Main yahan tu wahaan: A Rikara story: part 13 (03-04) pg18

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This is a story from my side to the Rikaraland. This story is my version of Rikara in the vanvaas story. So since I have started watching the vanvaas fiasco, I wanted a story separately for them, entangled with the whole scenario. And here I am, writing my imaginations down... And I would like you all to read it and tell me If you also like my imaginations or not. So ending my chatter here I present to you the Rikara story

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"Ram naam satya hai, Ram naam satya hai tej was moving around the place where a photograph of a young, chirpy and beautiful girl was kept with on which a garland of marigold flowers had been hanged. "Yeh tu kya kar raha hai Tej, ruk jaa, ruk jaa Tej the most senior member of the family, an elderly lady spoke with tears asking for mercy and forgivness for her little granddaughter-in-law. "Mr Oberoi, ruk jaiye, bohot ho gaya aapka tamasha, end it now Omkara Singh Oberoi spoke with a murderous rage in his eyes. If dadi would not be holding his hand, he would have killed the person in front of him for the crime he was committing.

"Mom, stop him right now, stop him please he pleaded to his mother, expecting a positive answer. "Vo job hi kar rahe hai, sahi kar rahe hain Jhanvi spoke looking him. Omkara was shocked. Was she really the same woman who could go to any extent to save his family? Was she really the same mother who would do anything for the happiness of her children? "Mom, yeh aap kya keh rahi hain. Mr Oberoi Gauri ka, meri Gauri ka shraad kar rahe hain, aur aap keh rahi hain ki vo job hi kar rahe sahin sahi kar rahe hain? asked a confused Omkara. "Mai jo keh rahi hun, sahi keh rahi hun Omkara, yeh ladki kanhi bhi sahi nahi thi humare parivaar ke liye. Aur aaj toh isne yeh bhi sabit kar diya ki humari kahi hui koi bhi baat iske liye bilkul bhi important nahi hai.

"Eisa nahi hai mom, uske paas yeh karne ki ek vajah thi. Usse dhamki... before he could complete he heard aloud thrash on the ground, the thrash of the pot which was now broken by Tej completing the shraad of his wife. "Bas Om bohot bol liya tumne. Mera faisla hai ki aaj se Gauri naa to iss ghar ki bahu hai aur naa tumhari biwi.Mr gayi hai vo aaj se mere liye Tej announced. "Yeh tu kya keh raha hai Tej, Gauri iss ghar ki bahu hai. "Bahu thi maa, bahu thi. Par ab koi nahi hai vo humare liye.

"Mr Oberoi, mat bhuliye ki aap meri biwi ke bare mein baat kar rahe hain omkara now lost it. How could he say something like this about his wife, his Gauri? "Kaunsi biwi, kaisi biwi Omkara? Voh biwi jo tumhare maa-baap ki koi izzat nahi karti, voh biwi jisne khudko tumpe thopa hai, voh biwi jise kisi cheez ki koi knowledge nahi hai. Areyy isse toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki mehmanon se baat kaise karte hain. Yeh tumhaari biwi banne ke layak hi nahi hai. "Enough mom, bohot bol liya aapne aab... He was going to reply when he heard his wife falling on the floor. He rushed to her "kuch nahi hua..kuch bhi nahi... main hoon naa... kuch nahi hoga he said assuring her. But Gauri knew that the damage had been done and now it would only lead to a disaster. The disaster which will cause her pain and sufferings again.

"Chalo mere saath Omkara held her hand and started toward his room. "kaha jaa rahe ho, Om. "Aapse iska koi lene dena nahi hai Mr Oberoi. Iss waqt meri biwi ko meri zaroorat nahi hai he said and started walking again. "Yeh ghar hai Om, koi dharamshala nahi. Yaha vohi rehta hai jo parivaar ka hissa hota hai, aur yeh ladki koi nahi hai mere aur mere parivaar ke liye. Yeh yaha nahi reh sakti. Tej said. "Bas bohot hua. I've had enough of you now. She is my wife, aur agar vo yaha nahi rahegi toh main bhi nahi rahunga Om shouted.

"Nahi, Omkaraji aap yahi rahiye, pure parivaar ko iss samay apne bete ki zaroorat hai. Hum chale jaate hai Gauri was broken, never had she expected such a huge reaction of her father-in-law towards her. Yesterday when he said that she is dead for him, she thought that it's just his anger who was speaking. But today when he did it, she could do nothing but watch him doing it. Not only that, the family she thought loves her, thinks so low about her.

