Rikara FF : Only mine chap 3 page 2

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Shivaay is Gauri brother.

Chapter 1 :

A joyful girl, wearing white salwar comes out of the plane. All views are on her. Her bangles and her ankle bracelets make the same background noise. Her lips are pink. In front of her a grandfather can't carry his suitcase until the taxi. So she helps him. They are out the airport.

Grandfather : God bless you. What is your name ?

The girl : My name is Gauri dadaji.

Grandfather : Thank u my child.

She greets the grandfather and call a taxi.

Gauri POV : I don't say to bhaiya that I take the flight today. So I can enjoy before the surprise.

Gauri : Uncle can u drop me until the nearest temple ? Please.


Taxi driver : Sure. It is uncommon to see a respectable girl like you.

Gauri : It's just my proper education thanks to my brother and it's normal help people.

Taxi driver : Haan likin in this time no girl is like u. I salute ur education. U have lucky to be educated like that.

Gauri : Yes

Taxi driver : Your parents are very proud.

Gauri is muted : I don't know about them, but my brother is happy.

Taxi driver : Mafkardo mai zyada bol diya.

Gauri : Kuy bat nai bhaiyya.

Taxi driver : We have arrived to the temple.

Gauri : Bhaiyya can u wait for me ?

Taxi driver : Yah sure and it's good I will drink coffee.

Gauri bumps to someone.

Gauri : Sorry madam, I don't see you.

Madam : Kuy bat nai.

Gauri enters in the temple.

She asks the panditji if she can sings. He agrees.

Jai Ambe Gauri, Maiya Jai Shyama Gauri.
Tumako Nishadin Dhyavat, Hari Bramha Shivari.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Mang Sindur Virajat, Tiko Mrigamad Ko.
Ujjval Se Dou Naina, Chandravadan Niko.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Kanak Saman Kalevar, Raktambar Raje,
Raktpushp Gal Mala, Kanthan Par Saje.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Kehari Vahan Rajat, Khadag Khappar Dhari,
Sur-Nar-Munijan Sevat, Tinake Dukhahari.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Kaanan Kundal Shobhit, Nasagre Moti,
Kotik Chandr Divakar, Rajat Sam Jyoti.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Shumbh-Nishumbh Bidare, Mahishasur Ghati,
Dhumr Vilochan Naina, Nishadin Madamati.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Chand-Mund Sanhare, Shonit Bij Hare,
Madhu-Kaitabh Dou Mare, Sur Bhayahin Kare.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Bramhani, Rudrani,Tum Kamala Rani,
Agam Nigam Bakhani,Tum Shiv Patarani.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Chausath Yogini Mangal Gavat,Nritya Karat Bhairu,
Bajat Tal Mridanga,Aru Baajat Damaru.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Tum Hi Jag Ki Mata, Tum Hi Ho Bharata,
Bhaktan Ki Dukh Harta, Sukh Sampati Karta.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Bhuja Char Ati Shobhi,Varamudra Dhari,
Manvanchhit Fal Pavat,Sevat Nar Nari.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Kanchan Thal Virajat, Agar Kapur Bati,
Shrimalaketu Mein Rajat, Koti Ratan Jyoti .
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

Shri Ambeji Ki Arati, Jo Koi Nar Gave,
Kahat Shivanand Svami, Sukh-Sampatti Pave.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri...

All clap for her singing.

She gets prasad.

Gauri sees a old woman sitting.

Gauri : Nani eat the prasad.

Nani : Likin panditji gives it to you.

Gauri : It's not a problem. Please mere liye.

Gauri feeds her.

Nani calls : Jhanvi come here.

Nandini sees the woman with whom she bumped.

Jhanvi : Ji maa kya baat hai?

Nani : Dekho this beautiful girl who fed me prasad.

Jhanvi : Thank you.

Gauri : It's my pleasure.

Gauri kisses Nani's cheek.

Gauri : Bye Madam.

Before Jhanvi speaks she went.

Nani : Dekha Jhanvi, she is perfect, I want her for Om.

Jhanvi : I wish too. Maa come Om will wait for us.

On the other hand, a man makes up-and-coming.

She whistles when Gauri passed.

Gauri : Excuse me Mister.

