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Sayma Afrin Khan

@AfrinHrid

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Amazing update

Finally Gauri accepted Omkara

And he left all bad things!!

Loved it

Continue soon

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

That was a beautiful update.. love does do wonders!!

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priyadil

@priyadil

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

nice update dear..

nice to see that gauri accepted om and his love..

waiting for the next

Please update sooon...

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Ishqfeel

@Ishqfeel

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

What an update dear... waiting for the next chapter

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BIaddict

@BIaddict

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Love this story. Loved Om's character so much. Gauri is so sweet too.

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hurrom moqsurat

@hurrom

Voyager

+ 12

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

awesome...amazing...update the next part soon...

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The_Inner_Voice

@The_Inner_Voice

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Lazy... 🤗

Awww I was in my Olaf mode right when I read the dedication ... it meant a lot.

Well Picture This:

Loved the chappy.

Ok I may sound biased... but you cannot sue me for loving Omkara ❤️... that soul is Love redefined ❤️.

Loved the way you have drafted Omkara... and the way you are peeling him out of his rustic layers... revealing him as the story progresses. Omkara would do all that you have narrated... coz lets say he is engineered that way.

To endear a character to a reader is a trait of one good writer. Much said my friend.

Thanks a bunch for the write-up and here's a warm hug coming your way coz you had me at the dedication and welll let just say...

P.S.:

Your choice of names intrigues me... for the obvious reasons.

If Lazy means this and much more... then I'm up for all that Lazyness has to bring in 😆

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soumyagahoi

@soumyagahoi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Aahhh!!!! I m so much in love with this. The whole plot is so loving and endearing... Makes me hoping that the story continues forever and i may keep reading it for forever..

Keep updating dear... Waiting for updates of other stories as well