RiKara Don't Let Me Go Chapter 7 Teaser pg. 45 05/07/2018 - Page 33

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: OoViVioO

😭 what am update. Omkara 😭😭..I know he will be okay...update soon Mel...I want my happy ending 😭


Glad you liked it Vivi 😳

The Ending will be one they deserve
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Amel.. 🤗 Tassooo 🤗

Do I need to mention how much I love this story ?! This is definitely my favourite story of yours. ❤️ Thank you dear, this one is one of my favorites too 😳😆
It was emotional, heart wrenching and what not ?! 😭
Omkara was back to where he belonged. He was with his baby and his little wife. They were spending a moment to cherish. A moment of love and intimacy.

A moment both of them badly needed after month apart :D A moment that they will never forget.

But fate had it's cruel plan. His happiness wasn't long lived. The biggest nightmare of his came true taking away his son. With his son he was almost losing his wife.

I love your comments, have I ever told you that??? you really see what needs to be seen.

For Gauri it wasn't possible to live without her baby. She was gone through so much. Yet she stayed strong. But seeing his son in the clutch of demon her heart sank into her stomach. She used some words that broke his heart and the words she regretted uttering. She never wanted to hurt him. But unknowingly her each word hit him like bullets.
For Gauri in that Moment nothing else but Adiyta mattered. She knew that she was wrong but when we are hurt we tend to lash out to those closest to us. ;)

He decided to rectify his mistakes, even if it means losing his life. He went to fight for his loved ones this time.
The fight between Kaali and Om gave me goosebumps.
Thank you sooo much . That was my first try in writing a fight scene 😲
I know he won't die. He cannot die. He would live to know she never meant those words. He would live to live with her. He would live for his son, for his family. 😭 😭
This one has my heart. Pleej update soon.


They will have the happy ending they deserve 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOO WAAYYY !!! NOO HE JUST CAN'T DIIEEE ! HE HAS TO LIVVVEE, FOR HIS RI, FOR HIS ADI, HE HAS TO LIVE HE HAS TO LIVE AAAHHH 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 💔 💔 💔
UUURRRGGGHHH I had to read this while PMSing 😭 🥺
IT WAS HEARTBREAKING. 😭
My heart flinched as the pure little baby was being taken away by that IDIOT. 😭
When those hurtful words were told by Ri, it wasn't Omkara's wife speaking, it was Adi's mom... nothing is above her child for a mom, and that child had come to her as a blessing after a long period of longing, loneliness and depression... He was her bundle of joy, and she said what she said in desperation... My heart pains for my babies, all 3 of them... 🥺 💔
You, do I have to say again ? You did this soo beautifully... I'm an emotional mess now...❤️ 💔

I'm being positive and hopeful... Neither of them will let the other go... You won't let them let each other go okay. 😭

Luv yaa 🤗
Waiting for the next one 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey!!!
Very well written update

Their reunion was lovely

Hope he gets better


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey so sorry for the late comment... man the update was so heartbreaking 😭 I hope Om is okay... he cannot die... abhi rikara ko mohbbat karni hai unke hisse ki...
Glad adi is safe now... can't wait for rikara family moments 😳 I am sure om will come back to his gauri and adi
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Hey so sorry for the late comment... man the update was so heartbreaking 😭 I hope Om is okay... he cannot die... abhi rikara ko mohbbat karni hai unke hisse ki...
Glad adi is safe now... can't wait for rikara family moments 😳 I am sure om will come back to his gauri and adi
Continue soon


No problem dear :D Life gets in the way and sometimes we barely manage t read an update let alone comment 😆

Om, Aditya and Gauri will get the Ending they deserve ❤️

I know it has been a while since an update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you :D Glad you did
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Posted: 7 years ago
A Teaser for the upcoming Final Chapter of This Story.
To think that this story is coming to an end makes me emotional and is one of the many reasons why I couldn't bring myself to write it 😲
I hope you will enjoy this teaser :)




Chapter 7 Teaser

Aditya Omkara Singh Oberoi you better not make me run after you. I will count to 10 and if you are not sitting at the table by then I will Take away all of your Art Supply. Gauri stomped into the dining room only to find her 6 Years Old Son already seated.

Mischievously smiling at her he began eating his breakfast after the servants served his favorite scrambled eggs with buttered Toast and a glass of freshly pressed Orange Juice.

His Taste was exactly like his Fathers, Gauri thought with a smile watching him.

Joining the two most important men in her life she sat down only to be greeted by a soft kiss on her cheek.

"Good Morning Ri...His Voice ever so soft making her remember the last night.

"Besharam! Aditya is Watching. She lightly smacked his Arm while blushing as beautiful as ever and he broke into a laugh.

Leave it to him to find the most adorable Wife in this whole world.

Let him watch. He should know how a healthy marriage looks like... His lips only a few inches away from hers.

"Papa! Mama! Stop kissing and rather help me finish my painting.

Gauri watched her Son and couldn't help but wonder how much he resembled Omkara. The same long , shiny hair , same piercing eyes and the most handsome smile in the world. It scared her sometimes to see how similar they were. How Aditya was a carbon copy of his Father. The same interest in Art, the same way of melting her heart, the same mannerism- it filled her heart with love to see her Son being like his Father and Gauri tried to suppress a tear thinking of them. Thinking of the Fateful Time 6 years ago.






So what do you think happened?
Is Omkara still alive?
Will they finally get their happy ending?


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Posted: 7 years ago
So your back to teasing mode aren't u jiji ? 🥱
Okay I am crying this is going to end 😭
My Omkie is alive I am gonna get some Daddykara I guess
update soon

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