You're my Lolita - a RiKara drabble

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Posted: 8 years ago
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OK, I'm bad at writing drabbles because they never stay within 100 words! So technically this is not a drabble. :(

Oh and I'm not even sure what I've wrote except that I wanted a jealous Omkara and hickeys.
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She remembers taking his name the previous night. Once, twice, countless times in varying tones that ranges from a whimper to a scream. However, right now, she can't even find it in herself to blush at the way she had acted as she stares in horror at the picture he has taken to show her.

The dress looks amazing, as expected, curving on her in all the right places. But, the imprints on her back hold her attention. There are clear bite marks on each of her shoulder blade with purple marks running along the side of her spine in a zigzag pattern.

"Yeh aapne kya kiye?" she grips the phone harder in an attempt to control her anger as she accuses him.

"Don't blame it all on me. Tum bhi baraabar shaamil thi issme", he says cheekily.

It does nothing to calm her rising temper.

"It looks horrible!!! Ab hum yeh kaise pehnenge? Sab sawaal karenge aur hum..." She looks at him in distress.

"to kuch aur pehen lo na! itne saare kapde hai. wear something less revealing", he gleefully suggests instead of sympathising. He loves that dress, she looks ravishing in it. He just doesn't want anyone else to see her in that dress so his contrived mind had thought up of an extremely delightful way to stop her from wearing the dress to the function today.
The wheels of her churn fast enough to catch on to his train of thoughts though.

"aapne yeh jaan bujh ke kiye, hai na?" she glares at him.

"Nahi." He averts his eyes as he lies. It confirms her suspicion.

"sach sach bataiye hume", she moves in his line of vision again.

"Ok... Mai nahi chahta ki koi aur tumhe issme dekhe", he admits. She feels a smile creep up as the anger takes a backseat slightly at his confession.

"Aap bewajah jal rahe hai", she calmly states turning back to pick up her concealer with a pensive look.

He yanks her to himself at that, her words hitting their mark, trapping her in his arms. "I'm not jealous. I just don't like others looking at what belongs solely to me", he bends down to whisper in her ear.

She gives in at the husky voice before pushing him away, the anger rising again. "Apni teerchi baato me hume mat uljhaaiye. Hume aapse baat nahi karni hai! Hum khud concealer bhi nahi laga sakte aur na hi kisiko bol sakte hai lagaane! Kare to kya kare? Kitne armaano se humne yeh dress banvaayi thi!" she has tears brimming in her eyes as she turns towards the mirror stare at the already concealed hickeys on her neck.

One look at her crestfallen face with teary eyes and all the satisfaction he feels seeing his marks on her vanishes in a poof of smoke.

"I'm sorry", he apologises half-heartedly. The fact doesn't go unnoticed by his sharp wife.

"No, you're not", she snaps at him irately.

"I am", he insists, taking a step forward to touch. She sidesteps him. "Don't you dare touch me. Or kiss me. I'm too angry right now. Men and their stupid jealousy!"

"But..." he starts only to have his wife turn her back on him and walk off with a huff to the bathroom. He stays there, dejected, quite certain that the bed will be a no-go zone for the night for him.
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Good? Bad? Awful? Let me know! Ready for your chamelis.

This started as a drabble and now I quite convinced that I cannot write drabbles!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Faye.. this is so cute n aweee n convincing.. a conversation out of RiKaras blissful marital life.. can totally picture them banter this way some point in their life.. we won't ever reach that point in the show since randomness rocks but this is super amusing .. hickeys n jealousy n possessiveness n Lolita n then the Googly.. haha.. super fun.. n drabbles are totally your zone.. keep them coming .. for now 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one Faye! As usual! 😳
Like I wrote before, Faye gives us what cvs don't (or can't in case of this one 😉)

P.S. Also, revive the imaginary talks thread no? Kal and aaj ke episodes ke baad we Rikarians have some material also, I think!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hayee..!! Kitna jalan kaha chhupa ke rakha tha Omkie ne..!!! So NaughtyKara had his plans to stop her from wearing that dress..I must say, kya tareeka nikala biwi ko rokne ka...JealousKara is always adorable..loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya Faye... You've written such a cute short yaar.
You're just genius at RiKara in any way, shape or form. All the way from the heartbreakingly sad to the blissfully awesome, you're on point every time.

This short was just the perfect peep into how RiKara's married life could be. They're so cute while retaining their personalities.

Hickeys are such a fun thing to write about... correct? I've been recently obsessed with them in my stories. Maybe because I see Omkara's intensity translating itself in that manner when it comes to nocturnal activities. So this Omkara was almost familiar to me... Men and their possessive caveman attitude. *insert eye roll here*😒

Thanks for sharing this lovely short with us...

Eagerly waiting for more from you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww this was adorable although Gauri is right men and their jealousy 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fayeee Di
I ❤️ you okay?

This was super cute. Can totally picture this with them. Sigh. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh god Faye I'm blushing at 11:51 pm while reading this & my heart is till racing.I admit I can't withstand such stuff which , including u guys write, specially on rikara...
If course I wouldn't want u to write drabble, coz it'll be too small, want u to write something longer...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous drabble. Faye
Pls make it an SS or TS
The plot deserves one more update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved it. Personally, cant wait to see jealous O. That one scene where he got angry with Gauri for thinking he didnt know what jealousy felt like was pretty hot. I want to see something on the lines of what you wrote on the show. Om can be very cheeky when he wants to be. Liked the drabble a lot.

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