Black And Red (13 Parts Complete) Omkara And Gauri FF - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Wait I am confused if she is alive why didn't she try to find Om :( Why did she stay away?

Poor Om he is so heartbroken but he still has faith that she is alive!

I really hope he will recognize her

Hello, sorry to confuse you, she believes he is dead!
I have just updated the next part so hopefully that will make things clearer.
Soon i promise!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 11-
Gauri froze, how had he known her name? Then realisation hit her, his name was Omkara, he called her Gauri, could it be that her Omkara was alive. She had to go to him and quickly, surely fate would not play such a nasty game with her, she ran as fast as her legs would allow her to up the stairs

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Gauri stilled as she saw Omkara about to hang himself from the spinning fan in his room "Omkara no" she shouted
He stopped and turned to face her, his eyes a raw red and tears streaming down his face "No, dont stop me now, let me join you up there please, I let you down Gauri, I touched another woman" his voice broke as he sobbed again

Gauri ran forward and tugged at his hands, "Please just get down Omkara, im real, it is me, look, see, I came here as Gayatri because I didnt want to be found, please just"
Omkara stepped down and looked intensely at Gauri, "You're, you're real" he stuttered

She nodded "Fate brought us back together, dont tear us apart now, I thought you were dead, and clearly thought the same" her eyes were teary, so overcome with the fact that Omkara was alive and infront of her
She reached her hand up and cupped his cheek

He leaned down, resting his forehead against hers "Its so good to have you here"
She wrapped her arms around his waist, leaning her head on his chest and closed her eyes.
It felt like finding shelter after a storm, his arms around her offered her solace from the months of pain and loneliness.

"Hey Gauri, the papers said you were dead, how are you, I looked for you everyday"
Gauri smiled "Kaali told me he killed you so I shot him and escaped, I dont know if hes alive or not, I chose to live a life you and my mother would be proud of, where I was always happy, so I did and your brothers asked me to come into your life to teach you how to be happy, offered me a lot of money, and I took it because I wanted to open a gallery, like you had always wanted" she blushed under his intense gaze

"You really wanted to do that for me" he asked in disbelief
"Yes" she nodded
"Theres just one thing I have to be honest about"
Gauri nodded "They say the heart grows fonder when someone isnt around and I think over these months I stopped seeing you as a friend"

Gauri stepped back "Thats okay, ill leave"
"No, no I mean, I think im falling for you Gauri"

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Shivaay and Rudra's eyes widened when Omkara walked into the mansion
"Om is all okay"
Omkara smiled
Shivaay and Rudra looked awkwardly at eachother, it was very unlike Om to smile
They smiled back slowly
"Gayatri worked her magic that quickly wow" said Rudra

Gauri stepped out from behind Omkara and linked her fingers through his
"Heh, whats going on" asked Shivaay
"Id like to introduce you to Gauri"
"But bro she said her name was Gayatri"
Omkara laughed "I know, but this is Gauri"
Rudra lowered his voice "Pagal hai kya"

Shivaay shook his head and whispered to Rudra "No, hes in love"
Rudra nodded knowingly
Rudra and Shivaay walked forward to greet her, Gauri put her hands together but took Shivaay's blessings and he stood back in shock

"Anyway, were leaving for a while, thanks for all your help"
Rudra pouted "So Gauri returns and you forget us"
Omkara rubbed his hair "Ill never forget you guys, we just need a break"
Shivaay and Rudra nodded understandingly, hugged Omkara and Gauri and told them to take care

With that they turned and walked out of the house, ready to start afresh.

Four updates in one day, yay! I hope you're all enjoying this so far and thank you all for still reading even with my terrible updating schedule!
I did consider ending it here but there's still a little bit more for Om and Gauri to get through until they're in love and ending it here just didnt seem right.
Anyway I hope you're all well!:)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for pm
Really lovely at last they ate together
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: chils

Thanks for pm

Really lovely at last they ate together

No problem, thank you:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Read all four updates
It was so sad to see a broken Kara

But finally now he found Ri and they will receive much needed happiness

Very good story you have got
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: -Rehanna-

Hello, sorry to confuse you, she believes he is dead!
I have just updated the next part so hopefully that will make things clearer.
Soon i promise!


Oh now everything is clear ! Thank you for updating that fast :D
Will read the next chapters and comment then👏


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Oh BrokenKara broke my heart😭 So sad how lost he was without her and how sad he once when he thought he touched another girl...Kara is the cutest

And Ri... she was so happy to see that he was alive, that the one man she truly loved was well and was pinning after her the way she was yearning for him👏👏
Wonderfully written
Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Read all four updates

It was so sad to see a broken Kara

But finally now he found Ri and they will receive much needed happiness

Very good story you have got

Hello,
Thank you so much, sorry for the sad parts!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm


Oh now everything is clear ! Thank you for updating that fast :D
Will read the next chapters and comment then👏


Edited:

Oh BrokenKara broke my heart😭 So sad how lost he was without her and how sad he once when he thought he touched another girl...Kara is the cutest

And Ri... she was so happy to see that he was alive, that the one man she truly loved was well and was pinning after her the way she was yearning for him👏👏
Wonderfully written

Hello,
Thank you so much!
Im glad all is understood now, no problem!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
All the chapters were fantastic
Loved it a lot
Finally they found each other..and now omkara will be normal..I hope that monstar kali Is dead..want a happy ending for them
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

All the chapters were fantastic

Loved it a lot
Finally they found each other..and now omkara will be normal..I hope that monstar kali Is dead..want a happy ending for them
Continue soon

Aw, thank you!
I will update soon!

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