RiKara OS- Dua - Page 2

wow! this is defo one of the best OS i have read so far! you really do have a flair! that too a poetic one. the dialogues were bang on point! this track however had so much potential and i was almost about to request you to convert it to an FS till you dropped those magnanimous words in the very end staying true to its title! brilliant savy! or shall i say absolutely savage!😆😉

Great OS. You made me understand sometime not all stories have good ending. But the ending part was great. You will be happy when your love ones are happy.

Originally posted by: rikara94

Its so so so amazing dear..its very emmotional😭

I loved it..loved each dialogues..that was perfect...

The way you elaborate situations..feelings and emotions..superb yar

And at the end she left...she left him😭

I also have my internal exam tomorrow😆

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..

Hey! You are back! 😃
And what an amazing and lovely and emotional OS! ❤️
Powerful dialogues + your amazing = magic!!
It was beautifully sad and painful...

Originally posted by: priya_86

This is my favourite genre...i just loved it dear...beautifully written 😊

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

so emotional and touchy!

Originally posted by: dazzles

It was heart wrenching... I am crying dear...
Hopefully you will write something soothing after this...because you are an amazing writer...

Originally posted by: Rupina

Tomorrow is my test and I got depressed after reading this.it's so emotional.Beautifully written

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Hey Savvy..you're back..hope you're okay now...I'm crying after reading this...this is so heart wrenching yet beautiful...

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

my heart broke reading each word but what a wonderful story

you described her emotions and her bitterness so well wow

amazing work👏