New Beginnings . A Rikara Arranged Marriage SS. Part 3 updated on pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey this is the second part of my SS. Hope you like it. But the real story will start just in the upcoming parts.
Positive Criticism is always welcome.


Chapter 2:

Omkara dragged Gauri upstairs to her room.
HAATH CHODIYE HUMARA ABHI!! Gauri shouted once she was sure that no one downstairs could hear her voice.
She tried to jerk away the grip but alas it was too firm and strong. Omkara continued to drag her and once they had reached her room he left her hand.
Ahh!! Gauri winced in obvious pain. Rubbing her wrist with her other hand. Damn that thing would leave a bruise.
Yeh aap darwaza kyu band kar rahe hain?? Gauri asked confused and scared. Omkara by then had finished locking the door.
Without even trying to answer her Omkara turned towards Gauri and yanked her towards himself. Gauri collided with Om's chest her pupils dilating in shock. She squirmed to get out of his grip but Omkara refused to let go. He kept on staring at her . Rage evident in his eyes and if looks could kill Gauri would have long been dead.

Yeh kya batameezi hain? Gauri asked equally enraged and glared back at Om with equal confidence.
The honey brown eyes met the charcoal black ones. They kept on staring at each other without trying to blink. It was some sort of a fierce competition. Seconds passed or perhaps a minute who cared?
Eyes locked. Faces just inches away from each other. The tension in the room was thick enough to suffocate someone. Yet they stood unaffected and unaltered.
Not entirely unaffected though. Omkara was slowly forgetting the actual reason for their proximity. The artist in him slowly started admiring how perfect Gauri's eyes were. The soft brown pupil had golden streaks. The iris was almost pitch black. The dark kohl just made her eyes more prominent complimenting it perfectly. Her long and thick lashes perfectly coated with mascara. These were the eyes he was longing to find. To draw. To create. One could drown himself in the depths of those gorgeous yet plain brown orbs. And Omkara was surely drowning. Gauri's eyes was perhaps the most beautiful and expressive part of her face.
Beautiful? Expressive? Gauri?? What the freaking hell!!! Omkara was suddenly too conscious of their current position. How long had he been staring at her? Shit!
Omkara pushed Gauri away immediately.
Ouch!!! Gauri cried in pain as her leg hit the corner of the bed.
Aap bade hi zaahil or batammez kisam ke insaan hain!!! Gauri stated looking at Omkara.
Aur tum badi hi chalak ladki!! Om retorted.
Woh toh main hu. Aapko pata hain college main mein all rounder thi. Sports Quiz Studies sab main first aati thi. Last year main toh best all-rounder ka award bhi mujhe hi mila tha! Annual fest main CR bhi mujhe hi chuna gaya tha out of 10 other students. Gauri blabbered.
Shut up Gauri! Omkara bellowed.
Dear Lord it just had been five minutes and he was already starting to get a headache.
Areee why should I shut up haan? Humara ghar. Humara kamra aur hum shut up ho jaye???? Are hum toh bolke rahenge. Bolna humara janam sidh adhikaar hai!!!
Aree Yaaar!! Omkara sat down on the bed with thud. Mentally face palming himself. This girl was impossible.
Mere bed se uthiye!! Gauri cringed.
Kya?? Omkaa asked flabbergasted.
Aap jaisa sada huya aadmi mere bed pe nahi bathega. Gauri declared.
Problem kya hain tumhari haan? ? Ek toh mere gharwale jo tumhe mere gaale bandhne ki planning karne mein busy hain. Aur upar se tum Pagal Sanki aurat. Jo mera dimmag aur zindagi dono kharab karne pe utaru ho. Omkara gritted his teeth.
Hume koi shauk nahi hain aapse shaadi karne ka. Samjhe aap? Pagal hogi woh jo saachme aapse shaadi karegi!!! Sada huya Nandi Bail!!
Ouch! That hit a nerve. Omkara's mind drifted away to a particular night four years back. A girl or to be precise his lady love had used almost the exact same words.
Are pagal hogi woh ladki jo tumse shaadi karegi Omkara Singh Oberoi! Tum jaisa emotionless aur aimless aadmi kabhi zindagi mein kisi ladki ko khush nahi rakh payega.
Omkara closed his eyes in pain. His heart had broken that day and had stayed broken since. No one not even his brothers had dared to talk about those horrible memories.
Gauri was treading very dangerous waters.
Pata nahi humare gharwalo ko kya hogaya hain!! Aapse shaadi toh meri dushman bhi na kare. Gauri continued without understanding the grave danger.
Are hum toh kehte hain ki...Ahhh!!!! Gauri screamed in pain as two strong pair of hands clutched her shoulders and pushed her towards the nearest wall.
TOH PHIR DADI SE TIME KYU MANGA HAAN???
A pair of red angry eyes stared back at Gauri. Gauri could sense something was wrong. Omkara's eyes depicted some sort of anguish and vulnerability.
