RiKara FS - The Secret Oberoi Part 5 on Pg 30 (18/08) Complete

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: perfictionist
Awww.. this update just earned a 'shivika aww'😳
It is so fulfilling to witness a Proudkara for his little accomplished chiraiya! It has everything! a happily in love shivika! a well educated independent Gauri (feels like a fantasy world) and an understanding supportive Omkara! *pinches myself to wake up from daydream*
Aaandd thankyou for incorporating Sania's queen bee antics to trip on😆

Aap ka hukm saraakhon par...

The chapter rated an 'Aww' ?!? Thank you so much for thinking that!

I keep my characters pretty consistent through most of my slightly AU stories. Anything that doesn't quite follow canon will have this set of the IB cast in it. Mera headcanon of the entire family is just a tad bit different from canon.

My Gauri is willing and able to take control... she does qualify herself because she wants to do something on her own... not because she feels the need to make herself better for her husband or family's sake.

My Omki is always supportive and the proud husband who also loves to distract his chiraiyya just for kicks. And my OmRi have no troubles expressing themselves with each other, be it with words, gestures or through other more private means.

ShivRi is my #BroTP... they are the best part of canon in my opinion. AniRi are as close as sisters can be, Ru is his perfect early IB canonical self. And I am a firm RuMya shipper.

Anyways, enough of my blathering on

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Oh God..!! I can't wait for a whole day to know Sania's reaction after knowing Gauri's identity...uski saar pe kahi asmaan naa toot pade...aate hi mere Omie pe doore dalne shuru kar di...but she has no idea how much our Kara loves his little chiraiya..their stolen eyelocks explained everything...haye..!! In dono ko toh kuch baat karne ki bhi zaroorat nehi hain...they speak with their eyes...Sania toh khud apni Oh My Mata karwane wali hain by trying to insult Ri...Shukr manaye Sania that Kara didn't hear what she said about his wife...I'm sure he's gonna answer her in a way she never ever expected..she's gonna pay for the mess that she's trying to create...I'm feeling so relaxed after reading this...next update should be coming in a day..right...?? Usse zyada intezaar nehi hoga...so iss bhookhad ko zyada der tak bhookha mat rakhna plz... 😛 😉 😳

Tasnim! 🤗

Aap logon ke pyaare comments ka reply karte hi next update upload ho jaayega. Maar afsos, is mein bhi Sania ki OMM nahin hone waali hai. Build-up thoda zyaada ho gaya kya?

Magar aur nahin tadpaaoongi. FS hai to last chapter mein at least thoda drama, thoda dhamaka and bohot saari OMM to honi chaahiye right?

This time tomorrow... I promise.

Waise, I'm glad you liked the story so far. RiKara ko to kabhi bhi dialogues ki zaroorat hi nahin hai. Hai wo Atif waale awesome din! *le sigh*

Ri and Kara are gonna be busy with themselves... Sania ka OMM wo khud hi karvaayegi.

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani
Love. Love. Love. So in love with the way you have expressed Omkara and Gauri's love for each other. I literally felt it to my toes..😳 Gosh (fanning myself)... mindblowing update!...update the next chapter soon! Maybe tomorrow? 😉😆

Arre! Pichle update ke liye hi *fanning yourself* ho raha tha to is update ke liye thoda sa thanda paani rakhlo aap paas mein. Disclaimer de dia hai abhi ke abhi!

I'm very glad you liked the update so much.

RiKara to hamesha se hi mindblowing rahe hain... at least when they're not bogged down by the stupid script and any director other than Atif. Atif!!! Humare RiKara dreams ka hero... humein aise chhod kar aap IPK3 kaise chale gaye?

Anyways, Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Wow amazing...how can you write this much beautifully the uncontrolled live between the husbanc and wife...even his presence make her blush...he can only see his chiraiyya...what a romantic scenario u have been portraying through this series...iam in live witb rhus story...note im in live with all of your stories...but this is more special yaar...tbanks a ton fir back to back updates...lots of love...waiting for next...

Romantic scene tha na? Ab thoda aur hotness factor ke liye ready ho jaao.

I'm very very happy that you love this story so much! And I'm very grateful for all your love on my other stories too!

Hopefully the next couple of chapters are as fulfilling for you as these three have been.

Update should be out soon!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Mujhe uss queen bee ki bachchi ka oh my mata dedo Genie! I beg you, can't wait anymore...I'm getting all worked up...deep breath...relax...okay...how can you write so well? You got me all excited like it's results day or my own graduation.
Now I just want one of them to spill it out. God, update soon ah darling? Don't tease my poor heart!
Love,
Sakura

Sakura ❤️🤗

This comment from you will have me grinning for a week!

So happy my words were able to do that! Every time you post something, you have no idea mera kya haal hota hai. Your words are simply magic and they make me feel a whole gamut of emotions. I'm glad I was able to make you feel a bit of excitement in return... 😆

I hope your poor heart is doing fine because an update is coming... but still no major signs of Sania's downfall yet. Thoda aur build up to banta hai na?

But next chapter mein pakka promise... okay?

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Yay! You first... 😆

I am so glad you liked the update! Sania will have a most public OMM possible... dekhte rahiya jaan ne ke liye hota hai kya!

Bohot build up ho gaya kya? Shayad kuch aur build up ho sakta hai? right?

Update should be out soon!

Build up accha hai. More build up is also fine. 😆

I'm stalking this thread. 😆

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nathalie_rs_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

The way you write is amazing. I literally check for your updates everyday.

Its awesome. Keep up the amazing work. Looking forward to more.

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Naina280599
I so love this story. Gauri being the secret oberoi in college is damn interesting. Omkara watching his wife part was so lovely. Too curious to know everyone's reactions, especially that Sania's, on knowing about Ri being Oberoi. Post soon.
Much love 🤗
P.S sorry for being so late. Preparing for entry tests nowadays so didn't get time to come on IF.

Arre! Entry tests hain to jaake padho abhi... ye stories to rahenge IF pe hi. Main aap ko PM bhi karti hoon... to baad mein bhi mil jaayenge. But thank you so much for taking the time to comment even when you're busy with other more important things.

I am glad ki aap ke break from studying mein meri story feature hui hai aaj. Jab time mile aane waala update bhi padh lo aap... is ke aage bas ek aur chapter hai.

Aur haan! All the best for your exams yaar... Khidkitod honge aap ke results!

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Super amazing...thak j for the update nd pm... excited to read more[/QUOTE

Thanks for the comment!

You shall have more soon...

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: sara1990
Ginie, this is great. So entire family is here to cheer Gauri up. That is so cute. So Smriti finally figured it out. I hope she doesn't not stay angry with Gauri and the Oberoi's help her out in this. Waiting early for drama queen's Oh My Mata. Please update soon. I am so so so excited. Guess I have to wait another day for the next update. 🥳🤪 The return gift from Gauri was great. Hehehehehe😆

Sara! 🤗

I love it when you guys pay attention to the non-story related tiny details that I like to strew along the line. Thanks for noticing the gift ideas...

I'm glad you liked the story so far. Oberoi paltan is here. Sania ka OMM is nearing... us se pehle thoda sa romance ho jaaye?

Smrithi to Dabanng Gauri ki bestie hai... dekhte hain wo kaise react karti hai.

Update should be out soon!