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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
This was so intense
Omkara still being commitment phobic
But Gauri is getting him out if it
Only she can

Yes only Gauri can tug him out of his fears ... And she is doing do for their future ❤️

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Annie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

POORUU🤗

This was deep, intense and soulful. Om being the commitment-phobic he is and Gauri his better half <3 It was extremely well-written, I felt the her need and I felt his fear and insecurities and that's all because you're a great writer, MashAllah :)

And Aayat

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
That was amazing loved it so much.
Fabulous.

Thank you 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: _Annie_
POORUU🤗
This was deep, intense and soulful. Om being the commitment-phobic he is and Gauri his better half <3 It was extremely well-written, I felt the her need and I felt his fear and insecurities and that's all because you're a great writer, MashAllah :)

And Aayat

Ann 🤗

Where did you disappear???

I reviewed one chapter of your story ... One to go ...

About Aayat, Tasnim put that song in my head ... And I feel the lyrics suit them ... She is more than just a woman or even his wife ... A person who is changing him little by little ... Kaayam woh ho gayi hai riwayat ki tarah 😳 ... I wanted to sketch a Husband wife relationship here ... Usually couples do go through a lot of thinking and over thinking about conceiving a baby and here adding to it is a fearful Omkara ... Both of them want to take responsibility for each other.

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
Passionate and beautiful
Now chota O is on the way

Very good

Loved it

Thank you 😳

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Annie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Ann 🤗
Where did you disappear???
I reviewed one chapter of your story ... One to go ...
About Aayat, Tasnim put that song in my head ... And I feel the lyrics suit them ... She is more than just a woman or even his wife ... A person who is changing him little by little ... Kaayam woh ho gayi hai riwayat ki tarah 😳 ... I wanted to sketch a Husband wife relationship here ... Usually couples do go through a lot of thinking and over thinking about conceiving a baby and here adding to it is a fearful Omkara ... Both of them want to take responsibility for each other.

Yea I saw that...will reply soon😳 Well, not disappear but I'm down with fever from a few days so that's why :)

Tasnim did a good job putting the song in ur head!😉😆 And you did a better job penning it down🤗 I completely agree with your words...this is a huge responsibility and not all rainbows and butterflies, this is a decision which needs a lot of communication between couples...glad you showed it :)

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Please take care Ann ... Theek se khaao, aaraam Karo and have your medicines on time ... Recover soon ... The weather is terrible here too ... But this time i am saved 😕

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Annie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Please take care Ann ... Theek se khaao, aaraam Karo and have your medicines on time ... Recover soon ... The weather is terrible here too ... But this time i am saved 😕

Yea I think the weather has caught on me😆 Thanks Pooru...I do feel better than before😃 take care of yourself too🤗