Aap mujhe jaane dijiye please! Gauri tried to divert the topic. She was currently standing with her back to the wall caged between two strong pair of arms. The position they were in made Gauri nervous.
Nahi dunga! Pehle yeh batao ki tumne dadi se time kyu manga? Agar main itna hi ghatiya kisam ka aadmi hu then why are you even considering the option of getting married to me? Omkara questioned back.
Wo.. Woh main. Actually... Gauri fumbled. The proximity was making her nervous. She could feel Omkara's hot breath on her shoulder blade and right then it was not a very pleasant thing.
She could feel her cheeks warm up. She had not been this close to a man since...
Kya huya answer me??? Omkara's question broke her chain of thoughts.
Accha mein samajh gaya. Omkara stated without waiting for an answer.
Tumhe Oberois ka name tag chahiye hain na?? Wahi fame. All those riches. All that attention. All of the popularity. Akhir aapne baam ke baad Oberois ka naam kaun nahi jod na chahega. Are you jealous of Anika bhabi? Well of course you are...
Are you crazy?? Gauri pushed Omkara away with all the power she possessed .
What do you think Mr. Oberoi? Aap ke pas zyaada paise hain toh aap kuch bhi bolenge? Incase you are forgetting I am a successful fashion designer. Humari monthly salary 2 lakh se upar ki hain. I can fend to my own needs. Uske liye mujhe aapki family name ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur rahi fame ki baat. I am as famous as you are. Puri India mein humare designs famous hain. Lakme Fashion Week main Manish Malhotra se lekar Anamika Khanna sabke sath collab kiya hain humne. Aur agar aap bhul gaye hain toh aapko hum yaad dila de ke humare Mamaji Shakti Chaudhury is also a very rich business man. Unki company ka annual turn over shayad Oberois se thoda kaam hain but itna bhi kaam nahi ki woh humari khusiyon ka khayal nahi rakh sake. I do not need your name or your fame Mr. Oberoi.!!
Gauri breathed in for air as soon as she completed her speech. She glared back threateningly at Omkara.
Omkara almost flinched when he heard Gauri calling him Mr. Oberoi.
Heck she was right! She was more than capable to take care of her own needs. Then why was she considering his Dadi's wishes?
Omkara felt guilty for accusing Gauri but like hell would he show it. His ego was way bigger. Atleast in case of Gauri.
Instead Omkara looked questioningly at Gauri.
As if understanding what his expression meant Gauri continued to speak.
Humne samay sirf Isiliye manga taki hum aapse baat kar sake. Humein lagta hain that we should agree to get married.
What???? Omkara's eyes widened.
I will never marry you!!!
Meri baat abhi puri nahi huyi hain. Gauri interjected looking coldly at Om.
This shut up Omkara.
Dekhiye aapke aur humare na chahne se kuch nahi hoga. Humare gharwale kabhi nahi manenge. They will force us even more. Aapne dadi ki baat nahi suni... .
Toh kya tumse shaadi karke phaas jau zindagi bhar ke liye? You know I don't believe in marriages and relationships. Om retorted.
I DID NOT FINISH TALKING ! WILL YOU PLEASE LET ME COMPLETE?? Gauri shouted this time in order to stop Omkara.
Omkara jumped a bit at her tone and then sat down on the bed throwing daggers at Gauri with his eyes.
Good. Now what was I saying? Oh haan. Dekhiye shaadi humein karni padegi. Ek saath reh lenge kuch din. Waise bhi 1.5 years ke baad mera Oberoi group of companies ke sath contract khatam ho jayega. I had plans of settling down in Paris after that. Main wahi karungi. I will move to Paris and we can live peacefully after that. Gharwale initially protest karenge but once they understand that humari khushi ekdusre main nahi hain they will comply to our wishes. Aur ek baar hum alag hogaye they won't be able to force us to live together again. Kaisa laga humara idea?
Gauri grinned knowing that this was the only way to get out of the marriage.
Ekdum bakwaas. Bilkul tumhari tarah. Omkara taunted.
Kyu??? Aapke paas kuch aur aacha plan hain? Gauri's smile transformed into a frown.
Tumhe pata hain na ki Oberoi khandaan mein divorces nahi hote? Omkara stated like it was the most obvious thing in the world.
Anullments toh hote hain na? Gauri taunted back.
It was Omkara's turn to frown.
Aur waise bhi aapko kaunsa firse shaadi karni hain. You don't believe in marriages right? Toh divorce ho na ho isse koi fark nahi parta. Samjhe? Gauri remarked intelligently.
Omkara was pretty surprised.
Manna parega main tumhe jitna bewakoof samajhta tha tum utni zyaada bewakoof bhi nahi ho. Omkara smirked.
Kya bola aapne...
Thik hain thik hain jhagra karne ke liye abhi 1.5 saal baki hain. Pehle gharwalo ko unki wali khushkhabri de aaye? Omkara interrupted and let out a chuckle.
Aur humari barbaadi. Gauri muttered under her breath as she followed Omkara out of the room.
Hey Shankarji bacha lena humein please!! Gauri pleaded as she walked down the stairs.




