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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
its beautiful
loved how you portrayed their emotions

thank you😳

i still feel that i was unable to do justice to their real pain and feelings😭

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Sandy

@manipalaaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Beautiful I wish we could get this

My dream seq more than anything else

Hs r u reading this

If so it's much needed than anything else

The last lines r to die for😳😭

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Aparna

@Apu_915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Lovely Drabble ❤️

Beautifully Written!

I wish they'd show something like this in the show. Forgetting the pain & suffering of 3 months in a jiffy is not so easy.

Keep Writing 😊

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Anonyme

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: manipalaaa
Beautiful I wish we could get this
My dream seq more than anything else
Hs r u reading this
If so it's much needed than anything else

The last lines r to die for😳😭

i have no hopes now, Harneet knows either extreme torture by Pinky/Naagini or extreme dragging fillers episodes😭😭😭

and SC going on vacation, well we might just be getting zero shivika as from next week, them talking is very far fetched now😭

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Anonyme

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Lovely Drabble ❤️
Beautifully Written!
I wish they'd show something like this in the show. Forgetting the pain & suffering of 3 months in a jiffy is not so easy.
Keep Writing 😊

thank you😳

@bold:

i have zero hopes from Harneet, that's why i wrote something like this to fool myself😭

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Santhi_Priya21

@Santhi_Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wow Amazing..Beautifully written. I made my peace that we wont get this in the shown not even close.so please continue.

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

LOL at the randomness of the show with shivika now a days(I don't watch other couples) exception a few scenes...! Thank god that you came up with this piece, I will assume this happened in the show as beggars can not be choosers 😆 and we r definitely not gonna get this kinda sensible and poignant scenes in the show...! Still hope I am wrong!

Loved it ! ❤️

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@Reeltoreal

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

3 months apart n getting back together again hopefully for good this time should be this beautiful ... the wound should still be raw the pain should still be there n they heal together ... sort of healing each other some times talk, some times just a touch n sometimes just be there ... words not needed ...

This could/ should have been dealt with delicately n with maturity as well . Hell these are 2 grown up adults they have been thru so much together n also alone .

What they r doing is a crime ... seriously how can they ignore all this n show stupid comic story line :-( . Will they ever gain their senses back ??? It's becoming bad as days pass on ... even drag is getting dragged 🤢

Edited by yash2010 - 8 years ago