The Dialogue Series-Rikara- drabble 1 - up

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Posted: 7 years ago
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The right combination of a few words that just hit straight at the heart.
I am a big fan of dialogues of movies (monologues as well). They are a way of speaking infinite emotions with finite words.
Bollywood is flooded with Heart-touching Dialogues.

So here I am with a new concept of writing Drabbles/Short Shots/One Shots incorporating or taking these Beautifully Carved Art Of Words (a few of my favorite dialogues) - as the central theme .



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And yes feel free to pm me if anyone would love to join me at this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Drabble 1


Kuch Zakhmon Ke Karz Lafzon Se Ada Nahi Hote



Dialogue: Kuch Zakhmon Ke Karz Lafzon Se Ada Nahi Hote

Movie:Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

Writer- Karan Johar Niranjan Iyengar(dialogues)



"I m Sorry", he whispered into her ears as they danced to the soft music. There bodies swaying in sync to the musical waves. Sometimes they just felt so perfect together.

His eyes looked down at her face. She gulped not allowing the tears to prick her eyes. He gently pressed her palm to draw her attention and repeated the words.

She tilted her head slightly her lashes fluttered as she looked up at him. Her eyes revealed pain that could kill him a slow poisonous death.

"Was it so easy for you to..?" her voice almost choked, as her eyes now glistened. He did it every time. She knew his insecurities to well now, she fought them bravely as well. She fought his insecurities and he triumphed.

He gazed at her painfully, lowering his eyes. He had taken her and her love for granted quite too much.

"I was wrong." He confessed looking down sideways.

It pricked her heart.

"I m Sorry Gauri... I promise...!"

"Kuch Zakhmon Ke Karz Lafzon Se Ada Nahi Hote" she cut him off, leaving his hand she walked away fading into the shadows leaving him in the crowd alone.

He had gone a little too far this time. He had challenged her character. He had left her with deep wounds this time. Wounds that would stay!

Not every wound that one heart inflicted on another could be washed away with mere words.

The debit of few wounds cannot be done away with words.


P.S

Hope you all liked it.

Feel free to drop in your suggestions, comments and feedback. 😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Short but with full impact. Well done😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is beautiful..will be waiting for the next one..
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

This is beautiful..will be waiting for the next one..

I'm really sorry Anii..I was engrossed with my thoughts while reading this and as a result I messed the author's name..it's so embarrassing.. 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

I'm really sorry Anii..I was engrossed with my thoughts while reading this and as a result I messed the author's name..it's so embarrassing.. 👏


Arey no problem. Its okay. Even I mess up names at time. Its okay no need to apologise 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa



Arey no problem. Its okay. Even I mess up names at time. Its okay no need to apologise😳

Thankooo for understanding... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you all for the appreciation.:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love the idea and the drabble was beautiful! The dialogue fit into these two beautifully!

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