Paroxysm - {A Collection Of Random Drabbles} 2 updated

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The Word PAROXYSM literally means
a sudden attack or outburst of a particular emotion or activity.








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Drabble 1 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143677542




Drabble 2 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4889765/paroxysm-a-collection-of-random-drabbles-2-updated








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Posted: 8 years ago
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He held her hand, she looked at him with pleading eyes. "Mat Jao Anika.!"


"Please Shivaay...mat rokiye!" she spoke amidst tears



"Jaana jaruri hai kya.?"



"Agar abhi nahi gayi naa toh kabhi nahi jaa paaungi.

Hummare beech jo hai naa, wo bahut strong hai.

Saath rahenge toh bahut dard hogaa Shivaay.!

Why don't you understand I bring out the worse in you.

I can't stay!"

Tears rolled down her eyes as she spoke looking down.



"But you also bring out the best in me!" He said holding her other hand in his, his eyes moist.


"But this best comes at the cost of worse!Not a good deal Shivaay.
Please let me go!" She pleaded, her heart ached.


A lone tear escaped his eye.He freed her left hand.
His right hand still holding hers.


"I can't live without you!"He said pressing her hand slightly.


Anika pressed his hand back-"You can,you will! I know!"


Shivaay's vision blurred as fresh tears formed.-"Tum reh paaogi mere bina?" His heart thudded, while he suffocated with every breath.


"We have our lifelines Shivaay,our brothers!" She said leaving his hand.


"Anika please !" a mere whisper that, even the mountains would echo.


"No Shivaay...What we share is beyond beautiful Shivaay!
We will spoil it if we stay. I have to go." She said adamant, her heart almost dead and her hands colored with his blood. She was scratching his heart, but she knew it was better than stabbing every single day.

Sachhi Mohabat Shaayad Wahi Hai Jiss Mein Junnon Hai

He left her hand, and stepped forward to hug her, for once he agreed to her decision. But, how would he live without her !?


She nodded in a NO and turned away tears raining down to her cheeks.
He saw her walk out, this time forever.


She stopped sighed, turning quickly, placed a kiss on his forehead and disappeared.


He turned away smiling amidst his tears

"I Love You Anika and Always Will!"


"I Love You Shivaay" she sighed looking at the sky outside, a smile slowly blooming on her face amidst the dew of warm wet droplets.

Par Do Dilon Ki Yaari Mein Bhi Toh Kitnaa Sukoon Hai,

Dekar Mujhe Teri Judaai Ran Ne Muje Paigaam Diya.



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This piece is one of the many, close to my heart.

Hope you all liked it.

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Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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She looked at him trying to take in every bit detail, tomorrow she would be gone.

"Are you okay Anika?" He asked as she stared at him strangely.



She nodded and smiled."As long as you are with me, I will be okay!"

He smiled and kissed her forehead. "I will always be with you!"



Hesitatingly, she asked him whether he would love her the same tomorrow.


"Anika, what are you saying, I will love you no matter what!" he spoke softly, caressing her cheeks.



"What if I do something bad?" She asked her eyes growing moist.

"I know you won't !" he said in a crisp confident voice, now wondering where the conversation was going. He assumed her fearful insecurities were speaking.



She smiled and extended her finger towards him-"Promise Me you will never hate me! I can't bear your hate!"



He looked shocked, why was she behaving in this manner?
The Fear, he reminded himself.


"No matter what, I will always love you, even if you want me to hate you, I will only love you!" He promised, his eyes teary.


Dil Se Dil Ka Ye Mel Sanam

Jo Kal Ho Jaaye Kam


Haalat Bigad Bhi Jaaye Agar

Hum Bicchad Bhi Jaaye Agar


Yaadon Ke Chaand Shikaare Par

Main Tumse Milne Aaunga




Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chaaunga...



She hugged him placing her forehead against his chest. She let the tears stream down, and stayed in his arms, wishing the time stopped. He hugged her back, a smile of contentment on his face.


Not aware of what the new morning would bring him.




There Love Was Eternal.!



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Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so beautiful 😳😳

Thier pain,desperation, need... you potrayed it so well.

LOVED it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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annika, they r amazing...
they love each other... bt going away from each otheq... its painful...!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Both the drsbbkes were so INCREDIBLE AND HEART TOUCHING
The first one was a bit painful nd emotional ...brought tears in my eyes
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hai yeh Kambakhat aansu...
You made me cry girl...
Really love this drabble a lot...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful work sistah...👏👏👏
Loved the first one more...Maybe bcos the song u used...Channa Mereya...is very close to my heart...
But where is your old collection of funny and humorous write ups???
Mising them badly...
But i love ur emotional ones too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Both the drabbles are so beautiful, Anni. The first one so heart wrenching. And those lines, Channa Mereya's sad version na? Loved loved it. So beautiful. ❤️
Thanks for the PM.

PS - I really don't know when I'll be able to catch up with Love by Chance. I'm really sorry Anni, I'm terrible with keeping track of SS/FF updates despite receiving PMs. Hope you understand. I will try to catch up. Hopefully soon? 😳

Much love,
Rhea ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such heart breaking drabbles, looking forward to read more. Thanks for the pm

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