Omkara on the other hand was not at all shocked on her words. He knew what kind of a girl his wife was. He was more shocked on how his parents reacted on such a small misunderstanding. "Nahi Gauri, maine tumse vaada kiya tha ki main tumhara saath kabhi nahi chodunga, toh ab kaise chod dun. Agar iss ghar ki apne bte ki zaroorat hai toh kya meri biwi ko apne pati ki zarorat nahi hai he was not at all ready to leave her hand. He was a man of promises and the promise he made to his wife was the most important of all. "Chalo Gauri, ab nahi rahenge hum yahan.

"Tumhe meri kasam hai Omkara, kahi nahi jaoge tum iss ghar ko chod ke Jhanvi said, knowing that this will definitely stop him. And she was successful; Omkara stopped his legs and turned towards her. "Mom, please let me go. She is my life, I cannot live without her he pleaded again. But it seemed as if Jhanvi has gone deaf. She did not even react on her son's tears; all she could see was her husband's insult and obviously Tia's fake blindness. "Gauri has to leave right now she announced and went with her husband and her new favourite, Tia.

"Nahi Gauri, mat jao, main hai reh paunga tumhare bina this was all he could do now, plead her to stay. "Nahi Omkaraji, hume jaane dijiye. Maaji aur papaji ki khushi isi mein hai, toh yahi sahi she said with tears flowing down her eyes. "Aur main... meri khushi, meri khushi ka kya Gauri? Aur tum... tumhara kya, kha jaogi, kaha rahogi tum? "Kabhi kabar apni khushiyaan chod kar, apni zimedariyon pe ko zyada ahemiyat deni padti hai. Aur aap humari chinta mat kariye, hum bade bhaiya aur bhaujayee ke paas chale jaenge, unhe bhi toh kisi ki zaroorat hogi naa

"Sabki fikar hai tumne, bas meri nahi. Socha hai tum chali jaogi toh kya hoga mera? Om asked helplessly. "Sabse zyaada aap ki fikar hai hume issiliye toh aapse yaha rehne ko keh rahe hain. Hum jaante hain, aap yaha rahenge toh sab theek hoga. Pura vishvaas hai hume aap par. Chalte hain, khayaal rakhiyega apna saying this she left, leaving a broken and a shallow Om in the mansion.

"Achcha hua ki vo chali gyi. Voh laddki tumhare layak hi nahi thi beta Jhanvi said. "Bas mom, bohot hua. Jo aap chahti thi vo toh ho gaya naa, chali gyi vo mujhe aur iss ghar ko chod ke saying this a defeated Om walked to his room.

His room did not looked as his own. The charm in it was missing, the colour in it faded away as if she has taken away the life in it. He had the felling much similar to what he had when she left to Bareilly. His room reflected his chiraiyaa. He could still feel her. He went to his bed trying to sleep, but sleep was far away from his eyes.

Main yahan tu wahaan, Zindagi hai kahaan

Tu hi tu hai sanam dekhta hun jahan


Gauri reached Shivaay's house two hours and told him all what had happened to her. "You should not have left the house Gauri, Om needs you was all shivaay said and her Annika bhaujayi kept silent all the while, she was confused on their reactions. She expected them to hold her and let her cry, but what they did was just opposite. Both of them had the same opinion "Gauri you should not have left the house.


"Sorry Gauri, there is only one room in the house and I and Shivaay are sharing it Anika informed her. "Its okay bhaujaye, I will sleep in the hall she said assuring, and as usual Anika left without saying a word. She went and took a bedsheet for her to sleep. The temperature was down.. Too down for her. She was shivering and all she could remember was her Omkaraji's warm embrace while sleeping.


Neend aati nahi, yaad jaati nahi...

Bin tere ab jiya jaye naaa

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So guys I am done for this short... I promise you all a happy ending to the story. Hope you all like it.

INDEX

PART TWO

PART THREE

PART FOUR

PART FIVE

PART SIX

PART SEVEN

PART EIGHT

PART NINE

PART TEN




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Posted: 7 years ago
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this made me cry 😭
lovely one
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This is amazing..
Poor Omkara..he's helpless...
I'm feeling so bad for Gauri..
Can't wait to read the next part..
Continue soonish..
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Good one
A very different take
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This is really different story. Looking forward for more. How could the Oberoi be so cruel. What they thought, is it easy for Gauri to leave Omkara? Please update soon. Feeling bad for Rikara.
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That was such an emotional update...
RiKara 😭
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you made me cry dear...
Poor Ri is the one who suffered a lot in this vanvaas

Loved it
Pls update soon
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Nice one
Feeling very bad for Gauri! You made me cry😒
Looking forward to read more
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Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

this made me cry 😭

lovely one
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Awww... I am sorry dear for making you cry... But I can promise you a story full of love and care
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Thank you all for liking my version for the story guys. I am also sorry for making it a sad one. For me their intensity is their forte and that is what I love about them. So I had to write an intense one for them and I am really happy that you all are liking it... So Rikaraland ke wasiyon gear up for this one... 😉

SHORT 2

"Gauri itni subah subah kya kar rahi hai tu an irritated Anika asked her. "Bhaujaye, vo hum puja kar rahe the. Humari aadat hai, hum humesha subah apne kamre mein... she was unable to complete. "Toh yeh tera karma ha kya? Gauri itni subah subah kya nautanki hai yeh Annika said. "Bhaujayee hum toh... "kya hum toh, Gauri yeh Oberoi mansion nahi hai ki yahan ek kamre mein koi kuch karega toh kisi aur ko pata nahi chalega. Gauri felt bad but still decided to avoid it "Sorry bhaujayee, hum khayal rakhenge.

