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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
so wanted to see this shivika version
will love this as shivaay will literally put the house down and obros will help
it will be funny to see shivaay om and rudy in this kind of situation.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
OH MY MATAAA
MUSHYYY 😲😲😲


SOMEONE PINCH ME. DID YOU REALLY GIVE US A SHIVIKA OS?!!!

I FEEL LIKE JUMPING AND DANCING AND HUGGING AND KISSING YOU🥳

THIS IS THE BEST SURPRISE OF THIS WEEK

I'LL BE BACK AFTER READING. TILL THEN PYAR BHARI CHUMMA 😳😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

MUSH!!

Firstly, can I just hug you for a good five minutes? What exactly are you? you can't be real!!

I wish I could actually show you my condition ater reading this OS. You know how you say "it felt like a soothing balm"? EXACTLY THAT MUSH!!! I felt EXACTLY that! It was a long day for me too and I was just tired of everything. I logged into IF and i don't know how but the first thing that I saw was "Shivika OS: 103 Degree Fahrenheit" by Mushfika and I can't tell you what I felt that moment. everything blanked out and I just clicked on the link and before started reading I made the previous comment. and then na left dekha na right I started reading and believe me or not, this IS THE BEST thing I have read in the last 3 weeks!!! I'm not saying because you're my favorite writer ...I exactly felt that!!


How do you write so beautifully? How are you so good with words? please tell me how do you choose such perfect dialogues for Shivay and Anika that literally illustrates who they are as a person? I think someone in this forum told you that you give a "domestic vibe" through your words. Let me tell you I agree to that person 101%!! You're just magical with anything about Shivika and trust me whatever I am saying right is coming right from the bottom of my heart!!!

Shivay stretched his arm to wrap around her waist and pulled her to him only to let out a gasp. The next moment, he found his hands hovering over her bare arms, neck and forehead as his heart took an abrupt dive to his stomach.


Jerking up to sit on the bed, he quickly turned the lights on only to witness a pale anika, shivering mercilessly on the bed, her body drained off of any color that brings out the youthful innocence from within.


Sh*t!

This part where Shivay finds out about fever, I almost started jumping!! Gosh I wanted such scene on the show so much. and you know the best part? It's your unique way of showing this scene. That he was already feeling guilty of his behavior and that it wasn't the fever that made him apologize at the end. And I loved how you sketched this scene by making shivay pull Anika towards him so he could say sorry but he found out she has fever.


Before she could open her eyes and understand what was happening, she was pulled into the warmth more and felt a hand weaving through her hair.


"Shh, I'm right here..."


Just HOW do you do this Mushfika?! You make me want to marry someone right now so that I could get this sort of love and pampering in my life too!!


Hair ruffled, face drained off of any color, eyes that nothing but give away concern and immense fear for god knows what, breath hitched as his one arm was under her back to hold her securely while the other rested on her forehead, Shivay Singh Oberoi nothing but looked like a complete mess at that moment.

I can so imagine Shivay in this state!! Exactly how He would be shown in the show if something like this were to happen to anika!! just PERFECT!


Staring down at her in disbelieve, Shivay finally whispered, his entire being still shook from the state he found Anika in, "You have fever."


Anika waited patiently for him to speak further but he stayed quiet, and went back to soak the piece of fabric into cold water in the bowl.


"Okay...and?"


"And what? I just told you, you have fever."


🤣I cracked up in this part🤣 Anika will the death of shivay someday. This man woke dadi up, almost fired Khanna, made him run to get a doctor at this hour of night, threatened to sue the doctor just because he found out Anika has fever 🤣 And let me tell you, I'm not even 0.00001 % surprised 😆😆 This is just SO shivay🤣 Loved Anika's reactions when she hit her head with his palm at her husband's craziness 😆

"Bossy brooding Oberoi!", muttered anika under her breath


Shivay was about to exit the room when his steps halted and he turned around to look at her with his one eyebrow raised.


Biting her tongue at her pathetic timing, she covered her head with the duvet, making him smirk and shake his head before exiting the room.


Most adorable scene from this OS!!! I don't know how you come up with such little stuff that just touches my heart every single time!! No wonder your work is loved and appreciated by so many people in this forum Mush! I'm so proud 🤗


"Care to explain?"


Shivay held an almost empty ice cream box as he entered the room with the bowl of soup.


"That's an ice cream box.", said Anika proudly.


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

How much cuter can Anika get? and the fact that Shivay has to put up with this crazy woman🤣 But I guess that's what makes their bond SO unique and special.

