In a Heartbeat (A ShiVika SS) Chapter- 4 updated 21/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Woah!!! What was that gal!!

Surpringly amazing start
Shivaay as usual break up with his girlfriend...
Well for 5th time in 2 weeks with same gal Mallika...
Really Shivaay feels they r not good together...
Shivika clash in each other
Lost in each other they even check out each other
Anika kisses Shivaay??
Really or does she think it is dream??
Or was it some type of game??
Continue soon



Haha... It's not a dream and Chapter 2 is up too... The Story is also published on Wattpad if you want to read the remaining chapters
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Thank you :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: _snow.flake_

Awesome start..
I guess it was Shivaay's dream.. (not sure)
Waiting for next.
Update soon.

Tysm and Chapter 2 is updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ithihaas

This is really a surprise... the first meet .. each one of them drowning in their eyes and then boom...she kissed him hard .. this is by far the most surprising first chapter that I have read on Shivika...

You made it really interesting... looking forward to more of this journey...


Tysm Girl <3 :) ...
And Chapter 2 is updated .
Edited by fernsangiee14 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
.Shivaay In Love ? .

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" Kya Tum Sab ek dusre ko
jaante Ho ?
Anika broke the awkard silence by questioning the shocked six.

" Of course, Bohot hi ACCHI tarreke se ek dusre ko jaante hai,
Haina Shivaay ?
Mallika finally opens her mouth and sarcastically answers whilst glaring at the OBros especially Shivaay.
All The Oberois did in response was gulp the saliva their throat nervously.

" Listen Mallika Woh actually...
Shivaay starts stammering nervously not knowing what to say.

" What to Listen Ha? Shivaay, how could you do that ?
How could you kiss you my sister...
Bloody Cheater
Mallika yells catching hold of Shivaay's collar.

" How could I ? Are you seriously asking me this? Weren't you guys the ones who gave Anika the dare to kiss me ? And you are blaming me here, Grow up Mallika.
Shivaay yells back frustrated with Malika's words.
He throws away her hands which was on his collars and walks a bit away from her.

" EK minute ek minute...
What the hell is happening here ?
Malli and Shivaay, Why are you guys fighting?
Anika throws questions on both of them , confused with what is happening.

" Anika, Shivaay is my... My...
Boyfriend.
Mallika utters throwing Murderous glares at Shivaay.

" Correction : Ex-boyfriend.
Shivaay annoyingly yells from behind making Mallika frown.

Thump'
They all hear a loud voice.
They turn to see Anika sitting down on the chair with a great force .
Her face had no expression,
She was blankly looking at Shivaay and Malika.

" Anika Didi, Ka hua? Aap Aise Ka Beth rahe hai ?
Gauri questioned her elder sister seeing her sitting so quietly and blankly which is not so her Anika.

" I'm Sorry.
I'm Sorry Shivaay and Malika,
Mere wajah se...
Mere wajah se tum dono ka breakup hogaya.
I'm sorry.
Without knowing the whole truth, Anika assumed wrong and crying-crying, she apologizes to Shivaay and Malika and runs away to the terrace of the Cafe.

" Anika di / Anika / didi.
They all scream trying to stop her.

" I'll go and get her.
Malika says as she tries to go to the terrace.

" No need Malika, I'll go and get her It's because of you, she assumed wrong things and is crying now.
Shivaay shouts on Malika and runs hurriedly after Anika's to the terrace.

" Hey Shankarji, Yeh Bade Bhaiya ko kya gaya hai ? Pehle toh inhone Malika Didi par chillyaye jab aisse kabhi hua hi Nahi...
Aur toh aur ...
Gauri astonished with Shivaay's behaviour says.

" Aur Bhaiya ko kabhi bhi kissi ke liye Itna concern Humare ilava...
Kabhi Nahi Dekha...
Kuch toh Gadbad hai...
Bhavya completes Gauri's sentence as both suspiciously look towards Shivaay who was hurriedly running top stairs without looking here and there.

" Oh-ho !! Meri Pyaari Chulbul Bhabhi aur Meri ACP Fiance,
Kuch Gadbad nahi hai,
Pyaar hai ...
Mujhe lagta hai Bhaiya ko na Anika
Didi se pyaar hogaya.
Rudra dreamily utters as he wraps his arms around Gauri and Bhavya .

" Oh, Shut up Rudra.
Omkara utters as He smacks Rudra's head.

" Kya Shut up, Rudra ? O, Main sahi bol raha hu, Aapne Dekha nahi ki Kaise Bhaiya ka chehra Sharam se lal Ho gaya Jab Anika's Didi ne Unhe kiss kiya aur Abh Dekho Kaise Didi ke beech bhag gaye.
Rudra uttered as he munched on some fries which was kept on the nearby table and stood next to Omkara making Omkara also suspicious.

" I guess, You are right, Rudra.
But Shivaay in love? That too Love in First Sight? It's hard to digest this fact... Can't Believe it.
Omkara shockingly utters.

" Humhe bhi
Vishwaas nahi Ho raha hai.
Gauri and Bhavya also utter in Shock as they all shockingly continue looking towards The Direction Shivaay ran while Mallika looked with a Crying face.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is smthing really interestng. They are sisters or friends? How come she unknwn abt their bf/Fiance
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow this is really interesting yar...
Totally loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Read chapter 1, 2, 3 in one go awesome amazing fantastic fabulous hilarious
Breakup either same girl in one week nd that too 5 times
The kissed really shocked him frst I thought it's shivaay's dream
Bt hwang cake she didn't know about OBROS as she is their sissy
Continue soon Do pm me if possible
Plz tell me ur wattpad I'd so that I can read it there u r daisy's frnd Amyra
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Omm!!
2 updates In a day...
Superb...
I read first one in brink of morning but came to comment on it now as got.time now... But saw there is another update up already... So read it & commenting for both...

Yippie!!!
Anika kissed Shivaay & now guilty... Coz it was a dare...
Shivaay mesmerized & Rudy had to bring him out that was just so likely...
Anika tells abt d dare... Omru introduce themselves to Anika..
Anika takes them to meet her sisters...
All r shocked seeing each other..
Mallika is Anika's sister... Surprise surprise..


Woah!! Mallika angry at Shivaay for betraying her...
Shivaay reminds her it was her fault as she gave Anika such dare...
Plus Anika dint even know Shivaay...
Anika feels guilty & runs...
Shivaay is upset & runs behind her to clarify & also breaks up Mallika...
Rivya shocked on seeing Shivaay caring towards Anika...
Ru sure that Shivaay is fallen for Anika...
Om still doubtful...

Continue soon
Wanna read how Shivaay consoles anika...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: farinaks

Read chapter 1, 2, 3 in one go awesome amazing fantastic fabulous hilarious

Breakup either same girl in one week nd that too 5 times
The kissed really shocked him frst I thought it's shivaay's dream
Bt hwang cake she didn't know about OBROS as she is their sissy
Continue soon Do pm me if possible
Plz tell me ur wattpad I'd so that I can read it there u r daisy's frnd Amyra


Wattpad I'd - ImLilmisscomplicated

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