FF - I'll Love you better now - Chap 19 Page 49 Updated on 1 Apr 2018 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
my poor rudy
i felt like crying on reading his crying scene
shivaay knows now
om better be late then never just reconcile with gauri
give my rudy biggest surprise his both bhabhis happy and smiling once he is awake
and awake he will be
he cant leave and break his obro code
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Beautiful nd emotional update
I jzt hate pinky ponky
Continue asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So I finally read the next part Shelma and it is so very beautiful. Pinky when stomped on Rudra's Sherwani it was like she was stomping on my nerves. Wow! A height of nastiness from a mum. I had to stop and take a deep breath at that point before going ahead. Rudra was crying for his brother left me all gooey within. Then Omkara's reflections on his association or lack there of with Gauri was so powerful yet sans any fluff. You know how to pack power in fewer words, dear writer. Trust me if you can but my connection with your characters to me appears much easier and intrinsic than with the show itself. Kudos! Great work! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read both the chapters now and it was amazing! Poor Rudy baba😭 pinky never learns her lesson doe she?😡
It was nice to see Shivaay acknowledge the fact that Gauri did not deserve Om, and Om finally acknowledged that too... Waiting to read the next part, update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh God pinky is so much cruel
Poor Rudy is hurt
All others r upset that they couldn't save him
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Pinky is a bitch
She should be punished by her own son that's what is her worst punishment
Update soon please

I was starting to wonder if there's any hope for pinky. I mean, I just don't get her...
Anyhow, thank you so much for your comment

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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

my poor rudy

i felt like crying on reading his crying scene
shivaay knows now
om better be late then never just reconcile with gauri
give my rudy biggest surprise his both bhabhis happy and smiling once he is awake
and awake he will be
he cant leave and break his obro code
please do continue
bye sumi


I was in a trance when I wrote the scene on pinky.
It's like thinking bout pinky automatically gives me bad ideas.
Yean...and that's so true...never ever break the obro code
In my story, however...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: farinaks

Beautiful nd emotional update
I jzt hate pinky ponky
Continue asap

Thank you! 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiksha1993

So I finally read the next part Shelma and it is so very beautiful. Pinky when stomped on Rudra's Sherwani it was like she was stomping on my nerves. Wow! A height of nastiness from a mum. I had to stop and take a deep breath at that point before going ahead. Rudra was crying for his brother left me all gooey within. Then Omkara's reflections on his association or lack there of with Gauri was so powerful yet sans any fluff. You know how to pack power in fewer words, dear writer. Trust me if you can but my connection with your characters to me appears much easier and intrinsic than with the show itself. Kudos! Great work! 👏


I think I'll borrow under my blankets and cry my heart out for a few minutes, thank you😭 I feel really emotional now.As an aspiring novelist, you words mean a lot to me. Thank you! If only virtual hugs were possible...😆 Thank you very much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy

Read both the chapters now and it was amazing! Poor Rudy baba😭 pinky never learns her lesson doe she?😡

It was nice to see Shivaay acknowledge the fact that Gauri did not deserve Om, and Om finally acknowledged that too... Waiting to read the next part, update soon!

That was my honest impression. Omkara's true self is tender and quaint. I couldn't digest the fact that he could ever be so cruel. Good think the writers are finally trying to patch them up😆

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