Rikara TS: Silsila Yeh Chahat Ka (Completed, Index: Pg1)

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Awesome ending.

Loved it.

Very beautifully written..

Enjoyed reading this.

Edited by arshifansiri - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Awesome update yar...

Totally loved it...

you beautifully portrayed Omkara's emotions yar

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Priya_Iyer

@Priya_Iyer

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Kaarthi,

What an emotional update da! Loved it.

The dialogues of both of them were spot on!! Om's guilt driven dialogues left me teary eyed.

The ending was actually a beginning and I loved it. What a fitting conclusion!

Hugs 🤗

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Karthi 🤗

Haaye ni Gulab jaamun ... Kya likha hain 👏 *Standing Ovation*

Gauri being firm saying Aapko is rishte ke baare mein jitna sochna gain soch lijiye hum bareilly jaa rahe hain ! Om not wanting her to go but letting her go is love ... Ready to bear more pain of detachment and loneliness 😭 ' Tumhaari khushi mere lite sabse zyada maayine rakhti hain ... Jo maangna hain maango ' ... I really liked the flow, aspects and the end of the conversation ... So god damn meaningful ... Yaar onscreen bhi inko ek room mein band Karo ... Hugh ... As Faye says Jalebi kahika 😆 but you know what makes me the happiest ke finally Omkara ji kuch bole the other aspects of it can be that he could have stopped her and said meri zindagi tumhari a man at hain or he could have said durr ho jaao mujhse ...

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

what a beautiful ending! sensational! omkara's emotional outburst was beautifully portrayed! his insecurities, guilt, shame came pouring out at the fear of losing his Gauri..! and the way he said her happiness is of utmost importance to him warmed my heart! 😳

ending could not have been better!👏

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Namita

@nami9j

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Wow.. so so beautiful story.. read all d parts in one go.. can actually imagine everything u wrote in front of my eyes.. u have explored om n gauris character so beautifuly.. the dialogues r briliant..the mehndi scene , kheer wala scene are so wonderfully writen.. i so want to c such scenes of rikara.. and wat an emotional ending.. i wish it didnt end n u continued even more .. can u write one more rikara story on d basis of yest epi. Like wat will b rikaras equation after d chaiwala scene yest..

N ya thanx for dis awsum story🤗..

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Ann17

@Ann17

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

[B][/B] so cute.. m loving ur work

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Arti

@Blueheaven1999

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Amazing...

Srry for being absent from the forum for so many days..

Actually boht kch nya ho gya lyf m...mbbs m admission..n fir waha adjustment...

Mjhse mra india forum chuut gya tha..😭

But now I will be sincere n regularly active😉

Now coming to yr story..I read all the parts in a go..

It's quite awsm..

Aap ita achaa kaise likh skte ho...

Aap boht khidkitod writter ho...

Luv u so much...

Bass aaj pure din aapki stories hi pdhti rhi...

Luv u so so much.

Keep writing.

Yr biggest fan..

Aru..

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

This is the best update. It shows how selfless Gauri is and all she needs in this world is her Omkaraji. I hope Omkara will find a way to finally forgive himself and live a wonderful life with Gauri.

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