RiKara drabble series - #6 Beach - 28.10 - page 17

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Faye .. 🤗 .. firstly apologies for the late comment .. but man how romantic n naughty n teasing is this one .. mehandi is supposed to be spent like this .. haha. . Omkaras got his Christmas early though Gauri seems to be enjoying this thoroughly.. haha .. n Faye Angst ho ya romance ya flirting takes.. you rock each one of them .. love them all .. thanks so much sweetie .. :))

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perFICtionist.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

the concept of drabble is very cruel. and hand it over to talents like you and its a bloodbath😆😆😆 but how can i not read your stuff Faye! its not in me to deny my greed😳 lol

the proposal: perfect! just the way i see rikara doing it! private.. both hate the drama and spotlight and yet their passion is legendary! how they crackle with their chemistry when they havnt even so much as realized their feelings. wonder what would happen to us when they proceed towards bio!😳

The mehendi: whyyy you stop at that! 4 lines and my imagination is running amok!! no mercy! none whatsoever! my poor poor heart harboring such elaborate dreams☺️

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: priya_86
aww...Faye...blushes...😳
That was something...
serial mein toh nahin milega...so you guys are the saviours

Thank you, Priya!

By now, everyone knows that we are dkds. Gonna get nothing!

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Ahhaan..!! He's taking full advantage..blush blush blush...it's just "AWWW" you know..

Awww! I know, Tasnim!

Glad you liked this drabble.

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer
Di,
This was hot. Really hot. *i am blushing n sweating* *fans herself* kal raat mera bhukhar iske wajah se uthra. 🤣 Docs taking fokat ka credit. 🤔 🤣

Anyways reading it for the third time n still it makes my heart skip a beat, makes it flutter. And I feel warm all over. ☺️

Keep em coming Di.

Will be sending you some hot omkie pics, With that glasses n beads for purely selfish reasons. 😉

Lots of hugs
Piyu

Hahaha!

I'm demanding money now for getting your fever off!

Glad you liked this drabble. Itna zyaada acha laga? 3 times??

Still waiting for those omkie pics but ab send mat karna. Dimaag is garam right now on him!

*hugs*

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: rikara94
Awww☺️this tiny drabble make me blush bahut sara☺️
Tha chotu sa but action and reaction bde the😆
Amazing faye..concept of mehandi was brilliant and look at our omkie bahut badmash..taking full advantage of her mehndi

P.s. i knw aap zinda ho😆😆

Awwee Jyothi! I'm glad!

Our omkie is badmaash bas show me nikamma ho gaya hai. Aur akal ghaas khaane gayi hai uski.

Thank you for the love!

P.S: rikara confession ke liye we are alive!

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: indigal07
So hot, and just perfect for this Rikara draught we're having this weekend. Thank you so much for sharing your incredible writing, Faye! Your stories have the best Rikara kiss and intimate scenes. ☺️ Always looking forward to what you write!

Thank you, Indigal! What do I call you??

Inna saara pyaar and praise! I'm always happy to help with RiKara helpings because har jagah se we get disappointed. So writings se hi sahi, atleast we get RiKara!

Again, thank you for the sweet words!

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: SRKisLove
Nice one Faye! 😉 Naughty and hot! ☺️
Thanks for writing this one, Faye! 😊

Thank you, Ananya! Naughty Omkara is a dream.

Happy you liked it.

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: minamma
Faaye you will surely kill us someday
Mehndi reminds of cooling effect instead its turning things hot
Uff despo kara cant keep his hands to himself
Do write more

Nahi, Minamma! Maarne ka iraada bilkul nahi hai! Varna padhega kaun?

Mehndi ki thand me omki ko garmi chadhi hai.

Will surely write more! Thank you!