RiKara SS - Catching Feelings Part 5 on Pg 16 (04/11) - Page 5

Awesome update.

Great chapters, Genie. You have penned down Om's thoughts beautifully. Eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds. Thanks for the PM. Update soon. ❤️

Genie 🤗... this is soo osm... Omkara isnt passive 😒.. what a big deal this is... not sure why the writer refuses to make the show interesting ... everything ends in linearity flat on its face... anyway their loss cause tv viewers are not enjoying this as well... but youve rehashed whatever happened on the show but in a way so muvh better that the viewers feel all paisa vasool... Omkara feels hes gone wrong in judging this girl... getting this dekho into Omkaras psyche n thats a hug huge deal for RiKarians... cvs have got Omkaras thoughts locked in some swiss bank account n refuse to let even a teeny weeny brain wave out.. kya pata ,.. but here we have him tje active participant ready to lool at his relationship in a new light... kitni khush hui mai yaar you have no clue... Thanks so much for RiKara... such potential needs writers like you elze everything comes across as bland n distasteful... had ShreNal been given this script then this show would've been something else entirely but nah nahi... anyway i wanna come off this on the show RiKara fascination since it leads to a headache n nothing more but at least got amazing writers like you who give me my RiKara dose n make md super happy... 😃.. n glad that youve started protecting your work... good girl... you deserve all the praise for taking time out for us n definitely not to be discredited n cheated... n yeppp... will definitely get in touch with ya if i wanna rant but trying to get off that phase ... doesnt really help... bas jo hai accha hai... :)

Genie what to write yar...u are impossible...again dil bole oberoi is playing here...so much emotional part it is...but its too nice...i have net problems so cant write a lengthy comment

Ginie, this is great to read Om's POV. I wished they could show us how Omkie finally listened to the Voice message or even suspect Bua Maa. Thank you for the prequel. Yes, we need to know how Rikara solves their misunderstanding and issues. Let's see whether anyone gonna be their love Cupid. Waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: rikara94

You know this is actually or exactly what i want to saw on show..i really wished they show some flashbacks that what happened in between..bocz in the show cvs did not show how om got to know about buamaa and gauri was in hospital and all but alas! Mai bhi kisse umeed kar rahi thi..but they they have to show na without this sab illogical sa feel hoing yaar..abhi bhi time hai dikha do😆chahe genie ka stuff use krlo😉genie mind nahi kroge na aap..aap bhi toh yahi chahte ho 😆

But glad you elobarate it..bhaad mein jaye gulneet😆

Really yar you described ot very nicely...bas om in now on confusing state...what to choose heart or mind...he does not no.. hope jaldi se confusing state se bahr aye😳

In next chapi i want rikara face off krwado😆

Ammm brilliant yar...you killed it

Oh wow mere gift pe kaam chal raha 😳 kab de rahe ho...i am bhookhi sherni😆

anyways update soon dear

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Genie,

Its actually nice to read the prequel of Armor series, that to in Om's point of view. Om is baffled between his heart and mind. Heart asking to believe Ri but mind is asking to believe Ri with the given all circumstances. The analysis u had done on Om is very well expressed through your writing.

Waiting how they clear the misunderstanding and they start their new life. Eagerly wait to know how Ri's truth will out and how will Om react to it. How both will confess their feelings. Hope you will update soon.

With love,
Divya

PS: Thanks for liking my style of commenting.

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

Totally loved it...

om is in confusing that to believe gauri or not...

his mind is analysing the things happening but still he wasn't able to reach a conclusion...

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Nice update

Originally posted by: Naina280599

Genie 🤗

I love love love this so much! It's perfect. Loved how you covered each and everything so wonderfully well, it didn't feel rushed at all. The way you explained his thoughts during the pregnancy act was too good. And about Bua Maa too; that how he started thinking and observing Gauri with Bua Maa. The voice message part you wrote is mind blowing. I so wished they had shown it in the show but *sigh*. Anyway, I loved that here. Om being confused makes much more sense here than in the show. Your writing is exceptional. I'm not that good at words, to praise this amazing writing of yours though. Can't wait for the next part. Post soon.

Much love ❤️