Om removes his glasses : Bolo.

Gauri: You are in temple, first so learn some manners.

Om : Excuse me. U know who I am ?

Gauri : I don't need to know about you. Just get out of my way.

Gauri sits on the taxi.

Jhanvi and her mom saw all the scene and approaches Om.

Jhanvi : Come on Om we have to go.

Om : Mom, u looked the arrogancy of this girl.

Jhanvi holds his ear : First u entered in temple wearing glasses and u whistled. So she was right to put you on your place.

Om : App bhi naa, mom.

They open the doors.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely 👍🏼
Please update
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Omkara as bad boy
Loved it
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Thank you dear.


Originally posted by: Patharsitara

Lovely 👍🏼

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Chapter 2

Gauri goes toward the hospital, where she hears two people talking.

The girl is wearing a sexy top and a jean.

The man like a strict officer is in suit but seems to be damn hot.

Girl : Sir, I prepare all the files in your desk.

Sir : Tikk likin what about the heart patient transfer ?

Girl has fear : Woh sir actually I forgot to prepare...

Sir anger : Are u mad to forget ? It's someone life how u can be so careless ? U forgot about that but never to make up or anything like that !!! Haan...

Someone interrupts them. It's the same guy of the temple.

Om : Abhi stop ur bhak-bhak yaar. U always are behind Anika, ok I admitted she did mistake but not a crime.

Shivaay : Doctor Oberoi don't interfere in this matter. First you are late.

Om seeing Shivaay : Anika go from here, the pollution is bad here.

Shivaay holds Om hand : When I speak with my staff don't make ur nose in it.

Om : First leave my hand otherwise...

Anika : Om stop yaar.

Om : Are u serious Anika? I defend you in front of him. And it's not me who held someone else.

Anika : Sir please forgive us.

Shivaay leaves his hand.

Om : Thank god u are here Anika, warna I will show him...

Shivaay holds his collar : Kya haan ? How to romance with girls ?

Om also grabs his shirt : I am not like you, I am so hot that I can flirt with any girl.

Anika : Please leave it, everyone see us. Stop the fight.

Om : No not today.

Gauri hears everything.

Gauri approaches them : So what the hell is this ? I came here for treatment and what I see two persons fought in hospital.

Shivaay doesn't see her face but have a smile : Gauri.

He suddenly leave the shirt and throws Om's hands.

Shivaay turns himself : Gauri tum ya haa ?

Gauri runs to his brother and embraces him.

Gauri : Haan kyu I disturbed on ur fight. How u can fight inside the hospital ?

Shivaay : Woh mai...

Gauri : Nai bhai it's not correct. Ask her sorry.

Om : Shivaay listen her. Usse kuch siklo.

Gauri points Om : Or tum charam nai hai to speak like that to my brother ? I thought u have some knowledges likin nai even if u are in hospital u are ready to beat someone. Bhai who is him ?

Shivaay : He is our doctor, the best doctor of Delhi.

Gauri : So what if he is a doctor ? How he can call u by ur name ?

Shivaay holds her shoulers : Let it. First I want to see my Gauri correctly after two years.

Gauri : I am sorry bhai to not prevent you about my coming today. I wanted to see Delhi by my own eyes.

Shivaay : Kuy bat nai ? So what did u see ?

Gauri : Just temple and a arrogant guy who is none other than your doctor.

Shivaay and Anika : What ?

Anika : You Om Singh Oberoi went to the temple.

Gauri : Not in the temple but at the door to whistling.

Om : Shuru maat hoo jao. I prefer Shivaay to you.

Gauri : Just be far to me.

Om : What are u thinking about urself ? U are not Aishwarya Rai ?

Om : Listen I will never be romance with you.

Gauri : Toh what are u thinking that I am dying to be ur girlfriend ? I don't like these things.

Om : Like brother like sister. Marna padda gha that u are the copy of your brother.

Shivaay : Gauri relax come mere saath to my cabin. Anika gives us one black coffee and one tea.

Shivaay holds her hand and they enter in his cabin.

Om : I will help u to prepare.

Anika : What are u thinking ?

Om : Nothing yaar.

They went to the cafeteria where they order one coffee and one tea.

Anika receives Bhavya's call.

In the same time Om puts salt in the tea.

