Gauri Kumari Sharma - 3 years later - Rikara OS (Changed #3)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

what a breathtakingly beautiful update! set in kashmir!

the beginning of the OS was insane.. the way you portrayed Gauri! the phoenix rising from the ashes.. the GKS we have always known! the one who never bowed down to fate but fought with everything she has and writes her own destiny despite and inspite of everything thrown at her! this indomitable spirit defines Gauri.. which you captured ever-so-beautifully! thankyou for giving us the real Gauri!

Your story reminds of a few lines that used to keep me awake at night long long ago...

"Behold! I rise to meet the destined spring

And scale the stars upon my broken wing!"

~ Sarojini Naidu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
wow totally loved this new improved independent gauri
loved it

Independence is great in a lady. 😉 Thanks for reading.😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rikara94
Amazing dear..
Gauri os now independent..lovely
Gauri adopt a baby
Waiting for the namkaran and rikara face off
Update soo

I will try. Can you think of what the name could be? Thanks for reading😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan
That was an awesome update !!
Really excited for the next part, please pm me the update

Thank you for reading.😊 Sure thing.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: perFICtionist.
what a breathtakingly beautiful update! set in kashmir!
the beginning of the OS was insane.. the way you portrayed Gauri! the phoenix rising from the ashes.. the GKS we have always known! the one who never bowed down to fate but fought with everything she has and writes her own destiny despite and inspite of everything thrown at her! this indomitable spirit defines Gauri.. which you captured ever-so-beautifully! thankyou for giving us the real Gauri!
Your story reminds of a few lines that used to keep me awake at night long long ago...

"Behold! I rise to meet the destined spring

And scale the stars upon my broken wing!"
~ Sarojini Naidu

Those lines will keep me awake now😭 - They're uplifting yet so saddening. This is my first time coming across them, and they make my heart hurt. They speak of an impossible dream, that has been reached, but the one who has attained has not done so unscathed - they have a 'broken wing', which could symbolise what has been lost to come this far. This quote fits so perfectly to the Gauri I am showing. Thank you so much. As always thanks for reading and reviewing😊 You always make me smile, but this time you've made me shed a tear - well you and Gauri in the epi today😭. It's been an emotional day.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Hashish this is the first time am ever reading your os. It's breathtakingly beautiful and I love the take gauri is adopting a daughter.. just read the first crappy and I am in awe. I will complete the next one and i will come back with a longer one.. eres ing until now😊