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hurrom moqsurat

@hurrom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

awesome...update the next part soon
...waiting...jab omkara kaali.or vikram ki dulai karega...

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asrkasr

@asrkasr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

I really like how this story is shaping up.Omkara is her protector,its amazing to see how he considers her his own and yet he Is so respectable towards her dignity.How quickly we judge someone based on outer appearances but gauri will realise soon that how wonderful omkara is as a person and what he does doesn't make a diff .Im sure Omkie has a painful past and will see how gauri become his salvation.That part with ajay and how Omkara trusts her was the highlight.

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RingsOfSaturn

@RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Lovely FS dear!.

It is not hard to imagine such a lover story for Omkara- Gauri current characterization.
Specially loving the determined, possessive, caring Omkara.

This one is NOT CONFUSED at all with regards to what he wants.
Well done.
👏

Looking forward to further updates.

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Poroma

@Poroma92

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Hi Lazy Di,
Yet again an awesome storyline.
Omkara as a gunda is fantabulous!!!
I love it, such an interesting storyline!
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
My best wishes are always with you and hope you continue to give us such awesome stories on RiKara.

Love,
Poroma (your true fan!!!)

P.S. Still waiting on your update of Guardian Angel.