Om : Miss Gauri Sharma enjoy ur tea.

He smiles.

Anika comes : why u are smiling alone ?

Om : Nothing go.

Om goes to his ward.

Anika feels something fishy.

She knocks.

Shivaay : Come.

She tends the tea cup to Gauri. And puts the other one on the desk.

Gauri : Sorry mango.

Anika : Mean ?

Gauri : Not u I spoke to bhai. Even if she did mistake u was rude to her.

Shivaay : Likin ?

Anika : It's not necessary, Madam.

Gauri : No, I saw the sadness in ur eyes. I don't like it. Bhai.

Shivaay hesitantly : I am sorry.

Gauri : That's a good boy.

Shivaay smiles : Anika can u arrange the files ?

Anika : Ji, sir.

Gauri spits the tea.

Shivaay : Kya waa ?

Gauri : Nothing bhai I wanted to speak alone with Anika after u will show me my desk.

Shivaay: But ?

Gauri : It's girl issues.

Gauri and Anika leave the cabin.

Anika : Kya waa Madam ?

Gauri : When I think that I defend you to my bhai ? Shit.

Anika : Kya waa Madam ?

Om comes laughing : How is salt tea ?

Gauri : So it's your work.

Anika : What he puts in your tea salt ? Om are u mad ?

Gauri : Anika first don't call me by Madam. Use my name. Or tum Om Singh Oberoi just wait and watch my revenge.

She leaves.

Anika: It's not fair yaar. U know she is so kind she made her brother to say sorry. For the first time Shivaay smiles to me.

Om regrets his act but remembers her harsh words to him : so kya ? It's just tea.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its lovely update dear...
So they are doctors han...by reading this mujhe dill mill gyye serial yad aa gya
Om is the best doc in delhi i love rikara's tashan here.. waiting for more tashan..
Amazing
Update soon
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takkar wala love story
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hi... interesting ... update soon and send on pm
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Chapter 3

Gauri enters in Om's room and thinks how she can make her revenge.

She takes out a glue from her blouse.

She sees if someone is coming. But no one is here. She puts some glue to his chair.

Suddenly she hears someone footsteps, so she quicly hidden behind the curtains.

Om enters whistling and sits on the chair.

Nurse coming : Doctor Oberoi your patient is ready for the operation.

Om : Ok go I will come behind you.

She left he tries to stand up but can't.

Om : Shit why the hell I can't stand ? And the patient is waiting in the operation theatre.

Gauri thinks : How I can't put his patient in danger because of him.

She comes out from the curtains.

Om : How you can be here ?

Gauri : Woh actually I am.. !

Om : So you are responsible for my situation actual.

Gauri : All is because of you.

Om : Ok now we will continue the fight after, please can you help me to stand up ?

Gauri holds his hand ans starts pulling him.

Hardly he stands up and falls on her.

She pushes him : Be in your limits.

Om : I have no time, but I will sure respond to this very fast.

He turns to leave and walks.

Gauri sees that his pants is torn.

Gauri : Om wait.

Om turns : What ?!

Gauri : You pants is torn.

Om : WHAT !

He checks and takes a trousers from his bag.

Om : Can you leave from here or you want to check on me ?

Gauri : Just shut up.

Om changes himself and go to the operation theatre.

In the other hand, Anika comes to the cleaning room where someone is already here.

The persons hugs her by behind.

Anika : Leave me.


He leaves her and she turns herself to see Shivaay.

Anika : You are so bad.

Shivaay : Excuse me Anika, I didn't want to hurt you but if I didn't do that every staffs while doubts on us.

Anika : I prefer you sister compared to you.

Shivaay : Haan to how is my sister ?

Anika : The sweetest person, I think she will easily accept me.

Shivaay : But we have to wait until her marriage, it's my biggest ambition and I am hurry to know who will be the lucky one.

Anika : Don't worry afterall she is your sister she can't be trapped easily. Tell me about her.

Shivaay hugging Anika : She just finishes her studies and I am sure she will be more famous that Om. She is a formidable sister. She loves everyone but never diggest a macho.

Anika : So she will definitely hate Om.

They laugh.

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Something unique and different on RIKARA
Loved it

Waiting eagerly to read more
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