo... but when you are with me Mr Oberoi, you don't have to think about anyone else she winked, smiling. "Sorry, I have a lovely wife Ms Sharma. I cannot give my time to someone he continued the joke. "Not even me she smirked. "Well, if it is you then I have to think he chuckled. "Think and answer, Mr Oberoi, you will not get someone as gorgeous as me she spoke. "Ahannn, well then I think my wife will let me with you he started moving to her bed. "Aapki biwi, bura nahi maegi she said hiding her smile. "Uski chinta aap mat kariye Ms Sharma. Main apni biwi ko mana lunga he smirked. "Is that, then Mr Oberoi what if it is a yes from me? she smiled putting both her hands around his neck. "Hayeee... eise muskurayengi aap, toh mar nahi jaenge hum he kept his one hand on his heart. "Well my husband likes me smiling she answered shrugging. "Wohooo, suddenly I feel jealous of me he said genuinely. She started laughing.

"Ma'am, you have your food ready the nurse came. "Oh yes, please come in Omkara left the bed only to sit on the couch. The nurse paced the tray on a stool keeping it on the bed. "Ma'am; call me when you finish it she said and left. Gauri was just looking at her food constantly with many expressions. It was evident that she simply didn't like it. She still took the spoon and started playing with the soup. Her expressions were funny. She simply took some soup out of the bowl and then dropped it again inside it. She again did the same. She was either just playing with the spoon moving it inside the bowl in circular motion.

Omkara watched her from behind the magazine he was reading. It was hard for him to control his laughter. "What are you doing? he asked. "How do people eat it? This does not even look tasty she said frowning. "This is for patients. Eat it, you need it right now he commanded. "I will not. How can I eat this... it's just...Ughh!! she frowned again. "But you have to my dear wife he sat in front of her. "I will not my dear husband she copied the tone.

"Achcha Gauri, you didn't tell me about Salman Khan's new movie he said. "You want to know she said with twinkling eyes. "Haan, haan why not he encouraged her. "So, the movie is named as Tiger Zinda Hain', you know what, that has many action scenes... she started. Omkara slowly pulled the soup out of the bowl and started feeding her, spoon by spoon. "Ohh... then what happened? he asked. "Then, Zoya started finishing every terrorist... she was still telling him. She didn't even noticed how he was feeding her. "Then Tiger and Zoya went to Germany happily with both the boys. And the story finished she stopped. "Yes, finished he smiled victoriously. "Huh? she asked confusingly. "See, the soup finished he showed her the empty bowl. "You are a cheater she slapped on his arms. "Well, everything is fair in love and war he shrugged. "I can't believe that I finished this she looked at the bowl. "Believe me wifey, you only did. Seems that Salman Khan is in your nerves now huh? he smirked again. "Hahaha, anything she rolled her eyes.

"Bhaiya, what should I do with your younger brother? Bhavya barged in. "What happened? Gauri asked. "He is mad bhabhi. Rudra Singh Oberoi is crazy she sat beside her. "Will you tell what happened, Bhavya? Omkara asked. "Haan, Bhavya bata toh kya hua? Gauri placed a hand on his shoulders. "He bribed the officer to not give me an apartment in Mumbai she answered. "What? Why Omkara asked. "I don't know, but now I don't have any place to live in. I don't know what I will do when I will go to Mumbai Bhavya replied. "Dont worry, we will see something Omkara answered. "Yes, we have to Bhavya sighed. "But first I need to talk to that idiot he left to talk to Rudra.

"Oyee, why did you do this? he slapped at the back of Rudra's head. "But what did I do? Rudra arched his bow. "Don't what did I do me. You know what you have done. Why did you do this to Bhavya? he questioned. "What would you have done if Gauri Bhabhi would have suddenly planned to stay away from you? he questioned back. "Why would Gauri stay away from me? he questioned. "And anyways, I love Gauri, I would have done anything to get her stay with me he shrugged. "There you go Rudra spoke. He then realised "wait a minute, you love Bhavya, seriously you love bhavya? he asked in an excited tone. "Then why do you think I have done this? Rudra replied sarcastically. "Oh. My.God. Rudra Singh Oberoi. The Flirt. The Playboy. Is. In. Love he emphasised every word. "Shut up, O. This is hospital Rudra placed his hand on Omkara's mouth. "Oh, yeah sorry. But I can't believe it. You are in love he said. "Ab kya likh ke dun Rudra said sarcastically.

"Then, why don't you tell this to Bhavya? he asked. "I don't think this time and place is correct O, I will when I feel the time is correct he answered. "Okay, do it as you want to, but Rudra do it during the correct time. Because when the time passes all what is left is regrets he patted his shoulders. "I so wanted our family to be here O Rudra's smile dropped. Omkara immediately hugged his brother. "We have a family now also too, Rudra. He took him to Gauri's room and stopped at the door "look there, they are our family he said pointing towards the girls through the glass in the room's door. "Look at these girls, Rudra. What all didn't we do to them? We were rude, harsh, impolite, disrespectful and what not to them. But they were there for us, every single time we were alone. They were always there beside us in our sorrow, in front of us while facing problems and behind us cheering and supporting in every success he said.

Rudra was simply watching his brother talking about his sister-in-law, though referring they', having so much love and respect in his eyes. He never knew what love was until he met Bhavya. But if he wanted to love her, he wished that he would love her like his brother loved his wife. He wished to give her that respect which Omkara had for Gauri. He had seen his big beother breaking many times, crying many times but then this was the first time after she left him that he saw him having sparkle in his eyes. As if he wanted to live his life now. As if he wanted to enjoy every moment with her.

"O, let's go have some food Rudra came rushing to Omkara. "Rudra you go, I will have it afterwards he didn't want to leave her, even for a second now. "Omkaraji, go I am fine she said. "No, I will not. Bhavya is also not there, I will not leave you alone he answered. "Omkaraji, believe me, the hospital staff is there right. Go, I will be okay she answered. "Are you sure? he asked. "Yes, a 100% sure, now go she said as he left.

"Ma'am, it's your time to sleep the nurse came in. "Oh yes okay she said and laid on her bed. The nurse turned the lights off. Just then there was a sound of someone's footsteps. "Who is there? she shouted. The footsteps kept coming closer "Who is there? She shouted again. She saw the intruder's face "what are you doing here? she was shocked.

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