My letter to the writer : IB - A story of 3 brothers it is NOT

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samiksha1993

@samiksha1993

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: asya34

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

I so agree with you. I shall not talk about screen space or other issues here. I shall just mention how frustrated I feel as a woman watching this show. All the female characters of this show...leaving out Daadi probably...have been literally butchered. I have been married for 9 years now...and i can easily claim...that life of a woman...of a wife...is much more than what is shown here. Yup!!!

I clearly remember when the Baby Pari track started...the 3 brothers accepted the kid as theirs...clearly stating that they were not virgins at all...so what right do any of them have to point out at the characters of their wives? Correct again.

What is more disappointing is that the women despite repeatedly being called characterless...or being tortured...go back to the guys happily...This isnt acceptable ... and bang on point ... nothing to add

In reality...if my husband ever calls me characterless...that would be his last day in the house...not mine...it is my house...so he has to leave ha! ha! so true ...

Can we get some self respect for these women? The PH...instead of spending tremendously on negative characters...can make a new set and shift the guinea pig women out of the house for once. but that would actually be 'Nayi Sooch' and they cannot risk that. It means showing women that you should respect yourself and stand up for yourself ... that will never do you see 😉

And yes I am an hardcore Rikara fan...but i dont want Gauri to come back...the way characters are being butchered right now...its better she stays away ... Ooohhh!! don't even take me there right now ... I am not a hardcore RiKara fan but I like the couple and the story potential ... there are so many angles they could have taken this story forward with but nahi - characterless is the easiest route that a lazy writer will find.

An butchering Om to just move the story is pathetic

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-sakshi-

@-sakshi-

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

If the cvs are hell bent upon rebooting the show with multiple entries for Shivaay after each time they time lapse & re - instate Shivaay's attitude for whatever reasons .. they need to take care of Anika too..Shivaay is pretending not to recognise her and misbehaving withe her ..if this track is going to stretch for long.. they better show her out of OM.. she needs to be self reliant.. one grudge is they never showed any guy for her... why couldnt she have a secret admirer..some nice decent looking man... for the media, she was married to SSO for a day or whatever .. she is still his VIRGIN wife.. men like Daksh are ready to pounce on her ... this can awaken her dear husband from his slumber ..Even an average confectioner Rohit was able to make him jealous..he was enraged to see his seperated wife being touched in a short dress by someone .
Its high time SP alters its nayi soch..let the FL give equal takkar to the ML in all aspects.
Why cant Abhay who calls Anika beautiful and gorgeous flirt with her under shivaay's nose ?

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

It feels good to see that atleast few people cares about story :) Oh! you can bet we do .. and even as a ShivIka fan the other two stories not developing is a major bone for me at least ... 3 brothers and their stories they said and they need to stick to that

I am not a fan of Shivika but dey did deserved some happy days of marriage

and this whole 15 days gap is That is what kills the whole build up that they had for the wedding and throws the other 2 stories in a spin as well

How they are gonna deal with Gauri's comeback? ... is what I am curoius as well ... Om on drugs again ...lol easy and convenient - lazy writing

Bhavya,being ACP, is understood. She will come and say she was on some secret mission and their story can start again ... or helping the Family through this investigation of the Raaz

but Rikara? I feel like pulling my hairs for loving Rikara😆 ... truly I do feel for RiKara fans ... trust me

ghar ki bahu 15-20 din se gayab hai and they are so chilled out 😲 Has Gauri became so padantu that she had tyaag entire world to learn English 😕🤓 ... and if that was the case at least show that she is visiting her mother or something ... why this whole characterless pitch again!!??

they better give solid reason😡 Atleast they were worried for Shivay's absence😆 shukr hai uska toh socha ... don't hold your breath .. the FL never matter to this PH

Even if creatives were so desperate for ML, atleast they could have shown RiKara on same page by which I means atleast Om accepting he have commitment issues but he will work out and Gauri helping by building friendship That is way too much progressive thinking for this PH ... they cannot even dream what you have written here ... their FL have been characterized on the women in 14th century England... can't say India because our women back then had some rights compared to them but it seems we have regressed in the 21st century

in that process, shivika too would hv some happy marriage moments

After that they could hv tried this ML drama happy moments!!?? IB mein woh kya hota hai??

