Gonna keep calling your name - a RiKara drabble

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Fantastic

The end was very funny.

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Loveena

@lovesick23

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

This was so so so good 😆
But just one thing if he had already locked the door how did rudy come inside? 🤣

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Era

@Memorable_ERA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I Don't have word to Express how Cutely amazing it was.
IgnoringRi and DesperateKara are Pure Bliss to Imagine...

& ur Narration of the Minutest Details of the Scenes makes it so easy for me to imagine..

I Could actually See ShreNal Enacting the Scenes Brilliantly in front of me

I love this, I love them ,I love u & ur writings.

Thanks for sharing this and making my morning!

Do write More of these

Edited by _era_ - 8 years ago

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Wonderful os...so cute is om and gauri and also rudra... continue with your works ...

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Jhooti you said drabble ke mamle mein main thoda weak hoon😆😆

Hehe😆😆

Bechara omkie want to talk with her tiny wife but is on ignoring mode😆 bana desperate ho raha hai and follows her everywhere and finally he caught her in their room...amazing drabble aye with sanskari touch😉loved rudy and his 8 bje wala dialogue and btw omkara toh locked the door na then how rudy entered in room?

But meko bahut acha lga this drabble👏

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mehakpreet

@mehakpreet

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Too good yaar!!! Om trying hard to talk to gauri and Gauri ignoring him. Their fall I can imagine that 😳 Rudra ke timing thodi garbad ho gayi bus 😆 but that 8 baje wala was too funny