RiKara SS -Break Ke Baad- Part 6-Page 34. (24-12) - Page 9

It was unexpected!!

Awesome.

Your story line is very good

Hehe I like it! It's really cute! Om not totally convinced but like Anika said.. they've lit the fire.. now they need to make it a little more convincing . Haha.. looking forward for more!

Yay! Next part will be up tomorrow.

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

loved both the updates so much.

I am excited for the next part.

Yes. One for all and all for one. Rudy is just classic Rudy.

Gauri wasn't even sure who it was but after the slip ups, she knew. Om isn't convinced but he doesn't believe he is in love either.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

👏

LOVED IT

😆😆The entire Family plans to make Om realize that he loves Gauri and that he shouldn't let her go

Rudy nailed it-as always my Favorite

Loved how confused Gauri got when the call was picked up and Om's reaction in front of Gauri was nice- he didn't show much but later on when he was alone he knew something was fishy but he didn't want to take the risk- He doesn't want to lose his Gauri❤️

LOVED both parts sooo much dear and can't wait to see what you have in store for RiKara😳

The whole gang together once again but Om has a long way to go.
I like to keep everyone guessing.

Oh my Ru. Could not write a story without him. Typical SSO.


Well Om wasn't expecting anyone to pick the call since he cornered her suddenly. Once the call was picked up, he was taken aback to join the dots, specially the wife to be part.

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

That is interesting

The gang is helping her with her jatadhari

Unexpected one, but good one

Ru is always a sweetheart... SSO can anticipate any scenario and act accordingly

Ru thinks om not smart enough to find loop holes, is that true?

You're welcome. I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: sarroo

Nice.. thanks for the pm

Yes. This time everything is real. They had to improvise with Rudy. Yay! I loved writing their dialogues.

Bechain Kara is in for the ride of his life.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Oh God..!! The whole Oberoi family is with Ri..sab milke Om ki band bajayega..I never imagined the nakli fiance could be Rudy..it just blew my mind...but I thoroughly enjoyed ShivAniRu's planning...Gauri was just going with the flow...
Bechain Kara is love...he still cannot believe Gauri is getting married...can't wait for the next updates..continue soonish..

Its just super super fun while reading n loved to the core waiting for next part eagerly