TRP aunties dont want story, they want masala 😆 this show have so many tracks to lure TRP aunties but sigh! Masala I get ... humiliation of a wife and making marriage a joke I do not

Its so difficult to digest that this show is written by Harneet-same Harnet who was part of BALH writing team, same Harneet who wrote painfully beautiful layered Rizwan Ahmed Khan, same Harneet who who handled brainwashed terrorist story with elan...it feels like either she isnt writing or she is being dictated by PH 😆 write what I want else leave my show 😆 ... not sure about that but even with that kind of pressure repeated humiliation of a woman and now a wife is not creative writing. Raaz can be dealt with without this disgusting track of disowning your wife publicly and announcing another in her place when you have told her you love her to death

Sorry but that for me is no excuse

Its so frustrating that the couple you love takes 2 steps ahead only to go back 4 steps back😆 I get exactly what you feel ... not a huge RiKara fan but am certainly frustrated by the pace or should I say lack of it

Damn this Om Gauri for luring me to watch this show

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

bang on!

every word every sentence.i want this shipped to the writers! ... It has been ... remember I said I ultimately opened a Twitter account in desperation so that our message will reach outside this forum ... lol

its a faulty script Pearl. you bet it is ...

the Raaz thing I get ...

the blackmail thing I get ...

she getting access into OM I get ...

she making Shivvay dance to her tunes I get as well ...

she having to be announced as his wife and he having to feign ML in order to insult and humiliate his wife, is what I do NOT get. That is the confusing part because that is the crappy part of the script that feels like it is more a fantasized scene by the writer.

What exactly is the advantage of Tanya being announced as his wife?

She cannot legally claim any property or have any rights as Annikais the legal wife whether he announces another or not.

Why does he have feign ML only where Annika is concerned?

It is not as though she would have clued in that he was being blackmailed had he kept tanya as a guest for saving his life. In fact now she is even more alert that he is doing it under pressure. It defeats the whole purpose of the person trying to blackmail and hide this from Annika ...lol

See as a writer I do not get this part hence the confusion ki writer saheba is maybe living her darkest fantasies through this story

All the above could have been achieved without the foolish and disgusting track of him announcing Tanya as his wife. The purpose is not to humiliate the Oberoi Bahu but to gain entry into OM

At one point you give such mighty dialouges under the wrap of vows,within 5 days it all poofs up in the wind! Even if Anika is held at gun point cant the mighty SSO save her,then why the facade of ML so brutally.! Exactly!! and when does this stop !!?? Tomorrow someone will ask for 'Vastra Haran' and he will allow it to save his Family Honor!!?? Is his wife's honor not his own!!?? Is Annika not the Lakshmi of the Oberoi house and moreover the Older Bahu!?? Is this how they plan to treat and respect the women in their house!!??

As an Oberoi bahu Annika resembles a bargaining chip not the respect and 'Gurur' of her husband ... sorry but this kind of thinking does not have me sold

And these marriage vows that are made today and forgotten tomorrow because of circumstances where you have to chose wife over Family is very hard to digest. Wife is Family!!

I am not a Hindu but have read the hindu marriage vows and none of them are conditional or have an expiration date.. correct me if I am wrong

Reel life marriages last longer than the ShivIka one on IB and that is saying something about the life span and expiration date of the marriage vows that he took so much time to write and recite 😆

I was confused was i seeing Seperation track or ragini track!why cant Anika take the title of wife seriusly why cant she say this is my room n i m staying here n u will live with me.why such a thanda reaction what will u have water,food,utter nonsence.she still looks like his wedding planner n not wife.

Can we have some real husband n wife issues for them! The PH cannot honor marriage between the two ... husband-wife issues door ki baath hai

If I was Annika I would have asked him to leave with his so called wife because she is still the legal owner of the OM. That would leave tanya with no entry in OM for the stunt she pulled on Annika and would also teach the world not to mess with Mrs. ASSO

The ideal situation shud have been to gain trps during wedding track n plus one week of happy shivika while that wud give time for both couples to catch up n then the next raaz track shud have opened up. ... sigh!!! again ... we are normal people who adore ShivIka and would like to see them as husband-wife ... there are those, besides writer saheba, who think that consummation of a marriage and life after that has no excitement to hold ...lol

Sadly the two being apart helps with their unrealized fantasies but we the normal people are called abnormal for wanting a marriage after a wedding ... bahahaha! 🤣

PH look around there are some shows doing well for a reason

they make ghe couples stick around for a reason.none of our couples are togerher! Exactly!! that is why "happy ever after' fairytales written centuries ago still sell

