Khamoshiyan.....A Shivika TS (12/11/17)part2 updated

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Amazing

Unexpected annika on a silent mode nd shivaay feeling guilty

Continue soon Do pm me if possible

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1097129

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

It's sad how every potential track is never explored by CVS and we get crap in name of story. Thankyou for this piece it was was so good.

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow

This Anika is a blast I would say

Loved how obahus tackled pia

Omkie d satyavadi harishchandra...

Continue soon

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Srishank
Wow liking this annika a lot n guilty shivaay ok . Wen r u gng to continue the next part , it's superb😆

😊Iam really happy that you loved the concept.It is a trust test between them.They will pass this test with flying colours.

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: panjami
That was really wonderfull...
That slap..Thats what i loved most ...
Annikas reaction is superb...
U could have made it longer...😃

Panjami😊

Anika's protecting wala avatar...I too love her.she is a lioness.

I made the second chapter longer...

Thanks for the lovely comment

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: S.love1
Wow this is awsome
Finally the drama is over, but I am disappointed in shivaay, he did wrong by hiding it from her
I feel so bad for annika, I guess she will be having fever now
Thanks for this owsome first shot
Very eagerly waiting for more, update soon
Much love!

This pia track was testing my patience.Shivaay disappointed you..but we didn't hear Shivaay's point of view.why he hide this from her.

Thanks for the fever idea...

Anika is a strong character.she will never accept defeat.Nothing will harm her.she is a warrior.

Please tell your suggestion for the next update

Thanks a lot for the comment...

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
This is a nice take though this track is absolutely something out of my understanding.

😊we are sailing the same ship.I also don't find some logic from this track.

Iam a big fan of your writing.

Thanks a lot for the comment.

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Amazing Update!
Our khidkitod Anika's slap 😆 Shivaay was wrong in hiding the matter from Anika.
Waiting for the nxt. Update Soon 😊

Anika is khidkitod...she had her own style.

Shivaay is wrong partially...we should hear his point of view.

Thanks a lot for the comment😊

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Blink_Cat
amazing...
thank god a TS on t track...
anikas reaction is t amazing.. silent treatment to shivaay is superb..
plz update soon, its so damn interesting..

Anika always easily forgive Shivaay.But i tried a change.silent treatment from Anika.

I am really happy that you loved the concept .

Please tell your suggestion for the next update.

😊Thanks a lot for the comment

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
shivaay didn't confessed that to Annika...
I think that's what hurt her more...
I loved this Silent treatment yar...
but seriously in the show i am not understanding a bit of this track

You're right ...After this much battles...Shivaay's lack of trust hurt Anika.

But we can't judge him without hearing his point of view.

Anika always easily forgive Shivaay.But it is not possible in real life.I tried a change here.

I also didn't know what is happening there.

Thanks for the comment😊