And that's what melts my heart everytime - that Shivay and Anika are just pure contrast to each other. Shivay is a serious, quiet and a man of few words while Anika is jolly, nautanki, and chatterbox. And regardless of the contrast, shivay loves her more than anyone in this world. SOOO BEAUTIFUL!


Putting it away, shivay turned the lights off, and laid beside her on his elbow as his fingers weaved through her hair.

"You're spoiling me, Shivay. I'm not used to being pampered so much."


How do you come up with such caring gesture ?? Can you please arrange a shivay for me ?? I need him in my life bass! 🥱🥱 I just pray that I get a husband like him when I get married. Hai bhagwan meri yeh wish puri kar do


And he last bit when Shivay expresses his guilt and say he didn't mean to hurt her, gosh !! Such a perfect ending !! I love how Anika didn't even let him apologize properly because she was aware of how his anger is. yes she was hurt but she brushed it off and didn't hold grudge. that's what I love about both of them. None holds grudges for too long because their love for each other overpowers everyhting. Which married couple don't get into fight? it doesn't matter how much you fight with each other but how you patch up at the end.


Mush, if I say that I love you, I don't hink it would justify my feelings... so i'm not even going to try. Just informing you that I'll probably read this OS million times starting from tomorrow.


Sorry kuch zyada bak bak kar liya. It's late in here. I'm gonna go to bed. Good night. 🤗



Edited by LoveNakuulMehta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Umm... Saw ur post after so long. Well, I wasn't here too. Like your Uni tires you my college & coaching is just draining my energy.
And today too coming from coaching saw this Wonderful OS of yours. It's just beautiful Mush aapi. Loved it. Caring Singh Oberoi is something so beautiful to read and the way u express thing is amazing
About the title, it wasn't weird but that's what attracted me.
Love Yaa❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Thank u for writing this piece. It was amazing. Agreed Shivaay has temper issues but when he realises his mistake he tries to rectify it that's what makes him different. I like him here because he did so much for Anika especially that doctor part 😆The title is interesting.
Thank u for the pm. Get well soon.
Keep writing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mushfika, it is so good to see you back with another fantabulous OS on Shivika after so long. You know, I was actually wondering where you've been. and then I saw your comment somewhere that you've been busy with your university. I hope everything is going well at your end.

I have tried being a silent reader and I hardly comment on people's stories. I'm trying to change this fact because I know how much effort you writers put in to write something. And today when I saw you posting this story, my happiness knew no bound and I just had to comment.

Coming to the OS, marvelous is the word for this shot!! You came back with a bang, that's all I'm going to say. Really loved reading it. The way you show shivay in all your stories is so endearing and heartwarming. Everyone would want someone like that in their lives as their better half. And anika is just a box of cuteness. Really enjoyed their icecream conversation. I love how Shivay gets so strict whenever it is something about her health and behaves so sternly with her yet his love is so evident just because he's being so strict with her!! Do you get what i'm saying? I must be sound like a crazy person to you lol. but I hope you got what I meant.

It's so hard to find Shivika OS these days. the whole forum is filled with Rikara stories and I hardly find any. Please keep writing and don't take so many weeks to give us another stories.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry I also wanted to inform you that I have read all your work so far. Although I never commented but I have always been a huge fan of your writing. I think the only work on which I commented was your last OS "Beauty of being the blemish". but your very first OS which was "time of the month" and then "the aftermath" are some of my all time favorites.

So please keep writing. there are so many people in this forum who love your work and wait eagerly to read something from you. Sorry i'm being selfish because I know you are very busy. but please don't make us wait so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Nice Os. Wonderful writing. Your writings make every girl long for a husband like Shivaay.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
I read this OS for the third time. Woke up 30 mins ago and logged into IF to read it the first thing in the morning. What have you done to me Mush!!!🤪
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maisha123

Sorry I also wanted to inform you that I have read all your work so far. Although I never commented but I have always been a huge fan of your writing. I think the only work on which I commented was your last OS "Beauty of being the blemish". but your very first OS which was "time of the month" and then "the aftermath" are some of my all time favorites.

So please keep writing. there are so many people in this forum who love your work and wait eagerly to read something from you. Sorry i'm being selfish because I know you are very busy. but please don't make us wait so much


Dekh liya apne? look how many people awaits your stories. Agli bar ese wait karwayi na to dekh lena 😳

and @Maisha123 agree with both your comments 101%. we both are on the same boat. 😉

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