My RiKara Drabbles-#13-The blessing I received-Page 25 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

It was such a Beautiful Piece
truly enjoyed it


Thanks a lot for reading dear, So happy you liked it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Om admiring the sleeping gauri was so cute.Om remembering their love story was nice.Om pulling her closer...gauri blushing was romantic.loved the sentence that he always falls in luv with her everytime he sees her.
When everyone celebrates the one yr anniversary of DBO i dont feel like..as the show is not on air n not getting rikara scenes now on IB
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Om admiring the sleeping gauri was so cute.Om remembering their love story was nice.Om pulling her closer...gauri blushing was romantic.loved the sentence that he always falls in luv with her everytime he sees her.

When everyone celebrates the one yr anniversary of DBO i dont feel like..as the show is not on air n not getting rikara scenes now on IB


Thanks a lot for your sweet words jasmine...
True but we need to cherish the fact that we got the show that made us fall in love with RiKara if not anything else so I am happy and even you should be I guess, at the end of the day, we got our RiKara.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks a lot dear.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

#12-His First Lie


"Omkara, it's beautiful, right?" Gauri questioned as she moved her eyes around trying to absorb every bit of the place, her hand was in Omkara's hand.

"Yes, Gauri, it's beautiful," Omkara said with a faded smile looking around; he looked at her hand in his, his smiled widened.

"Gauri, your house is so beautiful, completely made of wood and the big garden around it, I just love it...it has so many types of flowers, vines and creepers, it's such a peaceful place. " Omkara said as Gauri smiled hearing his words, she so wished she too could see the beauty of the place but sadly, she couldn't, an accident a few months ago snatched her eyesight and for now the sad truth was, she couldn't see anything.

"Omkara, Dhyan Se Dekho...I planted Lotus in a large pot of water at a side, it would have blossomed..." Gauri said as she started moving forward.

"Gauri, I can see it, it's beautiful...the pink Lotuses are looking lovely, lotus is your favourite flower, right?" Omkara asked as he slowly moved forward with her, hand in hand.

"Yes Omkara, they are, I am so happy, I want to touch it..." Omkara's smile faded away as he heard her words, he stopped in the place, stopping Gauri too, Gauri's smile faded.

"Gauri, next time when we come to your hometown na then I promise, we'll spend some days here only, in your house and you admire all the things, for now, you know na we have to go back, please, let's go back..." Omkara said worried as Gauri nodded sadly yet instantly, Omkara turned towards opposite side along with Gauri, he still held her hand.

Turning one last time, Omkara saw the almost burnt house, the remains of the house that once stood there were jet black, the garden which once blossomed with beautiful flowers, vines and creepers today stood lifeless, not even a single flower blossomed there, a pot filled with dirty water and colourless dead lotuses that have withered away stood at a side, it was the first time the artist lied in his life, for his Gauri, for his wife, for his love.

Gauri walked holding Omkara tightly as she smiled, 'I told you everything about my home Omkara...only forgot to tell that I planted yellow lotuses, not pink...Humare Omkara Humare Saath Rehkar Jhooth Bolna Bhi Sikh Gaye. ' She thought.

'Next time when you come here Gauri, I'll make my every lie true.' Omkara promised himself in his mind.

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A/N: So hows it? It's not a love story but a story about how much they love each other, I hope you all liked it, if you did, please consider Voting and commenting. Like post on Page 19 for PM's.


Edited by .Piyali.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely one..
Truely it was awesome..
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was a heart touching one.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is one is so beautiful.
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Posted: 7 years ago
That beautiful heartbreaking.
The man who never lied finally did just to make the Love of his Life happy.
I was sad reading she lost her sight but knowing that she was with her Omkara was comoforting. He would be her eyes.
These two are too beautiful.

Thank you for writing such a lovely piece.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash2029

Lovely one..

Truely it was awesome..


Thanks a lot dear, Am truly happy you liked it.

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