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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Rani_Love
Hey,

Have read through a few of your writings and this is my first time commenting here! This is such a beautiful piece of writing on my favourite couple.

We badly need this talk between Shivika right now. And you've portrayed the entire thing so flawlessly. This chawl track had so much potential it needed to have a balance of the funny and intense moments. Wish CVs take some inspiration from this and give us what we need.

Meanwhile we have writers like you who make this frustrating phase a lot more bearable.

Thank you :)

hey rani😊

first of all welcome😊thanks for deciding to comment for the first time.

thank you so much for such a warm comment😊😳and yes i completely agree, i wish the chawl track could have been used much more effectively'

once again thank you dear.

much love ,

smiley

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: cestlavie
Lmao! Apt title 😆...this is the damn closure I needed!! If only someone from the creative would read this!!
Well done!! Now do me a favour and update your other stories please 😳

❤️

Haha lol mamo😆 thanks a lot 😆 i defo would update and btw u better get ready for shivika SR😆

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: manaalkhan
Hey smiley.! Minnie here.!
It was amazing.! I loved it.!
Have read your fic too just a few days back but never got the time to comment, busy with studies like hell.! Anyhu' will do it very soon.
But you're a god gifted writer my dear.!
Keep it up.!
Please do write the second part yar.! Will be eager to read it.!
Much love.❤️🤗

Hey minnie😊🤗

Awww ... thank you so much dear😊 i can understand dear, but still you chose to remember and say now na... that means a lot😊

@Bold can i just say am speechless?? Thank you so much for such great words yaar😊⭐️i feel immensely honoured😊

Yea dear , i would update 2nd part too😊hope you would love it too😊

Once again thanks for such a lovely comment dear😊

Keep reading and keep supporting me😊

Loads of hugs🤗

smiley

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EnasZ

@EnasZ

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

first of all welcome back smiley...i know u've been back for a while but still ...welcome...missed u so much

coming to this OS...I am actually so happy u have no idea...khushi ki aasu

this os is perfect...it has everything i wanted from ruinion...touch,talk and rain romance

u even made them both confess together...my god i was so happy reading that

i am so glad u got them talking...and u put those 3 months pain so beautifully that it breaks my heart to remember how they

went through all that

Reading that the whole jail stunt was shivaay's move made me even happier...his brain is used by him thank god

and him telling annika about his cliff stunt was the best...cause she'll know how much did the whole separation really effet

him in more ways than one

thank u so much for writing this smiley...for making this one of the best OS i read in recent times...and for fulfilling

every dream sequence i had in mind regarding this

i'm sooo happy right now...i feel like dancing

love u

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Hi Smiley Di...
This one is beyond khidkitod...
Love it a lot...
You described their emotions so beautifully...
You are an amazing writer.. Love you...

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
Absolutely Amazing Smiley❤️
Loved this OS. The emotions were so well portray and I could imagine every scene the way you wrote it. This was so adorably Shivika. And I would not say no to a hot installment of this romance. Update whenever you can.

PS: Love the title... Now we all know what team you are in😆

Blues

hey amneet😳

how are you dear??😳

thanks a lot for the compliment dear😊am really glad you liked it😊

oh ya, hot update coming up, i am supposed to write two hot updates today but mood kharabwould update soon dear😊

hahaha ... yup, my allegiance belongs to that team😆i made a special appearance and got a royal welcome in that war 😆so ya, a proud touch and talk member😆*that sounds bad*😆

loads of love and hugs to you🤗

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Rohini

@ithihaas

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

This is lovely shot...

I think it had all the things that we as Shivika fans wanted them to do in the show after their reconciliation... Talk about their 3 months survival without each other...

You have beautifully portrayed the same in this OS...

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile
Enjoyed Smiley!
Smiley your banner I've made. I'll send you the link of downloading it soon.
Yaar smiley, thanks for pm n khitkitid episodes.

Thank you sooo much daisy😊

Love u loads😊gimme some time to revert back to your fics yaar. Am sure those are gonna b awesome but i am kinda not in my reding temper. Hence the delay😭 but wud defo read soon.

Once again thanks a lot love... am waiting to see your magic in that banner😊