Shivika SS : 'The Edge Of Thorns.' IMP NOTE (PG 22) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: elysianights

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Hey! Ritzy ❤️
The updatr was amazing as always. I really felt bad for Shivaay, poor lad he wasn't able achieve his dreams but still as for him, family happiness comes first so he tried to adjust to his new job but eventually he started enjoying it and besides Saumya was his other way to achieve his goals.

Well I'm really not interested in her husband anymore I swear 😆 because Now I know he was not Shivaay. But still really looking forward to see what's store in the future, what happend to annika's husband and how shivaay and Annika will progress in their relation.

But yes one question which is struck in my mind is that are you going to make it a happy ending no? Happy ending means Shivaay and annika saath saath? Or it would be like your other story?

And yes my studies are going well, just winter vacation is going on so trying to get some spare time for myself amongst my studies. :)

Love,
-Anya.


Thank you so much Anya.
Trust me you'll have a bit more interest as the story progresses.
It will be a happy ending in this one.
Definitely happy.
They're ending up together no matter what.
Do well with studies.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Ohh so Shivaay is the one investigating the case. Plz do PM me next updates.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanka_22

Ohh so Shivaay is the one investigating the case. Plz do PM me next updates.


Thank you so much for commenting
Will pm you
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Posted: 7 years ago
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:Chapter Three:Midnight Ramblings:






"I needed her to stop. Needed not to hear the pain in her voice--to see the way she was twisting the pocketbook strap. If she kept talking, she might break down and tell me everything."



- Wally Lamb, I Know This Much Is True





He wrapped his hand around the cup filled with pipping hot 'Kahva' and blew out the brim to make the liquid edible. After he had taken a big enough gulp he looked above at the surroundings in front of him.

The house was warm and had an old aura to it. The furniture seemed at least a good fifty years old, the fireplace was pretty worn out and the living room had a minimal amount of showpieces that consisted of mainly old lamps and lanterns.

He took another sip and moved his gaze on the woman in front of him. She sat there holding her own cup and rotating her index finger over the brim. She was dressed in a plain lemon salwar - kameez and sat there with a shawl wrapped around herself. She was breathtaking if he had to sum it up, the woman had made electricity jolt through his nerves when she'd accidentally touched his neck to take off his ruined coat.

The chill of the atmosphere had left a red hue on her fair skin. After almost a minute she looked up at him only to find him staring back . He diverted his gaze back to his cup feeling extremely conscious about his behaviour. He rubbed the back of his neck to avoid looking embarrassed and finally spoke.

"I'm sorry to be here at this hour Ms Rai. I- I couldn't do anything the storm got pretty nasty out there." He stated hesitantly.

"It's- Okay, I'm sorry I didn't even ask your name. How silly of me officer." She spoke in a meek voice.

"It's okay Ms Rai. I'm Shivaay Oberoi, I'm the head investigative officer in Kashmir police." he introduced himself immediately.

"It's good to meet you... Ummm... Why exactly did you want to meet me?" She finally looked up to his eyes and spoke.

"I know it might have been a shock to get a call all those years later. I couldn't be more... Sorry for not contacting you. I have read your case file Ms Rai. I want to reopen the case again." He said and his breath hitched after he looked at her slightly wet orbs.

"Why now? It's been eight years now. Back then when he left... vanished, I had filed a report immediately but no one can find anything. The case got closed and I... Somehow managed." She told him correcting herself from spilling her own thoughts that may be highly wrong.

"I'm not sure how to put this Ms Rai, I don't think you have any idea about this but my father was Tej Oberoi, the one who was the investigative officer of your case. Yours was the only one which he couldn't conclude. He died shortly after your case was closed in an encounter. " he said looking away from her. While she looked at him with a pained expression and then finally back at her lap.

"Your father was a good man. I remember his guilt ridden face when he had told me he couldn't find anything that would make him conclude anything. I was... Devastated, cried till my eyes hurt." He gazed back at the brim of his cup trying to hide the slight formation of tears in his eyes.

"I can understand, it must have been difficult. Ms Rai I want you to let me reopen the case. I know it'll be hard for you, to relive the trauma but I need to form a conclusion. It was my father's regret that he couldn't do anything. Let me help you, Please." he completed his request with a small pleading please.

"You can. It's not going to be anymore agonising, he's already gone and I know whatever happened to him he isn't coming back. I'll let you reopen the case Mr. Oberoi." She kept fidgeting with the hem of her kurta.

"Thank You so much, I'm really grateful to you Ms... "

"Anika." She looked up and finally lifted her lips in a thin lip tight smile, to which he smiled back.

"Ummm... I think I should leave. It's pretty late I'll have to drive back before morning. I've got a duty from 7 am. Goodbye."

He spoke and Anika nodded. Getting up from the place where he was sitting he nodded politely at her and turned around. She walked ahead of him to assist him with the door. With a slight force she pulled the door open to shiver badly. The storm had raged extremely and her front porch was covered in snow completely.

"Y-You can stay here if you want it's pretty bad out there. If you're not uncomfortable..." She offered him to stay in her house. She had plenty of room and letting him go in this unlikely weather condition would not be feasible.

"I can drive back, Anika, it's no big deal." he said.

"You can certainly, but you shouldn't it's risky. I'm not forcing you just telling you it's unsafe.." She said and looked up at him. He gazed outside the window and heaved a sigh.

"Okay, I'll stay till the storm dies down."

And with this their fates were sealed.
Forever.

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75




Author's Note...😃


Hello People!

I hope all you guys are fine. I'm back with another part of the story and I do want to know if you guys liked it. The chapter may have errors because I ain't proof reading. So this is the shivika meet and I'll update the next one soon I promise. I love all you guys who commented.

This one is dedicated to @jaansahiba, @sosweetsumi and @elysianights (My lovely Anya).
Do show the love guys I promise it will be better from the next chapter this is nice enough story just give it a fair chance. Old readers do give some acknowledgment about the chapters you like it or you don't or even that you're not interested I'd like to hear from you guys again.


Lots of love
Ritzy
Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Heya Ritzy!!
First of all thank you so so much for dedicating this update to me, it do means alot or me and sorry for not liking the post actually IF isn't letting me like any post here so consider this comment as my like.

Anyways coming to the update, trust me I was waiting for it eagerly, like seriously man I was starving and glad that you updated it and it was worth the wait because I totally loved the way they were so nervous meeting each other. Well this had to be the actual response. Someone came and is asking you that can he reopen her lost husband case after 8 years, it feels terrible. Really feeling bad for Annika man! Hoping that the void in her life will be diminished by Shivaay Soon.

Do update it soon, waiting eagerly for the next update.

Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey,
Great plot👏
8 years of pain .Too tough for a person. I m dying to know , what it was , that she was left all alone. More than that I m eager to know , how is shivaay gonna lead her out of this grief.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey, sorry I haven't gotten around to commenting on this story. But I've read all the chapters, and gosh, they're incredible! I love your way of writing, and the plot in itself is very new and refreshing. Waiting to read more, lots of love❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The plot is interesting...With Shivaay staying back at Anika's ...I think he will relate more with her agony
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ok so I came to knw ur name n it's such a beautiful story . Plz continue it as soon as possible n thnks for the pm. The story is fresh n intriguing n keeps me wondering wat wud happen 😊

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