Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44) - Page 22

Loved it

wanna C Gauri kaise sambhalti hai apna Om ko..

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

I am very sad that the story soon will end but I hope you will continue with something new you have a wonderful talent dear :D

Still loving Rudra How can I not😆funniest character

Poor Gauri would have loved to dance with her Husband but he didn't noticed.

Loved Jealous Kara when Ajay came , Poor Rudra I bet his hand hurt a lot

Felt bad for Om when Gauri said he wasn't romantic damn guuurl he tries but you are not ready ;)

Can't wait to see what happens next

When will they finally Kiss? Will they dance?

So many questions ;)

AND OF COURSE my favorite Moment: The towel bit ;) Naughty Ri couldn't help but stare at her husband, I mean who wouldn't ;))

Sadly they were disturbed

Update soon🤗

Me too. I enjoyed writing this but I didn't intend to make it too long, that's why I moved the story along pretty quickly. I think I'll stick to OS. People are constantly messaging me saying my updates are too short. I mean I write 1000+ words. I used to struggle to make the word count for my essays, back in the days.

I have enjoyed writing Rudra's lines, as I keep saying. I wish they gave him more screen space.

But Pappu can't dance baby! I can't believe I wrote Ajay in this. He was such a leechad. The hand scene was inspired by this movie years ago starring Kajol where she plays footsie under the table and gets her uncle instead and he says 'bachi woh mera pair hai.'

She just said it because she didn't want to talk about him.

I haven't even written the next part so I dunno what'll happen.

Towel romance. I was gonna write him with just a towel but likhte likhte main hi na mar jau. P.S. Have we ever seen Om with a towel on the show? I have only seen him take things from the cupboard.

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

Poor Om felt hurt abt romantic comment of Gauri. Rudy is all time fav, helping his sis and bro in law for a patch up.

She didn't know he was behind her. I think part of me still writes Rudy as Om's brother. That's why he is always helping him and indirectly Hauri.

Originally posted by: priyadil

wow! nice update

om is upset with Ri!😲

what will Ri do now?

will they both be able to sleep without each other?

Romance in air?????!!!!

Thank you for all updates in short time

waiting for the next

He is a little hurt.

Ri is getting charged slowly. 😆

You're always welcome dear. I just wanted the faux separation to be over. I'm hoping the next chapter will be a romantic one. Bohot ho Gaye jhagde.

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Toh Gauri was checking out her husband..why not..?? After all he's too yum...I could imagine Omkara in a shirt with the first three button undone...haaye..!!

Oh..so Gauri expected him to dance..when he refused she was upset...as you wrote about Gauri thinking her husband isn't romantic at all, can we get some romance..?? Kara need to show her ki sharmaji deewarein woh gira sakte hain...I loved Rudy as always...

And thanks for the PinKara moments..Pinky is cute while doing damadji jaap... 😆

Who'd have imagined such a body inside those striped shirts, which I hate! Who designs his wardrobe! That Dilpreet pink suit was the worst! The shirt was inspired by his white shirt in the intro. *faints*

Pappu can't dance! Pappu didn't know chirraya loves to dance! Ab to sharmaji ki deewaren girni chahiye!

Pinkara 😛 at first it was damaadji now it's turned to tu and Om. She has truly accepted him. Was so tempted to write Pinky as an overbearing negative mother but writing Rudy's character changed that.

Hey I didn't feel Ur update is small. Just follow Ur own writing style and show Ur charm.

Originally posted by: eishe10

Brilliant update😉

Thanks love. I think you will enjoy the next part even more.

Originally posted by: sarroo

awesome SS.. continue soon

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Loved it

Probably Rudy is my favorite in this story strike it Rudy is favorite in all stories... Such a cutie pie

When will Rudy start demanding chota O/ choti Ri... That conversation will defenitely work up Ri

Kara will surely not allow any chance pe dance... Hope some romance awaits Ri in the function

Totally loved it

He is my favourite too. Look out for his antics in the next part. I'll try and fit Saumya in somehow.

Par Gauri ne to bol dia Om isn't coming!