Touch,talk and more - shivika OS *thanku for 100+ likes* *6/9*

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

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S.love1

@S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing ❤️

Marvellous

Loved it a lot

This serious conversation is much needed right now in ishqbaaaz

It was a very satisfying piece, very enjoyable and beautifully penned

The way you have written this clearly shows their true characterisation and personality, their love for each other

Harneet has been ruining shivika story by giving comedy filler episode, they are good but shivika story is not meant to be good it's supposed to be awesome and recently harneet is not doing justice to it, so I thanks you for writing this piece👏

Sorry for blabbering 😳

Keep writing 😉

Much much love!

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 8 years ago

😭😭

Why must you and Aashi do this to me? Reading this is just making me mad and sad because I want to see this on screen and they are not showing it!

Thank you for writing such a beautiful OS Smiley. That Pinky promose is love!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Smiley this one is khidkhitod yar...

you know wat you covered all the points which harneet Singh never touched...

wat all we wanted to see desperatly was here...

we enjoy the comedy and episodes of fun showing now but something is missing in that... this is it. ...

shivika are back together and they had got a full day away from the family and khabab mein haddi's but they never discussed the past... How they missed each other... how they lived with out each other... how painful was it... why Annika never got any job?... why one day shivaay came to the chawl... did he once enquired about her after seperation... so many questions were there in viewers mind and the CV's never found importance to touch it... but smiley... I am so happy that you covered all the parts and gave us wat we want to see

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Rani_Love

@Rani_Love

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey,

Have read through a few of your writings and this is my first time commenting here! This is such a beautiful piece of writing on my favourite couple.

We badly need this talk between Shivika right now. And you've portrayed the entire thing so flawlessly. This chawl track had so much potential it needed to have a balance of the funny and intense moments. Wish CVs take some inspiration from this and give us what we need.

Meanwhile we have writers like you who make this frustrating phase a lot more bearable.

Thank you :)

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cestlavie

@cestlavie

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Posted: 8 years ago

Lmao! Apt title 😆...this is the damn closure I needed!! If only someone from the creative would read this!!

Well done!! Now do me a favour and update your other stories please 😳

❤️

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

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buddy me for receiving pms of my fics

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KnowItAllSwot

@KnowItAllSwott

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey smiley.! Minnie here.!

It was amazing.! I loved it.!

Have read your fic too just a few days back but never got the time to comment, busy with studies like hell.! Anyhu' will do it very soon.

But you're a god gifted writer my dear.!

Keep it up.!

Please do write the second part yar.! Will be eager to read it.!

Much love.❤️🤗

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 8 years ago

Absolutely Amazing Smiley❤️

Loved this OS. The emotions were so well portray and I could imagine every scene the way you wrote it. This was so adorably Shivika. And I would not say no to a hot installment of this romance. Update whenever you can.

PS: Love the title... Now we all know what team you are in😆

Blues

Edited by Eternized_Blues - 8 years ago