Gonna keep calling your name - a RiKara drabble

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sammyanusa
Not very nice??? Are you serious??it was absolute bliss

thank you sammy!!

happy you liked it.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Fantastic
The end was very funny.

hehe

i wanted it to be funny!

thank you.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: lovesick23
This was so so so good 😆
But just one thing if he had already locked the door how did rudy come inside? 🤣

thank you!

arree... my bad, my bad! Mujhe laga maine close likha hai! sorry.

vaise rudy wasn't supposed to be there but vo bas aa gaya 😆😆

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: _era_
I Don't have word to Express how Cutely amazing it was.
IgnoringRi and DesperateKara are Pure Bliss to Imagine...
& ur Narration of the Minutest Details of the Scenes makes it so easy for me to imagine..
I Could actually See ShreNal Enacting the Scenes Brilliantly in front of me
I love this, I love them ,I love u & ur writings.
Thanks for sharing this and making my morning!
Do write More of these

We all want a desperate Omkie and him to literally beg at her feet. But kya kare? Gulneet humse pata nahi kaunse janam ki dushmani nikaal rahe hai?!

Khair, I'm glad you guys liked it. I'm a little OCD about the tiny details, sorry you guys are subjected to it almost all the time.

Thank you, thank you for the love!! I'm blushing now!

And I'm gonna keep posting and troubling you lovely people.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Wonderful os...so cute is om and gauri and also rudra... continue with your works ...

thank you for the love, Arathi!

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rikara94
Jhooti you said drabble ke mamle mein main thoda weak hoon😆😆
Hehe😆😆
Bechara omkie want to talk with her tiny wife but is on ignoring mode😆 bana desperate ho raha hai and follows her everywhere and finally he caught her in their room...amazing drabble aye with sanskari touch😉loved rudy and his 8 bje wala dialogue and btw omkara toh locked the door na then how rudy entered in room?
But meko bahut acha lga this drabble👏

Sach me weak hu. 100 words ke andar kuch rukta hi nahi hai. bas badhta hi jaata hai!

We all love it when Gauri ignores him though, don't we?

Galti ho gayi behen, maaf kar de? Ab change kar diya hai vaise.

Thank you for the love! Will post the next part soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: mehakpreet
Too good yaar!!! Om trying hard to talk to gauri and Gauri ignoring him. Their fall I can imagine that 😳 Rudra ke timing thodi garbad ho gayi bus 😆 but that 8 baje wala was too funny

thank you Mehak! I like making you guys laugh.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Fantastic update
But how did Rudra manage to enter their room
Omkara had locked it
To corner Gauri

thank you!!

meri galti, Vrinda! sorry.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
That was amazing loved it so much.

Thank you Chipper!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Gratitude_Me
& one of my favorite writer is back.
I have missed your few os ...I think I need to take time out & read them all in one go.
I can totally imagine this on rikara .

Plz write one os in which rikara are best buddies who turn into lovers & life partners. I know it's clich but I wish someone write on that line.

Awweee!! Thank you for the love, babe! What should I call you?

I haven't written any RiKara AU but I'll try for you.