Edited by asya34 - 7 years ago

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

I hv nuthing to say except that if they wanted to ruin the show so badly they cud hv given us happy moments with shivika, rikara MU clearing and ruvya getting married n ending it at that... Coz there might b ppl who t u ink Trp viewers will watch this shit... Trust me they won't... absolutely Gouri ... no one wants to watch such a pathetic script

N when I say something I know it... Hv worked in media for enuf to know this... RUZ knows it... I had given her time lines when ipk will shut.. When IB will got back to being half hr... When IB will shut... Assuming certain stories they r following... N with Ipk timing I was bang on... With IB expected half hr slot I'm bang on... N had hoped that IB will go till March end next yr but know from whr is see n what I decipher will be the trps... The show is ending by Nov end... SP has 5 shows in pipeline one of which was to start at 10. 30 slot... They still hv 4 shows ready after that... So they won't think twice to end IB... This track isn't going to get trps... if you know this then obviously they know this and yet are heading towards destruction of their show ... maybe they don't care anymore

Reboot again and again doesn't work... N SP viewers n zee viewers r diff... A KKB worked on zee... It wudnt work on SP...

It's achha Tata bye bye to the show... I wud hv liked to say bye with good memories... Not such sour ones... True

N yeah I hv been married for 10+ years so u can imagine how infuriated I am seeing how marriage isn't being treated... Also since pinky arc began I lost interest as I'm a mom of two boys n married to a guy who has a bro but no sister... So a DIL to MIL who has only boys... N that too a love marriage... With a girl from south meets a boy from north... N girl from higher status meets a boy from lower one... Kind of person... Hv seen vindictiveness of MIL... Issues everything... But never ever a mother who is blind to see son's happiness... Yes getting bad mouthed... Or insulted is one thing n u stand up for ur self... But being blackmailed by a MIL who can not think beyond her own self... These things totally lost me... N now this...

Mockery of marriage... Calling Tanya his wife in front of media...

That was the worse to watch and that too has no purpose to the plot as far as I can see... again writer saheba has to bring her fantasies alive where Shivvay is concerned 🤢

I still don't get why Tanya had to be introduced as a wife for her to gain entry into OM. It is obvious that this is going to cause more doubt than enable secrecy for Tanya to infiltrate the OM and roam freely like Abhay is doing right now.
Logically is not possible that she knows who Shivvay is and not know that he married Annika the day she found him injured.He many have ML but does she have ML as well or lives where there are no newpapers delivered!!??

After this did she, or whoever planted her, expect the Family to just swallow it down that she does not have evil intentions or has tricked Shivvay because of his ML !!? I really don't get the 'hurt, disown and humiliate' your wife part in this Raaz track

Pearl seriously whr is legal system here... How come no notice has been slapped on him for bigamy... Annika shud slap one with dadi, tej, Jhanvi, shakti, Om all being on her side... So that shivaay accepts to them all that he is in a mess or decides to fight it out on court n go to jail...

But yahan toh screenplay writer sahiba has hots for Shivaay... Looks like it... Fantasizing him with numerous other women... Insulting his wife whom he promised to always honor n keep happy... Throwing her out of their bedroom to make space for his new wife... N after all this not even revealing to her that he is in mess.. ha! ha! ... you answered it yourself gurl 😆

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neeli123

@neeli123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: NYCForever

@bold - forget about being married, even a woman in a solid relationship which may or may not end in marriage should not be putting up with all this

but kaisa yeh abusive ishq haiii, ajab sa risk haiii🤣🤣🤣and then the teenage fan girls are justifying all this and i cant even - anyone who has ever been in a relationship or gone out on a date even would know what a shit load of nonsense plot this and the way they are treating anika and what they are showing is a criminal offense in the country i live in - mocking women and marriage both #sickening and this does confirm our theory that this writer is smoking hash 😉😆

Missed your posts Ruz...all posts are bang on... 👏 👏 Onething I feel is The writer wants to show women low in everyway, where u tolerate everything, your husband marrying others and treating you like doormat...Shame on writer, being a women her thoughts are so low..

Edited by neeli123 - 7 years ago

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neeli123

@neeli123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

@Pearl bang on post dear... The show is in a path there is no redemption... ...Its been a while since I enjoyed a track... Shivika remarriage I felt like yawing, how many times will they get married and separated ...the writer has no vision...better to end the serial soon...she really has no track for other couples...

Edited by neeli123 - 7 years ago

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