Shivika OS: Power - Page 3

Yes sometimes great wall of SSO too needs someone to give strength to assure that everything will be alright.

Loved the situation and of loved ur piece of writing.

This is going to bmmed immediately.

Thank u for ur pm😳

Totally loved reading it. How much I love you for writing this 🤪

Loved the various transitions of SSO - from Shivaay's realization to the caring hubby, to being the guilty billu & the lost child at the end seeking sotrength from Anika. The understanding wife consoling the the broken SSO in her arms. How can you portray Shivika so perfectly each & every time?

Each one shot of yours is just this beautiful 😊

The way you describe all the emotions I can actually picture it infront of my eyes. Now I want a scene like this in the show. You've raised my expectations Mush 😒

You never fail to bring out that purity & the very essence of Shivika's relationship. The imperfectly perfect couple that they're. Can't stop admiring them & your writing skills

Love ❤️

-Aparna

RESERVED HOLY SHIT

Do you kow what that word means? if you don't, let me elaborate:

the way he absorbed the littlest and smallest movement of Anika had my heart do a little dance.

When he realized how he had been behaving with her all this while and felt plagued, tugged my heart as well as gave me great satisfaction to see that he might go overboard when knowing how his temper controls him, but when he realizes it, he feels disgusted about himself and tried all the possible way to make up for it.

When he even noticed how she was wearing a non-winter-ish cloth in this cold weather and was in the balcony had my heart melt..

when he went behind her to wrap HIS jacket around her had me reading that one line over and over again and I just let it sink just how much this man cares Anika. one special mention within this part is that he didn't even bother searching for HER cloth. he just grabbed his sweater and made her wear it...gosh I will be lying if i don't say that i'm a puddle of emotions right now oh my god!! Mush you just included this one small gesture and look what it has done to me...

his defeated and ashamed face when anika questioned him what's wrong..."Yaha dekhiye meri taraf" awww!!!! MUSH!!!! dsakjhkjdshf... it was anika's herat that sliced into two but it was mine that pained like shit!!! god i'm not even seeing him on the screen...i'm just reading an OS and this is how i am feeling...and i'm not even half way through!!!

Anika's whole lecture on how he can never fail, his traits as a person, as a businessman, as a brother and finally as a husband...I wanted to whistle for Anika (and ultimately for you since you came up with that dialogue LOL) twirl her to let her know that she's the winner for giving the best and most apt speech when needed the most!

That forehead kiss!! I DIED MUSH!!! I DIED!!! all he did was press his lips against her forehead and i felt like i haven't been THIS happy th entire day today. SO MANY EMOTIONS WAS REFLECTED IN THAT ONE KISS!! What shivay felt after naika's speech was justified and so the kiss followed. but the emotions anika felt OH GOD! It was so perfect. I love you for this. yes just because anika is being strong for Shivay doesn't mean she never felt weak. just because she was able to supress it all to herself doesn't mean she's not feeling anything. its obvious that she was feeling that way because of the way shivay was talking to her. and so the way her lips trembled and the relief and peace she felt when he went forward to place that peck on her forehead was so so real mush! I just can't describe how beautiful this whole scene was...

and then comes the BESTESTESTEST part...Anika takes Shivay in her arms and tries to sooth his pain andgives him strength..."Shh i'm right here" awww!!! GODDD!!!

"I'm scared"...you know what makes this scene unique and most beautiful? it's because it was SHIVAY who said that he was scared...that he was feeling vulnerable... that he was feeling weak and afraid of what to happen and what the future hold for them...the uncertainty was scaring the shit out of him and he couldn't hold it back anymore and held the only support tightly and asked for reassurance...

And Anika being the bestest wife massages his head and pulls him close and tell him that as long as they are on this TOGETHER, everything will be fine...

Mushfika you have won my heart with this one shot!! mujhe bass yahi kehna hai... i don't think i can say anything anymore...you're so LOVEEE!!

Mush will kill me for this but count me in!! I want more kyun ki my greedy heart doesn't want to listen 😳

are you freaking out of your mind??!!! can you please tell me how else would you have written with your "Full essence" in this story?? how many times did I tell you not to talk Bullshit about your stories?? Achha chalo thik hai you feel that way about wriiting right? well too bad, because it doesn't matter how you feel. it's the READERS who decide how your OS are! so leave that to us to judge. And if you have read the comments, you already know how wrong you are mush! 🥱 so shut the hell up and let me reread this story for another million times because i don't know if i'll stop reading it anytime soon

This is like the perfect analysis of shivay's emotion in this OS. after reading this, I feel like you know how Mush makes analysis posts after a good episode and points out something very small of a gesture by the characters and give words to emotions behind it, you did just that but not for an episode but her OS. So many different angles from which we can look at Shivay's "I'm scared". This OS and your analysis really made up for what i felt amiss in the episode where shivay broke down after saving the kids from the kidnappers. Take a bow. it is so beautiful dear!