Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi (6 Parts Complete) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

I initially thought this was gonna be a sad story with unrequited love or something, but thought of giving it a try nonetheless. And Gosh! It's amazing! This is far from being sad, and in fact makes me super happy! You manage to set up a scene and make it super cute and romantic with very few words, which I think is really commendable. Keep up the good work!

And yes, update soon!

Hello, maybe my title was a bit deceiving? Thank you for giving it a go anyway and im so glad it turned out to be something you ended up enjoying.
Thanks for the comment and I will update as soon as I can
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5-
Shivaay was about to press his lips to Anika's again when 3 reporters ran over
"Is it true that because you are an orphan you stay with Shivaay for his money"
Shivaay jumped up quickly

"Don't you dare talk about her that way"
Another reporter smiled "What you gonna do, kill me like you killed that innocent man"
Anika raised her hand slapping the woman around the face "Shivaay isnt a murderer"

"Oh yeah, wheres your proof"
Anika's breathing was laboured in her anger "I will find it and when I do you will be the first to know"
"Suppose its better than throwing your body around for his money, this time he might get something valuable from you"

Anika's jaw dropped as the reporters walked away, was that really what people thought of her? Well she was allowing Shivaay to kiss her when there was no promise to love her.
She went to grab the reporter but Shivaay's strong arm around her waist tugged her back

A gloved hand placed money in each reporter's hand "You did good"
"But madam why would you want to defame your son like that"
Pinky smiled "That woman will never be good enough for Shivaay, the sooner she knows it the better"

Anika was shaking in anger, Shivaay turned her to face him "Anika, dont let what they said get to you"
"They are right, we never should have kissed and it will never happen again, as you said we're friends and thats all we will ever be"

Her words were like ice as she pulled away from him, he felt cold without the warmth her body always offered him
"I need to find a place to live that isnt your home, I even lived there for 8 years when you weren't there"

"But you're family, come on Anika, you cant let some dumb reporter change your life" he went to grab her hand but she pulled it back immediately
"Take me to your house please, I am tired"

He nodded, feeling helpless that the woman he loved was moving further and further away from him and there was nothing he could do about it. He followed her to the car, her eyes glazed over


"Anika if you would just hear me out"
"I just want to go back please Shivaay, I dont want to talk and I dont want to listen"
He started the car then with an exasperated sigh he stopped it
"No, I wont have you leave me this way, I have lived 8 years without you, I wont live anymore"

Short update again, I know!
Do let me know what you think!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 6-
"Shivaay, I just want to-" his finger on her lips stopped her from continuing her sentence
"No, enough, now I will talk and you will listen, I spent 8 years in prison, never being close to you, so fine if you love someone else thats fine, if you wanna live somewhere else fine, but you're not leaving me, not again, you have no idea how hard those 8 years were, you were the one and only person keeping me alive when I wanted to give up"

"Shivaay, please dont talk like that, you know I could never leave you, you know I"
He nodded "I know, love me as a friend"
She opened her mouth to say something then stopped
"What made you fall in love with this man"
"Well, I, he makes me laugh and cares for me and I have known him since I was a child"

He nodded "I want to meet him, see if hes right for you"
"If hes not" she asked
"Then, thats it, if he isn't the best man in the world he isnt good enough for you"
Anika neared him slightly, like a moth to a flame her body was drawn to his

"What about you, are you good enough for me"
"Not even close" his eyes followed hers, her hand rose to rest on his cheek
"I think you're good enough"
He smiled "Im glad you think so, because im not sure how long I can keep away from you"

"Nobody says you have to"
His lips were on hers, hungry and full of passion
She was now on his lap, her arms wound around his neck
Breaking away from the kiss he closed his eyes
"Its you, you have to know that right, its always been you"

"Really" her heart was racing, so loud she wondered if he could hear it
He nodded
"Do you feel it to" her hand went to his chest, like their hearts were beating in sync with eachother
He nuzzled her neck

"I really love you Anika"
She smiled "I love you Shivaay"
She squeezed his cheeks making him laugh
"You really are one of a kind Anika, how did you find it within you to wait"
"When something is really good, its worth the wait, there was never a question in my mind that you were the one I wanted"

He twisted her, so her legs were on top of his, her body placed directly in the middle of his legs and her back resting upon his chest
His hand stroking through her hair
She closed her eyes, finally finding solace

Because the truth of the matter was that anywhere would be home if they were together
And that two arms can be more of a home then a building with four walls

And in complete silence, after admitting their undying love, they laid in eachothers arms, in a car on the side of the street
The perfect end to a perfect date



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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Such a brilliant story

Hello, thanks for commenting!
Thank you, im glad you liked it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: JULIEL

That was fantastic.

Hey, thanks for commenting!
Thank you again, im glad you liked it!

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