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... nice update dear...
So.. finally both agreed to get married..
Yahoo I'm sooo happy.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice story!! Do continue soon😉
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Ye to bas shuruwat hai bhai..
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2ND part was bang on mange side hi Gauri chahiye
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Haye I love this. They both thrashing each other left and right 😆
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I love this whole game between these two.. n how Gauri gives Omkara back in full strength.. not taking an inch of crap.. n with full blown logic.. sounds so good.. n then you touch upon the past too.. looks painful n traumatic. Omkara losing control too.. can't wait to know what haunts him.. n well Gauris idea is more kinda situational tackling to the whole issue.. let's see what's really in store for these two.. love the way proximity affects the two of them .. gonna be a lot of fun As they keep bumping into each other while trying to avoid one another .. can wait for the next parts. N thanks for these long updates .. loved this one .. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello friends! Thank you for all the lovely comments. This is the third part of my story. Hope yiu like it.

Chapter 3:
As soon as Rikara came down the whole family flocked around them anxious for an answer.
Gauri almost let out a giggle watching the faces of her family and Om simply rolled his eyes.
Aap sab hum dono ko aise kyu dekh rahe hain? Hum kya koi namoone hai? Om barked and thus all the of the Chaudhurys and Oberois scurried back to their seats.
Hum dono ne faisla le liya hain. Gauri announced.
All the people present there looked at each other's faces before looking back at Rikara, keen for an answer. A long period of silence followed before Om spoke up.
Hum dono is shaadi ke liye...
Mujhe pata tha. I knew it everyone. O or Gauri di kabhi is shaadi ke liye raazi nahi honge. Mera kidnap wala plan sabse accha tha. Rudra suddenly spoke up before Om could complete.
Are aise kaise kidnap kar lete. Agar mandap mein jaake yeh dono shaadi karne ke liye raazi nahi hote toh? Anika exclaimed.
Are aise kaise raazi nahi hote? Kuch aur nahi toh blackmail kab kaam aata? Shivaay suggested.
Jaise aapne mujhse shaadi ki thi? Blackmail karke? Ji nahi. Main aisa kabhi nahi hone deti. Anika frowned.
Areee par hum dono saath hain na abhi. Blackmail bohot kaam ki cheez hain. Shivaay winked and Anika blushed in response.
Par bhaiya bhabi rudy blackmail aur kidnapping dono hi illegal hain aur main aap teeno ko kaise yeh sab karne du? Mere job ke against hain yeh toh! Bhavya spoke up worried.
Ek kaam karte hain. Dono ke signatures le kar registry papers banwa lete hain. Tej whispered to Jhanvi and Shakti.
Jhanvi smacked Tej at the back of his head.
Aap yeh sab behuda ideas aapne paas hi rakhe toh zyaada accha hoga. She replied in a stern voice.
Aree Bhavya tum ho na mujhe bachane ke liye!! Main toh kehta hu kidnap karwa na hi best hain. ...
Nahi blackmail...
Are nahi signatures wala idea perfect hain...
Dono ko behosh karde kya...
Om's eyes widened hearing his families suggestions. Whereas Gauri just gave him a I told you' look and shook her head in amusement. Even she was surprised learning about the extent their families were ready to go just to get them married.
Chup karo khoteyo!! Kya sab anab shanaab bole ja rahe ho.. Dadi quietened the mad family.
And Om and Gauri sighed in relief.
Main toh kehti hu dono ko bhaang pila ke ek kamre mein bandh kardo. Baki ka kaam yeh khud karlenge. Dadi winked.
Gauri gasped and Omkara's mouth hung open. Even his loving Dadi had turned her back against him.
The rest of the family let Dadi's words sink in for a few seconds before erupting in a loud laughter all over again.
Omkara frowned dangerously and so did Gauri watching their family laugh at their expense.
CHUP HO JAIYE SAB LOG.!!! Gauri's irritated voice rose high above the laughter sewing shut everyone's mouth.
Tab se hum yeh batane ki koshish kar rahe hain ki hum dono raazi hain is shaadi ke liye par aap log ho ki...
Gauri could not complete. A loud deafening screech was let out by Anika and Bhavya and before Omkara and Gauri could comprehend what was happening they were pulled into bear hugs by the whole family.
I knew it. I knew it. Shouted Rudra.
