Shivika OS - Diljeet vs. Bebe (Based on Oct 25th 2017 episode)

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Shivika OS - Diljeet vs. Bebe
| Prompt: Musings between Bebe and Diljeet. |

Note: No proofread or spell/grammar check. And I don't know how to write a Punjabi accent in English so bear with me

The setting of this fic is after Annika tells Shivaay who Diljeet is.

Lastly I really don't know if the writers wanted to actually accomplish something with Diljeet or Bebe but I can't really see why it had to end in Annika getting worried.


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It could have been anyone's guess that Shivaay could choose a casanova like Diljeet Singh. Annika Bebe watched as the girls started flirting with Diljeet, assuming he was a famous singer. Bebe shook her head. It was decided, today was the day a certain third angle magnet would learn to never look at another woman again.

Bebe approached the group of women that surrounded Diljeet. She cleared her throat.

"Bebe, what happened to you ji? Your throat got dry ji? No worries you go drink water ji." Diljeet advised as Bebe raised an eyebrow.

"Leave the water and tell me, what's happening here ji?" Bebe asked them as Diljeet looked around.

"Nothing, Auntyji." Carefree, Diljeet answered.

"Bebe, your Bebe. And you all, leave." Bebe corrected as she asked the women to leave.

"Why?! I wanted to hear him sing, he promised." One of the women complained. Diljeet nodded in agreement with the audacity.

Bebe sighed. "Koi nahi puttar, it's not your fault. This happens often." Bebe approached the girl who complained. "So what was your name?" The girl was about to respond but was silenced. "Actually, forget it. You guys are just extras, what's the point in remembering your name? What was I saying? Oh right, you listen to me." Annika started. Diljeet's face tensed as he didn't like where this was going.

"You leave this duffer, I'll find you a nice, proper boy. If you go into his world, you'll get lost. Ask me, I'm his Bebe. This nalayak has so many women in his life," Bebe slapped Diljeet as she spoke. Diljeet held onto his face. "Whenever you look, another woman is in his arms. Every month a new name. What will I tell Harleen, hm?"

"Harleen?!" The women screamed in worry.

"W-Wh-Who's H-Harleen?" Diljeet stuttered.

Bebe slapped Diljeet again. "You donkey, you should be ashamed of yourself! You forgot your own wife. Chi!" Bebe was disgusted at Diljeet, who stared away absentmindedly.

"Wife?!" The women screamed again, in disbelief.

"Of course! You didn't know?" Bebe inquired. They shook their heads. "Arre, he has two kids too. Amar and Veer." Diljeet stared incredulously at Bebe as the women gasped in horror.

"That's why I'm saying, leave all this. Don't go on his face. He's the worst of them all. Rab knows how many women are in his life. There was Tia, Mallika, Annika, Ragini, Tanya-"

"Enough Bebe!" Diljeet scolded.

"Arre, you enough! Did I give you these kind of sanskaars? You don't speak to your elders this way!" Bebe scolded back, silencing him.

"This is why I'm saying bitiya, forget him! And if you aren't able to forget him, then let me tell you one of his childhood stories. You know, when he got angry, he took of his pants and he would rip them in a fit." The women started laughing as Bebe finished the story. Diljeet looked away with flushed cheeks. He was all too embarrassed.

"Thank you, Bebe. You opened our eyes." The woman thanked Bebe. The women then turned to Diljeet, who was tensed.

"Donkey!"

"Jerk!"

"Duffer!"

"Kameena!"

The four women left, leaving an insult and slap across Diljeet's face. The singer stood there holding his cheek. He approached Bebe as they were alone.

"What was that?" Diljeet complained.

"Not much. I could have done worse by mentioning Tia's pregnancy or Mallika running away from her wedding and ending up in your house." Bebe informed, much to Diljeet's horror.

"Was this necessary?" Diljeet complained. "I was just getting in character."

"As who? Shivaay or Diljeet? Well forget it. Next time you think of flirting with another woman as anybody, remember this moment, because I can do it again. Alright?" The warning was declared, Bebe saw Diljeet nod, she thereafter walked away, forever ruining Diljeet Singh's reputation.

