RiKara OS- Dua - Page 3

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...

Totally loved it

sometimes we fear to give second chance to someone

there is a point of tolerance and if it goes after that

we wnt be able to handle it... gauri had suffered so much... she had given him time but he never said anything that time...when he said it now she doesn't want to hear it... its all about time...

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Amazing os!!

Loved it..

Very beautifully written..

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

wow! this is defo one of the best OS i have read so far! you really do have a flair! that too a poetic one. the dialogues were bang on point! this track however had so much potential and i was almost about to request you to convert it to an FS till you dropped those magnanimous words in the very end staying true to its title! brilliant savy! or shall i say absolutely savage!😆😉

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Really emotional OS.

Originally posted by: sara1990

Great OS. You made me understand sometime not all stories have good ending. But the ending part was great. You will be happy when your love ones are happy.