RiKara FS - The Secret Oberoi Part 5 on Pg 30 (18/08) Complete

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
oh god i hate this sania
why am i getting this feeling that she will destroyed very soon

Sumi yaar... you're so sweet!

Thanks for the lovely comment. Aap ki feeling sahi thi. Sania ka OMM imminent hai.

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Naina280599
What an update
I loved it so much. From the first line to the last, it was just perfect. Can't wait to know what this Sania has in mind.
Post soon!
Btw thank you for the wishes. Got some time while having dinner so read this in the meantime. It actually acts as a refreshment for me and i so love it. Thank you for the PM too.
Much love 🤗

Naina yaar! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comment...

Sania apni khud ki OMM kar rahi hai... wait a few minutes

I'm glad you're taking some time off from studying to relax.

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
What un update yar...too hot...cute and bold gauri...daring romantic artistkara...i dont know i jusg madly in love with both of them...i want to just strangle that witch sania...what did dhf thought of herself as if some kind of princess eh?i hope the oberoys will gjve her appropriate answer soon..

Hum sabhi isi problem ki wajah se yahaan par hain na? Sab ko RiKara ka fever chad gaya hai. Sab paglaayit chironte aur chiraiyya ban gaye hain.

Sania ko strangle mat karo yaar... us ke liye jail kyun jaana? Wo khud hi apni OMM karne waali hai to phir tension kis baat ki?

Update should be out soon!

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Roaiba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Oooh! This just got more interesting. 😉 I know what this B**** is planning but I also know that our jatadhari and chirayya will handle it 😳 aaah I can't wait to see the look on Sania's face when she finds out the truth 😉 sad that the next part is the last but this update was so Rikaralicious that I can't really complain 😳 👏

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: mehakpreet
Awesome!! Rikara getting naughty 😳 and Om giving back to Sania was too good. Let's see what Sania is planning now but at the end of the day she will be getting the shock of her life 😃. Update soon please. Can't wait more

Thanks for the lovely comment Mehak

Omki is quite straightforward as usual...

Sania's end is nigh... let's see how she wrecks herself

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: rikara94
Genie bache ki jan loge kya agaun cliffhanger yarrr..i knew that agar is chapi mein sania ki OMM na hui toh pkka last chapi mein hi hogi...we can't send u chamelies bcoz next nahi milega 😆
And sania such a despo yar pata chal bhi gya oberios are not interested in u fr bhi bimbo ke mind new plans bna raha hai..
Ahhh romantic rikara uff☺️ they are so much in love with each other and and you are right kahin pe bhi shuru ho jate hai but but puctures click ho gye yar...pata nahi saniya k khurafati dimag mein ab kya khichdi pak rahi hai...hope rayta failne se pehle oberois smet le...and saniya ko toh end mein baba ji ka thullu milne wala hai and m waiting for this🤣
Btw i love their family bond han i mean obros ne eye to eye convo kiya n sabhi waha se chle gye rikara ko privacy dene ke liye 😆whole family loves gauri..
I totally loved it

Bacche ki jaan abhi bhi baaki hai kya? 😆

Aaj ka pukka promise, koi cliffhanger nahin. Chameli nuclear missile hai kya? 😆

Sania to despo bandi hai hi... pehle se hi pata tha na? Ek shaadi shuda aadmi pe dore daal rahi thi.

Sanskari RiKara pasand aaya? Achha hai... Raiti phailana hi to mera kaam hai! Raita to phailega... properly phailaaoongi aaj to.

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: sumaiya10
Sorry for late comment.

I love their little bubble of happiness. It's just sooo overwhelming to read. You always manage lit our screens on fire with Rikara. It was just A-MA-ZING.!

After reading ur updated I start shipping them more n more.

Finally got to read about omkie. Was missing his presence but it was worth the wait

Rikara's own world of happiness always melts me..

Please sania we don't want to see what ur capable of leave them alone... 😕 i know something really bad is going to happen with gauri about her character to be precise.

Update soonishhh dear

Btw I read dude and the ordinary girl. What a ts that was. After reading Om's selfless undying love I was totally in haze. Actually that's the reason why I started liking college Fics

Koi nahin... aap ne comment kiya to sahi... usi ki khushi mein aaj hum apna poora din bita lenge. Thoda zyaada ho gaya kya? 😉

I'm glad you liked the story so much my luv

Sania acchi lagi? Itne saare log use chaar din se gaali de rahe hain... bechaari 😆

bookworm ke saare stories mujhe bohot pasand hain. The duology of the Dude and the Ordinary girl and the other one in Omki's pov... i forget the exact name, were so adorbs! But I think mera fav hai wo Pirates waala... that was just perfect imho.

Anyways, Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Rumadiv
Dear Genie,

The story is different. Loved the concept. Whole family attending Ri's graduation is interesting. Om following Ri like a lost puppy and apologizing was awesome. Waiting how Om will introduce Ri as his wife to entire people in the auditorium. Then waiting for the Sanias reaction and the plan she as planned against Ri.Though the story is going to end its really sad. Hope you will start new one and update other stories of yours.

With love,
Divya

Dear Divya,

Aap apne comments aise proper letter form mein likhte ho, mujhe bohot pasand hai. It is very sweet!

I'm glad you liked the story so far...

Om apni wife ko introduce karega ya koi aur? Pata lagaane ke liye padhte rahiye...

Sania's plan against Ri and Om is gonna go into effect pretty soon so stay tuned for the coming update.

I understand the subtle nudge. I'll get to updating my other stories quite soon. Kya karein... meri muse jo likhna chaahti hai, wahi likhti hai. 😭

With love

Genie

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Haan..next update ki intezaar mein abhi bhi zinda hoon.. 😆 lekin agar aise hi sanskari moments milte rahe toh meri weak heart ka kya hal hoga uska koyi bharosa nehi.. 😛 And if you aren't planning to stop that chudail's plan toh phir yeh hi sahi..we'll just enjoy.. 😉

Never fikar when Genie's here. Aapke weak heart ko kuch nahin hoga. Abhi ke liye sanskaar channel band ho chuka hai. Abhi thoda se drama ho jaaye to mazaa aa jaayega nahin?

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: roaiba
Oooh! This just got more interesting. 😉 I know what this B**** is planning but I also know that our jatadhari and chirayya will handle it 😳 aaah I can't wait to see the look on Sania's face when she finds out the truth 😉 sad that the next part is the last but this update was so Rikaralicious that I can't really complain 😳 👏

Thanks for the lovely comment my friend.

You know they say great minds think alike... aap ko pata hai ki kya hone waala hai aur humein bhi.

Sania's face might be too busy to react when she finds out the truth... 😆

Last part ko to kabhi na kabhi aana hi tha. Five Shot likha hai to fifth chapter post karna padega na?

Anyways, Update should be out soon!