Kya you knew it. You were planning to kidnap them. Bhayva argued.
Aeee hato hato mujhe mere bahu ko dekhne do!!! Jhanvi broke through the crowd before pulling Gauri into a bone crushing hug almost suffocating Gauri in the process.
Gauri struggled for air where as Om sniggered looking at her condition. But his reverie was short lived as Dadi pulled him in an equally uncomfortable hug and to add the cherry on the cake started crying.
Mainu pata tha mere bacche kabhi meri baat nahi taal sakte. Dadi wailed.
O Drama Queen ab mera turn hain. Rudra interjected before he and Shivvay hugged Om.
I am so happy for you Om. Shivaay patted his brother's back.
After almost half an hour when the Jhappi session finally came to an end everyone settled down still budding with excitement except for our Rikara.
Aree abhi toh shadi ki kitni sari taiyariya baki hain! Pandit ji ko bulake date fix bhi karwana hain. Phir shopping. Invitations. Ufff. Jhanvi exclaimed.
Haan Mom ye shaadi is saal ka sabse bada event hoga. Shivaay agreed.
Mom. Shivaay. Mujhe bada event nahi chahiye! Om said drowning all of Jhanvi's planning in cold water.
Are Om beta aise kaise hoga... Shakti tried to reason.
I am sorry uncle but aap sab jante hain ki hum yeh shaadi sirf family pressure main kar rahe hain. And I do not believe in all these rituals and stuff. Agar shaadi hogi toh simple court marriage jaha par sirf humare family members rahenge. Matlab bas aap sab aur koi nahi.
Par beta aisa kaise hoga. Gauri ki shaadi ko lekar humare bohot saare armaan hain. Didi aur Bhaisaab hote toh unko bohot dukh hota. Pinky stated in a sad note.
Woh yaha hain toh nahi na Mami. Toh phir kya fark padhta hain? Gauri replied.
Omkara sahi bol rahe hain. Jab hum dono is shaadi ko mann se maan hi nahi sakte toh phir inn rasmo ka koi wajood nahi hain. Gauri's eyes welled up with tears. She quickly bowed her head down to avoid the rest of the family from seeing it.
But Omkara noticed those glistening eyes. He felt a pang of something in his heart but quickly turned his head to the other side. He did not want to feel guilty. Gauri had agreed to the marriage. Not he. It was all her fault. Omkara tried to pacify himself.
Par Gauri tera toh who Bollywood wale weddings ka shauk tha na. Anika asked surprised.
It was true. Gauri had always dreamt of her wedding to be one of the grandest affairs. With all that bling and boom. Full Dabangg Bollywood style. But all dreams don't come true.
Gauri sighed.
Di woh toh bohut purani baat thi. Tab hum kitne chhote the. Let's think about it logically.
Anika still looked suspicious.
Dadi agar aap ki ijazaat ho toh main do hafte mein shaadi karna chahta hu. Omkara requested breaking the awkward silence that hung in the room.
Everyone even Gauri looked at him surprised.
Par Om itni jaldi kaise??
Please Mom.
Kyu O intezaar nahi hota kya?? Abhi toh bol rahe the ki yeh shaadi sirf family pressure main kar rahe ho. Aur abhi se inti besabri? Ishqbaazi ka bukhaar itni jaldi chad gaya kya. Rudra teased.
SHUT UP RUDRA! Om smacked his brother.
Areee. Ab aap bhi paraya dhan ho jaoge. Rudra faked sadness. Om immediately tackled Rudra and both of them fell on the floor pulling each other's hair.
Mummmaaa O maar rahe hain!!! Gauri bhabi aapne Bail ko sambhalo. Wailed Rudra.
Bhabi ke bacche ruk tu... Om chased Rudra outside the house and the whole family laughed at their foolishness.
Gauri smiled but her smile did not reach her eyes.
Dadi noticed this. She put her palm on Gauri's hand to assure her.
Itna soch maat baccha sab kuch thik ho jayega.
Gauri nodded silently. Still unsure of what the future had in store for her.


Precap: Shaadi and Wedding Night.




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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Read all 3 parts
Superb concept
No villains
Rikara hi villain hai yahan

Full family is willing to get them married
By book or crook
Loved all the ideas
But dadi's idea was best

Love the cat & dog fight of rikara
Can't see them all serious like this
But family is there
They will interfere at right times

Hope Gauri & Omkara's plan doesn't succeed
I know Gauri is 21 century girl
She has a career
CAN take care of herself
But still she might have dreamt
Something bout her prince


Wonder what destiny has in store for them
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Hilarious and amazing!! Totally loved this concept!!!

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