A week passed by and everyday she woke up, got ready and went to the idol in the house. All she prayed was the betterment of the family and her Omkaraji's happiness. And every time she looked at the puja bell the only thing she remembered was her Omkaraji's irritated face which gave her day the cutest start.

Waqt jaise thehar gaya hai yahi,

Har taraf ek ajeeb udasi hai,

Bekarari ka eisa Alam hai,

Jism tanha hai, rooh pyasi hai

" Omkara, puttar main ek puja rakhwayi hai ghar pe. Ab kyunki tu hi hai yahan toh tu hi aaja his dadi requested. "Par dadi Gauri ke bina mai kaise Om said denying. " Gauri humesha ghar ka bhala hi sochti hai beta, tu aaja she again requested. "Theek hai dadi main aata hoon he oblidged. "shabash, yeh pehen le aur aaja she handed him clothes and left. Omkara opened the box and saw a peach coloured kurta and a dhoti, which took him back to the memory lane.

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"Yeh dadi baar baar dhoti kyun de deti hain mujhe an irritated Omkara waked to the room. "Kyun aapko dhoti peheni nahi aati Gauri said hiding her laugh. "Haan haan has loh, tum bas haso. Par ab yeh dhoti kaise pehnunga main he said worring. "Loh batao The Omkara Singh Oberoi, jo itne mashoor painter hain, unh eek dhoti pehenni nahi aati she said mocking. "Zayada daant dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Ek toh mai yahan pareshaan hun aur tumhe mazaak soojh raha hai he complaint. "Achcha baba theek hai hum nahi hasenge. Layiye dhoti hume dijie hum pehna dete hain aapko She said taking the dhoti from his hand. "Tumhe dhoti pehenni aati hai? he questioned. "Hume kya kya aata hai yeh aapko abhi pata nahi hai Gauri said. "Ab tum dikhaogi nahi toh kaise pata chalega he said raising his eyebrow with a smile.

She took the dhoti and started wrapping it around him and when she had to tuck the last part she handed it to him. "Ab kya isse pakad ke rakhna hai puri puja mein? he asked mischievously. "Nahi, isse tuck karna hai andar she said shying. "Gauri tuck andar hi karna hota hai, tum karo mujhe nahi aata Omkara knew what he was doing. "Jee nahi, aap khud tuck karenge. Hum jaa rahe hai tayaariyan dekhne saying this she left. "Yeh paglet chiraiyaa kisi din mujhe ghayal karke hi chodegi he said to himself.

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"Aaj kaun pehnaega yeh dhoti mujhe Gauri he said


Teri Surat Abb Ek Pal
Kyun Najar Se Hatati Nahi
Raat Din Toh Kat Jate Hain,
Umar Tanhaa Katati Nahi

"Achooo, Bhaujayee Achooo, yeh kya ho Achooo raha hai ghar mein, Achooo she was as usually suffering from her infection. " Offo Gauri, itna kyu cheenk rahi ho Anika said again in an irritated tone. "Bahujayee aapko pata toh hai , vo Achoo hume infection hai Achooo. "Areey haan, par sorry Gauri mai yeh safayi nahi rukwa sakti hoon, pata hai naa tumhe Shivaay ko gandagi se kitni chidh hai. "Haan bhoujayee, koi baat nahi Gauri agreed. "Kya hua Anika? Shivaay came. " Shivaay dekhiye naa yeh Gauri ki allergy Anika complained. "Hmmm this was all. She was shocked at their reaction. Were they the same Shivaay Anika who left the house? She came here to at least find peace but...

"Haan maa achoo Gauri said picking up her phone. " Maa nahi Gauri, Richa. Voh auntiji.. she said. "Kya hua Achoo maa ko she replied worriedly. "Voh auntiji achanak se behosh ho gyi hain she completed. "kya.. kya bol rahi hai tu she said holding her tears. "pata nahi kya hua Gauri, doctors bhi bol rahe hain ki unki condition bohot serious hai... tu jaldi aaja Richa informed her. "Haan hum aa rahe hain abhi Gauri said.

