RiKara FS - The Secret Oberoi Part 5 on Pg 30 (18/08) Complete - Page 10

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Interesting teaser. Looking forward to read more

I can't wait any longer. Omg omg. I am to excited for the next update. I really don't like Sanya. How can she talk about Our Nandi in front of Our Chiraiyya. Sanya and her gang's reaction will be fun to watch later. Rudy is not gonna like it when he get to know Sanya broke the phone. I think Smirti gonna be embrassed a bit in front of Rikara later as per what she commented on Omkie earlier. Is the entire Oberoi s coming or just the O'Bro.

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Good Morning Humaari Sone Mein Saji Hui Genie 😳🤗

I Agree the RiKara gang is more of a family now ...

Okay ... So this one is the secretive surprise!

First of all, I like the title ... It intrigued me that how can a heir of assets worth millions can manage to be a secret? Phir mujhe laga do Ri and Kara do Secret mancing? Then I thought are they married and she does not know that he is an Oberoi?

About the story, Gauri ... A college student about to have a graduation ceremony, its delicious food for thought. I like Smriti ... She is very bubbly and Chirpy.

Ahaan, Gauri is married to her beloved Jatadhari and so is not interested to know which hot and handsome chief guest they are going to have! I agree jab Pati Nandi jaisa ho toh kahi aur dhyaan hi nahi jaaega ...

Even Smriti does not know that to whom is Gauri married? Okay, such an attempt to not reveal your husband's identity is a task difficult enough ...

It is understandable that why Gauri is not being vocal about being Mrs. Jatadhari ... Not wanting all the special attention coming with it ... I feel she wants a college life of any normal girl... I am happy with her decision to do do ...

We get to know her relationship with her Hubby is very much romantic and sexy but with that we also see how particular and caring her bade bhaiyya is ... Making the most accurate effort to be a part of Gauri's convocation ... Three cheers for Mr. Kanji eyes ...

Analyzing the whole situation I figure out that I was wrong in assuming who the secret oberoi is and now my wrong is right.

You know Genie, in the Obahu perspective I have thought of all the younger Mrs. Oberoi's trying to adjust according to the lavish lifestyle but the way you have outlined the story ... I feel so good reading it ...

This Gauri reminds me of many disnep characters

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Hi GOLDIE GENIE...

Congratulations & Celebrations bae on this victory...

& I felt overwhelmed with emotions when u mentioned me as ur special friend...sniff...

I've always been in in love with all stories, but specially amor intermissus & hide & go seek ...feel so calm when I read ur stories.

& This is something very very interesting I feel I actually thought omkara will be the guest but it's SSO & poor gouri hasn't revealed anything about her hubby I feel...or has she??.

Anyways waiting for next & ek jhaap de Dewar pe satjayebe if u don't pm me...( lol)...

Originally posted by: -lake-

Intresting..
Waiting for update...

Originally posted by: Serviana

Interesting start . Let's see where it takes us. Just read some of your work. You are a really good artist.

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Hey Genie... Thank you for adding my name😳.. it means a lot... Would love to see more Shivri, and sorry for the small cmnt will torture you with the long ones.. so Ri has his her identity it's pretty interesting and yes I've started commenting on your earlier works sorry for the delay...

Originally posted by: mehakpreet

Interesting teaser.. Waiting to see how the story unfolds. Please update soon. Eagerly waiting for next update 😛

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Interesting start.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Oho!

Waiting for Sania's embarrassment journey in the next part already :p She looks like a b* word lol and she definitely is. Hope Smrithi forgives Gauri!

Thanks for the PM and update soon!

Loved the chapter!

-Sanu