The End.

I hope you enjoyed the chapter. Please leave a like and comment if you enjoyed the chapter! Any feedback is welcome.
- Jesal

Edited by LordLuminous - 7 years ago


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LordLuminous thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I hope this story doesn't offend anyone. I was trying different comedy and well I personally wasn't satisfied with the episode. But if you loved the episode, I'm glad. 😃
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Jesal your story just cracked me up. 🤣 🤣 Shivaay "The great third wheel magnet" 😆😆

Loved it to the core 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jes.. the OS is superb ! 😆 i couldn't stop my laugh after reading it, damn ! you win the competition which Haarneet in writing, you should join the CVs crew yaar,
LMAO i just imagined every scene 🤣
Edited by Kesh123 - 7 years ago
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Hey Jesal,
That was hilarious... I loved Bebe ... if we take the comedy as back drop then what Bebe has done comepletely understandable and fitting for Shivaay...
Though I haven't watched the episode yet, I have seen the BTS segments where Diljeet is hugging and kissing random fan girls... I will check the Shivika bits later on ...
I think most of people didn't like the flirting bit... it's basicllay out of character for Shivaay... but if you look at the character that he has donned, I think it's fine...execution of scene matters most... I am not sure how the scenes are written in the script...like you know when HS writes a scene will she write about Diljeet hugging and kissing his fan girls as part of flirting... or is it the director's vision to execute a particular scene written... I am not sure if it's writing or the execution...
But I have read that kissing part didn't make into the final scene...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya009

Jesal your story just cracked me up. 🤣 🤣 Shivaay "The great third wheel magnet" 😆😆

Loved it to the core 👏



Thanks Kavya! Shivika are actually both third angle magnets. Shivaay just has a stronger effect.
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Originally posted by: ithihaas

Hey Jesal,

That was hilarious... I loved Bebe ... if we take the comedy as back drop then what Bebe has done comepletely understandable and fitting for Shivaay...
Though I haven't watched the episode yet, I have seen the BTS segments where Diljeet is hugging and kissing random fan girls... I will check the Shivika bits later on ...
I think most of people didn't like the flirting bit... it's basicllay out of character for Shivaay... but if you look at the character that he has donned, I think it's fine...execution of scene matters most... I am not sure how the scenes are written in the script...like you know when HS writes a scene will she write about Diljeet hugging and kissing his fan girls as part of flirting... or is it the director's vision to execute a particular scene written... I am not sure if it's writing or the execution...
But I have read that kissing part didn't make into the final scene...




Honestly, I think it's just hard to watch third wheels in general. Because they aren't executed properly. For example, Tanya. Who didn't really help the couple. Especially when the said couple are in the happy phase of their marriage.
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I guess director has a strong hand in making these scenes, can't blame HS alone. Both r in fault. Of course after some point it doesn't look good. You didn't disappoint. The os was superb! ❤️
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Originally posted by: LordLuminous



Honestly, I think it's just hard to watch third wheels in general. Because they aren't executed properly. For example, Tanya. Who didn't really help the couple. Especially when the said couple are in the happy phase of their marriage.


That's true Jesal...
She literally served no purpose ... I mean she didn't even do a single khaand...
I now believe the spoiler girl's prediction that this was not the track that was meant to be with Tanya...she was introduced for that child marriage track...but then the CVs flipped because of the reaction from online fans and hence we just couldn't connect at all...
now that they introduced her they gave the reason that they wanted Shivika to be apart which was lame... even that they couldn't do for more than 1 episode...
If they wanted Shivika to be apart then they could have simply used memory loss angle and Shivaay forgetting things along with Annika...Tanya could have entered as a friend who helped him recover during those missing 15 days ... since he was pretending memory loss he could hav insisted that he doesn't want Annika in his room even though Dadi might have said...it was as simple as that... and he could the arrogant SSO because that was what he was before meeting Annika...
CVs messed up bad and hence packed both Tanya and Abhay...bcoz I cannot imagine Gul promoting a new entry in show just for cameo...and that man cannot act...

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