She tried calling Omkara but there were no answers. " Shayad kisi kaam mein busy honge she consoled herself saying this. " Bhaujayee maa ki tabiyaat bohot kharab hai she said crying. " kya hua auntiji ko? Anika asked casually eating peanuts. " Pata nahi bhaujayee, Richa bata rahi thi ki maa achanak se behosh ho gyi hai. Humne Omkaraji ko bhi phone milaya par voh utha nahi rahe hai. Hum jaa rahe hain, aap unko bata dijiega. " Haan Gauri tu jaa, main Omkara ko bata dungi Anika answered and Gauri ran, packed her bags and rushed out of her house.

"Rudra tum aa gye? Kaha the tum itne din. Mujhe pata chala that you landed four days ago? Jhanvi asked Rudra. "Main apne Shivaay bhaiya se milne gaya tha Rudra said jerking Jhanvi's hand. "Kaisa hai mera Shivaay? Pinky asked. "Voh theek hai choti maa Rudra said. "Tumhara dimaag kharab ho gya hai Rudra, kyu gaye tum use milne Tej busted. "Kyunki voh mere bade bhai hai. Aur mere bade bhai se mai bohot pyaar karta hun Rudra returned it back. Tej did not say anything and left to his room with Jhanvi. After all went, Omkara went near Rudra and asked "Gauri kaise hai Rudra?. "Chulbul bhabhi kaise hai yeh mujhe kaise pata hoga. Yeh toh aapko pata hona chahiye, voh toh aapke saath rehti hain he replied. "Rudra main mazaak ke mood mein nahi hoon he said feeling irritated. "Main mazzak nahi kar raha hoon O. Sach mein mujhe nahi pata Bhabhi kahan hai he replied. "Kya hua O? he asked confusingly. Om told him everything and they both ran towards Shivaay's house for answers.

"Maa uth naa, Maa please uth naa dekh teri gauri yahan aa gyi hai. Uth dekh mai yahi hoon Maa. Ankhen khol apni maa she said to a lifeless body lying just in front of her. "Gauri samhaal apne aapko Richa said. "Richa bol na maa ko uthne ke liye... Dekh kaise aankhein band karke soyi hui hai. Utha isse, bol ki hum aa gye hai She was not ready to accept the truth. "Gauri, sun meri baat... Auntiji ab nahi uthengi. Jaane de unko Risha said jerking Gauri. "Maa... mat le jao meri maa ko please she cried. "Gauri jaane de auntiji ko Risha holded Gauri up as the other people took her mother away.

"Omkaraji kahan hai aap... iss samay hume aapki zaroorat hai she cried almost banging her knees to the floor.


Chah Ke Bhi Naa Kuchh Kah Saku Tujhse Main
Chah Ke Bhi Naa Kuchh Kah Saku Tujhse Main
Dard Kaise Karu Main Bayaan
Main Yahan Tu Wahan, Jindagi Hai Kahan


"Shivaay, Gauri kaha hai? Omkara asked Shivaay worriedly. "Mujhe kaise pata hoga Kaha hai Gauri? Shivaay said in a confused tone. "Tujhe nahi pata hoga toh kise pata hoga. Voh tere paas aayi thi Shivaay Omkara was really shocked on Shivaay's behaviour. "Haan but Anika told me that she left the house few days back Shivaay said shrugging. Omkara turned to Anika now "Bhabhi, Gauri kahan hai he asked her. "Voh toh Bareilly gayi hai, uaki maa ki tabiyat kharab thi toh... she said shrugging. "Aur aapne mujhe bataya nahi he again asked. "Haan main bhool gyi thi she said in the most uninterested way. "Bhabhi how could you... Omkara shouted.

"Omkara, behave yourself. Don't forget you are talking to my wife Shivaay said moving beside Anika. "And what about my wife? Maine socha tha ki voh yahan safe rahegi. Maine socha tha ki uske bade bhaiya aur bhabhi uska khayaal rakhenge. Lekin nahi, yahan toh kisi ne ye bhi nahi socha ki voh akeli Bareilly jaa rahi hai. Bareilly shivaay, Bareilly. Bhul gaya tu Kaali Thakur ab bhi vahi rehta hai he said. "Haan toh use sochna chaiye tha jaane se pehle he replied. "Kya? Tu yeh bol raha hai Shivaay. I cannot believe this... Before he could complete his phone rang. " Yes he answered. "Omkaraji hum Richa bol Rahe hain. Voh Kaali Thakur Gauri ko the lady on the line spoke. "Kya? Omkara was shocked. After hanging up the call he turned to Shivaay "Bade bhai hone ka kya farz nibhaya hai Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi... Waah saying this he left the house to get his chiraiyya back to him and this time without any hassels.

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So here I end this short... hope you all enjoy it. Do tell me your views and suggestions... Even your chappals, andas and tamatars too are awaited.😃😃




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